[Report This]Date: February 03 2018 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Please update, this story is amazing!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2017 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow, this is really getting interestin—and it's the last chapter. No worries, I can just wait for an update, I'm sure it will come soo—and it hasn't been updated in two years. God damn it faintsmile, we were just getting to the good part of an already good story, and you have to go and leave?! Truly, my life is struggle. *sigh* I'm sure you had a good reason for abandoning this story (and this website), I'm just really upset that I won't get to read the end of this.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
By my count there are 15 contractions in this entire story:
don't x 6
that's x 3
let's x 2
that'd x 1
needn't x 1
I'll x 1
what's x 1
[Report This]Date: July 02 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have one word for you: contractions. Seriously, you need to use words like "you're," "can't," and stuff like that, otherwise you sound like a robot.
PS: If you are a robot, please spare me in your eventual takeover of the Earth.
Date: August 01 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really hope to see some more chapters
[Report This]Date: July 24 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a super interesting world about size classes and the change for Hadley and Isabelle in S Class and Isabelle in F class. What a fun world this is.
Date: April 19 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Any plans to update soon? :)
Date: January 14 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, we were all waiting for it to come but you made it faster than I would've think ! :D Like Aaron, I'm dyeing to see Eva's reaction !! :D
And for the F class doctor, I'm wondering if he's here for Hadley...or for someone else ! ..I'm thinking of Eva for example... X)
Anyway, don't wanna influence what you've planned ! Please keep it up, I'm watching for the afterpart !! :D And thank you by the way !!!
Date: January 14 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
@faintsmile. Thanks a lot. That really helped clear things up. I was assuming that's what was going on, but wasn't sure.
Date: January 13 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
@Faintsmile. Social classes... Mainly how they have the technology to get hardly to the size she is at the end of the chapter, but nobody else seems to be using it in society... I remember it being briefly explained a few chapters back, but not in any great detail.
Guess I'll have to wait to find out!
Keep up the great writing.
Author's Response:
I will give a straightforward recap of what I have previously stated (as anything I detailed before I had to do within dialogue, which is more convoluted): The process of shrinking uses the mass in one's body as part of the energy consumed in the process. Growing, however, requires not only the offset mass to be provided, but immense amounts of additional energy. Thus, growing costs SIGNIFICANTLY more than shrinking, which basically pays for itself. So, almost no one can afford the process of growth, let alone living as S class.
I hope that helps :] I know that I have some dialogue planned that may help even more, but we shall see.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2015 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
This was an amazing chapter. Great plot twist, & way for Hadley to meet a dude!... Kills two birds with one stone.
Left me with a few questions about the class system, but I'm sure those will be answered in time.
Author's Response:
Thank you for saying that :D
Class as in socioeconomic class or as in course of study?
[Report This]Date: January 13 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
This has taken an unexpected turn. So are Isabelle and Sydney gonna live with Eva and company? Or was the name given an unrelated character?
I can't wait to see Eva or her mom's reactions to Hadley's new size(or Hadley's family's reactions).
Glad to see this story back by the way. I like it a lot.
aaron
Author's Response:
Eva's parents are Jazeera Ford and Ambrose Heart, if that answers your question :]
I look forward to both reactions as well! I think they are going to be a lot of fun :D
Thank you for saying and thank you for reviewing!
Date: January 13 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
I should want Hadley to torment Isabelle but her personality suggests the best way to really get under Isabelle's skin would be to treat her with the respect Hadley never got from her.
Ethan seems nice, quirky but nice. He can't be here for no reason at all, there has to be a bigger picture. Someone for Eva?
Nice chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
There is part of me that wants to write it, honestly, the torment of Isabelle.
I wish it were in me to be cryptic and prophetic, and say something like "you have already met Eva's someone" but make it sound like "there are many fish in the sea, but only one here swims up stream", lol
Date: January 13 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
Son of a bitch, with the fan service last chapter and now having to wait to see them interact at the same size, you're going to kill me with anticipation. Keep it up thanks.
Author's Response:
;} My unofficial goal while writing: Kill reader with anticipation before they get to the good stuff.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oooh thank you Faintsmile, what a wonderful present you just gave to us !! *.* At last we see Eva and Hadley more...close X) I was hoping for it to come and it finally came, so glad to read it !! I'm convinced Hadley is just having fun, while Eva is really affected by the turn of events, and enjoying this experience at a deeper level than Hadley. I definitly love this story, and I'm reading what I feel like would be the best turn of events.. X) I'm really looking forward to what you'll write next, so please keep it up ! :D
And by the way, Happy Hollidays to you too ! :D
Date: December 22 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Very interesting once again. Wonder if Hadley's really got feelings for Eva, or if it was just the Alcohol talking?
Also wondering what'll happen if Eva ever meets James. Maybe something wi come of that?
Author's Response:
These are good questions! We shall see ;}
Date: December 22 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Once again, love the slice-of-life you are presenting. Also love the fan service and how you keep it playful drunken rambunctiousness, and not everyone going full slut mode just because reasons. Keep up the amazing work because I'm always anxious as hell to read the next installment. Ps, thanks for the quick update for this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I felt like the past few chapters have been rather tame when it came to fanservice, so I figured I would make up for it with this present!
I put myself on a very strict deadline for this chapter, lol, as I did not want you all waiting weeks for me to update. Holiday season is a busy time for me.
Date: December 22 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Woah, drunk Hadley is quite something! She isn't lesbian is she? Happy Holidays to you too or perhaps I'll just wish you Merry Christmas, never understood the whole thing about saying Happy Holidays to be PC.
Eva is probably right to be suspicious of the girl who tried to attack Hadley, those early chapters were terrifying, kind of thought it would end with Hadley a smear on the floor.
Author's Response:
Holy wow, I literally just posted, lol!
I would not qualify Hadley as being a lesbian, no, but that is not to say she is not open to women romantically or physically.
If I know a person specifically, I my wishes will be based on the holiday they celebrate, like Christmas for you. However, as I cannot say that my readership is entirely comprised of people who celebrate Christmas, I say Happy Holidays, because it is all encompassing.
Hadley is perhaps too brave, lol! We shall see if it gets her in trouble :}
Date: December 21 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I felt Isabelle's reveal could have been done later, get more bad blood going between the girls but again, you prove to have made things more interesting. Understanding through Immersion is getting me all curious, hope to see more!
Author's Response: I wish I could have waited longer, but for the story to move forward, I needed it to happen. Isabelle is not about to just switch to being buddy buddy, so hopefully things remain interesting on that front :) I am glad I am getting people interested with the Understanding Through Immersion!
[Report This]Date: December 21 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
"Understanding Through Immersion" ?
That sounds to me like some shrinking is in on the horizon for Isabelle, right ? :D
Author's Response: Aha! You are good, my friend! I guess you will have to read to find out ;}