This Story was Amazing! Where is that sequel tho?

I absolutely love this story. You are by far the best author I have seen on this site and this is the best story I've seen so far.

I'm really looking toward to reading the sequel and a suggestion I have is maybe you can have someone get involved with someone's shoe, like inside their shoe. Just a thought. If you don't like it, you don't have to put it in.

PEACE!

I loved this story!  Julia obviously knowsing and not caring was great, I loved the fact that she fianlly kept her word just to regret it.  Then there was kiana, seeing him but not knowing it was him that was amazing with her talking to him.  At the end though with Erica was amazing, she already had a gts fetish and never actually knew about him.  Very nice mix of aware, aware mistaken, and unaware.   I especially love stories where there is a question of who or what the character is.  My fav chapter was probably mistaken identity.

Looking forward to sequel and possible other stories.  Just hope there aren't too many people involved, and knowledge of shrinking isn't spread too much

Anyone sang the "words words words" to Rihanna's work, work, work? I did.

Ok, this story was great. I actually liked the ending and how Julia kept her word.

Ok, now for the sequel. 4 girls, 3 guys. Or will there be more women?

Since this is at a high school, could there be a sexy, slightly horny teacher? Perhaps some detention, after school help, private tutoring? Office hours?

Samantha seems just like Kiana. Kiana is already oblivious to everything. I hope we see something new in Samantha.

I hope Kiana will still be the sexy one of the group. She was great this story.

I think we need someone like Julia to put these shrunken guys in places where they get in some sexy situations. Ex. Kiana.

Maybe a school nurse. She can "help" these boys. These guys may ask her for help, but instead, they get some fun.

Perhaps a hot mom or milf. There were a few mentions of Kiana's mom and Julia's mom but no action with them. Maybe they want some hot young guys at their disposal.

You can add a girls locker room, cheerleaders the squad, or practice in sports. School gym? Aerobics, yoga class? "Ok, class. Take the tiny man and gently slide him up and down your cleavage. Yes, that's it. Keep it up girls".

What if someone else finds the shrink gun?

I'm suggesting a lot of people becuase since it's a school, I expect lots of contact with new people.

A girl uses a little guy to help her chest on a test.

Girls gets caught cheating on test, teacher takes the man and disciplines him. :)

Use more materials, rope, tape, rubber bands, floss. (Girls can tie up a boy)

Dip a guy in some sauce or drink and suck on him like a lollipop.

I will come up with more later. Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm really happy that you liked my story. I also really appreciate your suggestions. As stated, I will take every situation into consideration. I look forward to more ideas! Thanks again.

Really loving the story! My favorite parts are easily the butt/fart stuff, hoping to see more of that in this story and future stories! Keep up the good work!

I love the parts when he is flattened and gets sticked to their bodies like a tattoo. My favourite scenes with any doubt. Very good chapter! Also, I think it's amazing that you can write a whole chapter per day. And not a small one but a big one. Congratulations for that too!

Yes! Almost exactly like my suggestion. I was hopping he gets stuck to her panties at the end throughout the night, haha.

Such a steamy chapter, and I loved it. Kiana is so good at being sexy in unaware scenes that if I was Zack, I would just stay with Kiana. I would even just stay stuck to her panties, haha.

What a great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: You know, I probably would have just stayed with Kiana too. Zack does want to continue living a normal life though, so he must press on! As for Kiana, it's really fun to write chapters about her. I love her!

Honestly, I hope Kiana used Zack like she did last time in the tub. That scene was great.

Perhaps, she gets turned on during the movie and decides to have some fun with Zack.

Well, since you finished the story, I can't suggest alternatives, but anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Some of your ideas aren't too far from the truth actually...heh heh. But yeah, I would have loved to include review ideas in this story, but I also didn't want this story to keep falling apart, never being finished. It was a hard choice to make. I'm pretty happy with how the story turned out though. I'm glad you like it.

Great story! when will you post your next chapter?

Interesting idea to have Julia assign the vore task to the unwitting Erica and Kiana. Plenty of graphic description of the eating of Erica's Zack snack.

I'm allergic to milk, or you'd have 5 stars LOL. But seriously, great stuff.