Reviewer: Empress Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 3:50 PM Title: The Party

Your story was great! It was a delight to read as well as incredibly well written. I hope to see more of your writing. ^~^ 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D

I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy any future posts I make ;3

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 4:33 PM Title: Damon/Rose

As a Christian, I'd be letting God down if I didn't make a brief mention that I'm not into any subtext of magic. (Of course I don't think God would approve of suicidal/homicidal vore either, but I've found ways around that in my own stories).

But with that comment out of the way, I loved three things in particular about your story:

(1) The way Damon and Rose taunted each other with mentions and gestures about their fantasy in the early chapters.

(2) The depth with which you explored the thin line between danger and fulfilment of fantasy.

(3) The graphic description of the eating scene itself, and the reflections in Rose's thoughts afterwards.

So many plot summaries of stories turn me off straight away, but yours gripped me from the beginning to the end of the story.

Author's Response:

Though I sincerely apologize if my story happened to have in any way offended your religion, it's great to know there were still parts you enjoye. ^w^ 

The sequel also contains magic. A darker form, in fact, so I'd like to apologize in advance. The topics just interest me a lot so I choose to use them as plot elements. Sorry... :c

Reviewer: Prodi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 12:29 AM Title: Damon/Rose

Seeing no one else reviewed this yet, I just wanted to let you know that there are people reading and enjoying your story. Nice work!

Author's Response:

Thanks! It means a lot that you enjoyed my story! :D