[Report This]Date: November 27 2014 5:50 AM Title: 'The Party' Pt.1
Ok, I've been reading this story for quite a while. I'm kind of glad that Kai's attitude has stayed in check this entire time. In the earliest chapters, he was pretty rude, especially to his family. He seems slightly more considerate of other people's emotions, even at his own expense, now. It makes him much more likeable.
Oh, yeah. Do you mind if I put this story in my favorites?
Author's Response: At home, Kai was living out the same routine day after day, which made him spiteful to a point. But moving away from home has brought out the better side in him. As for your question, I don't mind at all! :)
[Report This]Date: November 26 2014 7:49 PM Title: 'The Party' Pt.1
Depending on Jenna's legitament interest in the other guys at the party, I might get a good idea of whether Kai's sister was right about her or if she is just a total... Not-so-nice person!
Looking forward to future chapters!
[Report This]Date: November 25 2014 10:28 AM Title: 'Trouble'
Yep! Jenna is definitely not just flirting. She's enjoying the thought of a guy who _can't_ walk out on her because of her domineering ways.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2014 7:29 PM Title: 'Trouble'
The characters are very interesting as are the circumstances! Jenna is quite the masterful blacksmith of blackmail hahah!
I look forward to future chapters!
Date: November 24 2014 1:26 AM Title: 'Introductions'
Nice story, but I'm really starting to hate this Jenna chick! Why does that stupid girl harass Kai all the time? I know this story is rated X and the whole feet thing is understandable, but I've never really understood the appeal in harassing tinies :S
Date: November 23 2014 7:57 PM Title: 'Introductions'
I actually like jenna, she is flirting, but more in a domineering way, and she's gonna get Kai whether he likes it or not. It reminds me of a yandere obsession in japanese manga. You're already laying down the setting, and the beginnings of it, if Kai was into that kind of thing like I am, he'd enjoy his situation a little more.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2014 6:37 PM Title: 'Trouble'
Jenna rocks, great stuff.
Date: November 23 2014 3:42 PM Title: 'Trouble'
Wow, Kai must REALLY wanna be independent if he's gonna put up with Jenna's BS every day from now on. I can safely say that I'd have tucked my tail between my legs and gotten the hell out while I still had some dignity.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2014 2:10 PM Title: 'Trouble'
Sexual harrasment, bullying, physical assault, destruction of property, extortion; Kai has enough on her to get her expelled easily.
Author's Response: If only he had proof ;)
[Report This]Date: November 18 2014 1:13 PM Title: 'Hopes vs Reality'
It sounds to me like Jenna is the (stereo)typical rich-bitch. The type who become addicted to always being the literal center of attention. Especially, from horny fawning boys! Hence, their almost sociopathic resentment at one particular guy finally being immune to their "charms."
Date: November 15 2014 11:13 AM Title: 'Introductions'
Wow, what's Jenna's problem? I'm kinda pissed at her right now... >:(
[Report This]Date: November 15 2014 1:11 AM Title: 'Introductions'
This is quality writing. Period.
Date: November 14 2014 10:37 PM Title: 'Hopes vs Reality'
Based on last chapter I always had little doubt that I would dislike Jenna. Maybe she's been screwed over by men in the past and she's taking it out on poor Kai, but whatever the reason, her attitude makes my blood boil.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2014 9:31 PM Title: 'Introductions'
I hope jenna gets her comeupance.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2014 1:16 AM Title: 'Appartment'
Just found this story, and it's really great. Can't wait to see more of Kai and his giant roommate Jenna. Also wanna see what happens when the other two join in.
aaron
[Report This]Date: November 10 2014 12:42 PM Title: 'Appartment'
It seems like Jenna is already testing the waters of how manipulative she can be with a one foot-tall roommate. Or, am I the only one who thinks she deliberately put her legs up on the sofa to force Kai to climb over her ankles?
Date: November 09 2014 4:12 AM Title: 'Introductions'
Also, I wanted to ask. Is this Kai the same Kai in "Kai and Tris"? I think you should get a name generator if your having trouble coming up with names, it's a little confusing...
Author's Response: The two stories are not related at all. I chose the name simply because I like it and it's short. :)
[Report This]Date: November 09 2014 4:08 AM Title: 'Introductions'
Cool chapter! I kinda feel like Shaun being so non-chalant about Kai means that they might be good friends...I don't know, I just get that impression.
Jenna seems decent but she's also really passive agressive. I kinda don't like her for some reason; there is something about her that just irks me. Maybe I'll like one of the other gals better?
Anyway good chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 05 2014 8:27 AM Title: 'Preparations'
A plausibly rendered chapter. Kai's mom and sister really were telling him the truth about his situation. But, it's equally true that even the most valid points can be over-belabored!
Makes me wonder if, deep down inside, they might be trying to talk him out of going to college at the last minute.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2014 7:13 AM Title: 'Preparations'
Me the day before going to college: Scrambling to buy new clothes.