Date: May 11 2015 12:32 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
I really like this story man! But real life comes first; and I'd rather have a good story than a rushed bad story :p
You're awesome dude! Keep up the good work c:
Author's Response:
Thanks! i have some more free time so I hope to be more frequent and I will try not to rush this story at any time so that I may keep it at a good level of quality, so that the readers can enjoy this story to the fullest.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2015 11:36 PM Title: Reika's Ritual of Pleasure
Great stuff as always. Don't let the demands of people get to you, work at your own pace. You can't rush perfection! ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks I will work at the pace that is right for me and hopefuly I can deliver something amazing for you guys to read.
Date: May 07 2015 6:16 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
R.I.P
Author's Response:
I am glad you like the story and want to read the next part, but these type of comments won't make chapters come any faster. I know you might mean well,but it feels almost like I am being forced and rushed to write as opposed to having the fans, I wish to please with all I have, support the story and be understanding of when I can't bring things out as quickly as other writers. I love writing, but real life takes priority over my hobbies and I hope in the future you could be more patient.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2015 1:47 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Is this dead?
Author's Response:
No it is still alive, I just haven't gotten around to it lately, but I will hopefully bring out the next part soon.
Date: April 27 2015 11:56 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
MOOOOORRRREEEEEE!!!
Date: April 07 2015 7:38 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Waiting for more. I hope to see lots more feet.
Date: April 06 2015 11:06 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Holy heck! Nipple vore? That's an amazing concept! This is a great story and I can't wait to see where you take it to next, especially what a stone-cold psychopath like Reika has in store for them!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was kind of iffy on the nipple vore thing, since I didn't know if readers would like it, but it seems to have become well liked and I am glad readers like you appreciate it. I hope Reika's chapter meets your expectation of what she is capable of.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2015 9:25 AM Title: Sophia's Play Time
Cool stuff! I like how she talks to the planet as she's doing stuff. Here's an idea: what if to get around the bad taste of future planets, she puts salt or food or something on it to make them taste better? Just a thought. I'll be patiently awaiting the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Sounds like an interesting idea, to use food and spices to dull the bad taste. I might go with this idea in the future.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2015 3:12 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
I just wanted to say that the nipple insertion was something both new and very exciting to read. Best thing I have read in a long time! I would very much love to see it or something similar done again, even if it's in a different story (one suggestion that comes to mind is perhaps a young mother who can lactate). Anyways I think this story is getting better with each chapter and I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying the story so far and I am also glad that the nipple vore/insertion is appreciated. I will most likely add the scenario you want to see in a future story, I was thinking I want to have some lactation action, but I have no young mothers in this story so I will include it in a future story.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2015 12:55 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Awesome. This story never ceases to entertain. At first I thought you were going to standard deaths which was a bit sad but that last one was really creative. Being inserted into a nipple? Amazing. Does that count as nipple vore? Anyway, I hope you keep coming up with creative and humiliating deaths. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Do you know if it's coming out soon or not?
Author's Response:
I am glad the nipple vore was appreciated. I wanted to do something different and I am glad readers like you like the weird things i am adding to this story. I will try to keep the story interesting and come up with interesting ways for the girls to dispose of the planets.
I would hope to bring out the next chapter soon, but sadly I doubt it would be up quickly since I have not even started the chapter yet, but I do know everything I want to include so hopefully I could crank it out fast.
Date: March 22 2015 5:35 PM Title: Let's destroy them together!
I love these kinds of stories! It's a shame there aren't more of them out there c:
I think it would be awesome if she fiddled with the elite 50 control tablet, and increased the strength of the barrier so that susan's sister could play with them like marbles :3
But that's just me! I love this story, and can't wait to see where you take it next!
Author's Response:
I also love stories like this, which is why I decided to write one. I wish there were more like them around, but sadly there are not.
Also Susan's little sister will have a role to play with the elite 50 soon.
Date: March 09 2015 7:38 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
This is good, but we need more feet. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
thanks! I will try to include more feet related stuff soon.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 10:57 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Interesting concept. I'm looking forward to your future chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope to bring out my chapters quick... But I am not a fast writer so i doubt it.
Date: March 04 2015 3:09 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
YOOOOOOOOOOO!! I really love your stories, you're one of the best hen it comes to extreme micro/nano !! There ain't a lot of writers like you, in fact very few. I'm following you bones and soul please continue this one for long you can do a looooooooooot with this concept don't waste it man !!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support, I will try to keep this story interesting for as long as I can, admittedly I will have some lazy moments since having 50 planets being destroyed could amount to a ton of writers blocks, but I will try to make everything as interesting as possible even when I am being lazy. I hope you enjoy what I have in the future chapters.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 10:21 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Great work! I really like that you included a size changing element to the story. Aside from some grammatical errors and typos, It's an enjoyable read.
On a personal note, I hope that you might add some element of direct, physical interaction between the 'microns' and the girls (as opposed to indirectly as has been). I can imagine that the size changing machine could deliver this.
Author's Response:
I do have some sort of physical interaction with tinies planned for the future, but to be honest it won't be much. I am also disappointed that I am still making grammatical mistakes and typos, i will try to notice my errors in the future and hope that I can overcome the hurdle of proper grammar and punctuation.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 8:48 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Absolutely superb! If we could get move of these kinds of creative methods for ending the planets, I'll be overjoyed. Unaware would be amazing too. Maybe some butt action?
Author's Response:
thanks! There will be some more unaware and butt action soon.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 2:17 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Really awesome. I find it funny that you apologize for a large chapter when large chapters are the best. As long as they're interesting and don't waffle on. This was certainly interesting. I loved the nose scene since it's quite rare to see stuff like that. I'm curious as to what other fetishes you'll add to this story. There are so many to choose from and they'd all make awesome chapters. Keep it up =)
Author's Response:
I always had the impression that long chapters were in someway intimidating to readers LOL. I have always loved nose vore. It is different and I hardly ever see it done in both stories and pictures, so i decided to show people how sexy it could be. I have some interesting ideas from certain fetishes that I will be including soon, I hope they will be well received.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2015 10:30 PM Title: Let's destroy them together!
Nice! The surprise part with Raquel and Reika. I really like how each planet has its own barrier that can either be left intact or destroyed in an instant. Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thanks! That part involving Raquel and Reika was a last minute thing I didn't intend on including in this chapter and thought of it after I was about to end Reika's part. I am glad it popped into my head, because I think it was an interesting thing to include.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2015 2:25 PM Title: Let's destroy them together!
Great stuff as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope to bring out another good chapter soon.
Date: February 27 2015 3:45 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
MOOOOOOOORE