Date: March 29 2018 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Is there a chapter 12?
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Families it's what's for dinner! Pffft sorry that was in poor TASTE!...sorry.
Well someone's finally realized a few things. I still just hate how easily people have just excepted it's okay to kill tinies. I can't decide if it's just too far away from reality or sobering close to it. Scary stuff. o_O Either way this is super captivating and of course I'm still rooting for Jessica in the end.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
Interesting unaware mini stories you have in here. I like the concept. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
I loved the ending to this chapter. I hope to see more like it
[Report This]Date: March 08 2015 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, just wanted to encourage you to keep going. I really love the sidebits with other characters and think that this is one of the best stories on the site at the moment.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, really, your support helps more than you know.
Date: March 08 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
This has become a story I look forward to seeing updates honestly. You do good with descriptions and characters so far and its just been a good read so far. Hope you keep it up man
Author's Response:
Thank yoouuu! I really appreciate your support :)
[Report This]Date: February 15 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Tough talk man arms! Where was this when Jessica wasn't the size of an ant? And DON'T tell me you couldn't have kicked her ass!..anyway
Jessica's really gonig through a journey here I really wonder what she'll be like at the other end. A better person? A crueler person? Dead? The best part of the unexplained event shrinking is that it's just as likely to happen again, or reverse, or blow up the earth. If Jessica does get her size back no matter how small the chance is of that happening she definitly won't be the same.
Jarred I don't know. You saved Jessica but now your catching feels or something from a kiss. Make up your mind man! You've really only broke even for me.
Hannah? Keep on trucking?
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well it seems like Hannah is done taking her sister's shit. She still loves her, but isn't going to let her be the dominant one anymore.
Having her friends try to kill her sister multiple times in one day really put things in perspective for her, but I think the real turning point was when her sister tried to order her to kill Jared that morning.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
Really enjoying this story :) I admit mainly came to read it for the vore but so far enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another awesome episode, you make these scenes so intimate yet not so explicit. Not to mention, it makes me irritated in a good way how some students so carelessly toy with and kill their fellow peers who were the same size as them the previous day and it's all done so without a single care... it makes them feel so tiny. Anyway, good story and hope you make more!!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hate Brianna's parents. She's dead now. I hope their happy.
Jessica?...(sigh)...good luck. I hope you can eventually carve out something close to a life.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awww Hannah has a best friend who's in love with her that's sweet!...Too bad I immediately dislike her for trying to hurt Jessica. I guess I can't blame Rebecca. Jessica is a bitch, but come it's only a matter of time anyway. You're big she's small. Her life's a hell now.
Teens are outright killing tiny humans now. KILLING HUMANS! No accidents here. Teacher's who are at best indifferent. Even Rebecca's only watching herself because she doesn't want to lose Hannah. Why? Because they can get away with it? That's the worst humanity has to offer and I have to wonder ih Hannah's the only big with a shred of it left. So yeah going to school was a great idea.
Hearing Hannah's smart on top of everything else really makes me wonder how Jessica held onto power for so long. Must be sisterly love or something I guess, because now I'm positive Hannah knew she could have stopped the bullying at anytime. Just letting Jessica be Jessica she's got better things to do than fret over petty sibling dynamics.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
First one or two and last chapter were fucking awesome.Probably because it was nasty-foot related.I would like to see more of that,if possible.
10 stars!!
-lolwat111-
Date: January 10 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Not gonna lie this is pretty fucking amazing
Date: January 10 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
This is a bit of an afterthought, but shouldn't Jarred and Hannah make an attempt to cauterize Jessica's shoulder or sew it up before she bleeds out or gets some kind of horrible, deadly infection?
Date: January 09 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
..... Or, if you wanted to keep the side stories all 'Unaware', you could use the same idea, but have all of the men inside the diner shrink,... and all the waitresses, (Three or four twenty-something beautys) working there, completely oblivious to the flash...
...all of the tiny men are scrambling for their lives beneath the enormous tables, as the giagantic waitresses tower above them!
Or, not. ... just a suggestion. ;`)
[Report This]Date: January 08 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wh0a? ...going to school inside her pocket? Hm, sounds a little 'strange'... After thinking about it though, the first thing that came to my mind was that the 'government' was going to get them all collected together, (while at the school) and from there, they would take them away to be studied at some laboratory somewhere.
.... Oh, suggestions for a side story! Yeah! I got one!
*Name: Gerald. A forty-something, truck driver, whom shrinks while he's fueling up his truck at the 'Gas-n- Go'.
He walks into the diner to pay for his gas, and the waitress, (Sandy, an eighteen year old, raven haired beauty) walks up to the cash registrar to check him out,... when she is totally shocked, to watch as his clothes suddenly collapse to the floor,
...she quickly looks all around, to find that nobody else is around, and she carefully removes the tiny naked man from his over-sized clothing.
He is clearly unconsious, as she gently picks him up and drops him into the pocket of her apron,.... later, she pulls his truck away from the pumps and pays off his ticket,... she covers her tracks easily, and parks the truck where all the other lay over trucks are parked, and it could set there for weeks and nobody would find anything suspicious about it parked there.
Any way,... Sandy, is fascinated with the miniscule trucker, and she secretly smuggles him home with her, to her house and,.....
,,, and, and then what happens? ;`)
[Report This]Date: January 08 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yep it's over Jessica you had a good run though. In some way you probably deserve what's happening but damn if it doesn't suck.
I'm sorry Jarred I know your not a bad guy but you really need a punch in the face. "I have cousins." That is not the same. Jessica's out of line for trying to use Hannah to kill you, but don't pretend like you know what she's going through. At least be a man and tell her your after her sister cause that shit's only gonna get worse with time.
Reading the side stories shows just how lucky Jessica was, and how insanely lucky Jarred was. (not a scratch seriously?) People are dropping like flys and from thier loved ones to add an extra bit of tragedy. Just makes me think going to school is a bad idea. "Act like everythings normal" If I were a conspiracy guy I'd say the government wants the tinies to die so they can pretend this whole shrinking thing didn't happen. But that's probably reaching.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice story so far, secretly hopeing for some unaware anal insertion.