Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 9:31 PM Title: School can stink when you're in a shoe

Best sisters ever.

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 11:34 PM Title: The shrinking

Gets Better and Better!!! Can't wait for more! Also I'm glad you liked my idea about Rosie from my other review and can't wait to see it implemented!

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2014 5:10 AM Title: The shrinking

Omg this is so good! I was reading the second chapter and couldn't help but thinking, what if since Megan is the only one who seems to care about him, she tries telling their mom about Rosie's Magic, but it turns out Rosie cast a spell so that she is unable to tell her and everytime she tries it makes her actually torture Paul somehow with her feet? Like it makes Megan's feet stinkier or makes her out Paul under her feet and unable to remove him or something. And Rosie laughs so hard because eventually she tells Megan why she can't seem to tell mom about the Magic and why Megan has been unable to stop torturing Paul.

Author's Response:

I like the idea! I think I'll use a variation of it later on in the story. Thanks!

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 5:19 PM Title: The shrinking

Brilliant. Feet torture incoming!

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 12:49 PM Title: The shrinking

I like this premise. It's simple and direct, which means you can delve right into the olfactory carnage. I really like that you're playing up the smell angle. I personally hope you take this in a dark direction. Given how potent Rose's feet are when he's at normal height, they need to completely destroy him now that he's so puny. I hope to see a fatality from just her stinky feet.

Reviewer: carloss987 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 5:29 AM Title: The shrinking

This story seems very good so far, please keep writing. If I can make one request it would be to add some unaware scenes throughout the story

Author's Response:

Coming up!