Date: September 26 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the ending!
Date: September 10 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting concept, really ! I was amazed by her sheer size, and how she decided to use it for her pleasure, it was Just... Surreal !
And, indeed, it was !! The end is really really good, makes me think of a french song's clip, where the children pay to play one hour in artificial grass with a tree, because there isn't any like these on earth..
Anyway, thank You ! Really well done man !
[Report This]Date: November 02 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was certainly more of an "interesting mind questioning story." I loved it. The detail, you could imagine it for sure happening, or at least the feeling of it, how you described with excellent use of language.
The plot twist very nice, and added a hint of intelligence to an already intellectual story.
Very well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am glad you liked it!