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Reviewer: Megagiant5280 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2014 12:06 PM Title: Discovery

Does that story in the story actually exist?



Author's Response:

No, but it is something I have thought about a few times. Could be a good one. I actually had another story I was going to put it, but this one seemed more in line with the chapter.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 7:03 PM Title: The Roles We Play

Great to see this back



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you liked this chapter. I was too busy to write for a while. 

Reviewer: Raiza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2014 12:36 PM Title: A Swim

Nicely done with the role reversal, really looking forward to more of that.

Reviewer: Megagiant5280 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2014 12:13 PM Title: Discovery

I like what happened to the guy here. He was a fraud and should be treated that way. Now Beth needs to find a real man to do damage with her.

Reviewer: Megagiant5280 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2014 9:17 AM Title: Discovery

Very real way of a giant getting off long before Beth wanted him to. I wonder if he will last since he doesn't as dominating in person as he does online.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I am glad you thought it was realistic, the way I wrote it. I am also glad you picked up on him not being very dominating (at least compared to Beth) in real life. That may play a role in the upcoming chapters...

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 7:46 PM Title: A Ride

Beth is awesome



Author's Response:

Thank you! I appreciate your support. I thought my concept for the character was good, so I am glad I realized the concept well in the writing.

Reviewer: lazyb Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2014 3:18 AM Title: Discovery

A nice psychological aspect of loosing control!!! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 2:10 PM Title: Coming Home

I kinda wish she hadn't killed her dad do soon. She could've gotten more use out of him as a slave. Can't wait to see what she does with this new friend and her mom next.

aaron

Author's Response:

Your note about her dad kind of made it into chapter 3, or at least influenced a part.
Thanks for the comment. 

Reviewer: The Demon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 9:13 AM Title: Discovery

Love it.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 2:35 AM Title: Coming Home

Loving it!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 2:40 PM Title: Discovery

looking forward to more

Reviewer: tinyjew Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 1:54 PM Title: Discovery

Fantastic! Cannot wait for more updates!

Reviewer: tinyjew Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 11:17 AM Title: Discovery

Fantastic! Cannot wait for more updates!

Reviewer: omicron20 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 12:41 AM Title: Discovery

Immediately added to my favorites list. Eagerly waiting for updates. ^_^

 

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