Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 3 Josephine

I agree.  The story would be good if the spelling wasn't so bad.  It makes the story unreadable in some places.  If English isn't your primary language, then I'm not sure what you can do besides getting help, or practicing the language more.  Otherwise, read the story out loud to yourself and see if it makes sense.  I wonder if you just have a bad spell checker?  I definately want to know how this turns out, so keep at it!

Author's Response:

English is my frist Langauge, but yeah i think its a bad spell checker. I will work on it more. Thank you, hopefully this turns out good since I have the trilogy  plan but changes do come up all I can realthe frist book isn't going to be as long but does set up book 2 and I love what happens in book 2.