Reviews For Sweetly Swallowed
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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2023 8:38 PM Title: Sweetly Swallowed

A very nice, short erotic vore story. You do them very well. I would have liked just a bit more play between the two (perhaps slowing down the shrinking description, elongating it a bit) and a bit of back-and-forth dialogue to make it even better. I like that the boy was looking forward to the fantasy of being swallowed by her, but then had second thoughts when reality struck.

Reviewer: Zingem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2014 5:52 PM Title: Sweetly Swallowed

This story is you too? Ok now I'm sure you're my favorite author right now. Please keep up the amazing writing.

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2014 5:40 AM Title: Sweetly Swallowed

That was great. The action was tight and focused, and the voice of the speaker was very distinctive. Good work.

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2014 4:42 AM Title: Sweetly Swallowed

Good writing style. Very enjoyable. Wouldn't mind seeing a longer story but this was just fine as it was.

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