Oh, my! Again, you wrote a very good one!

But Autumn died :((... I was starting to like her.

Anyway, very goog story, can't wait to read its sequel!

PS.: so, it has always been Zack... I would never know that! I tought it would be Cat or even Lexi!

PS².: Oh my, Autumn's dead.... :((((

Loved the ending <3 Even if didnt go like how I thought or little wished it would. But awesome idea of the two cheating on Lex I didnt think of that possibility. Thank god Tommy survived. I dont know if you would want that, but if theres any chance in requesting a sequel of the whole shirnking club stories, I would love seeing a story, which takes place after Not-So-Happy-Meals. And the whole story would be about Tommy falling in love with a new girl, trying to forget the shrink case, also because Lexi went missing the whole case suddenly "disappered", even though the club didnt know how. Would be great like that Tommy neglecting his friends, Simon, Bobby, and Francine, because of his new gf, also like Tommy thought he wouldnt fall in love that easily again, but just thinking with his boner and it happened. His friends would try to find out why Tommy wouldnt have so little time again and just would be in classes and than have no time anymore, resulting in Simon, Bobby and Francise get shrunk and end in some horrible endings, unawarly to Tommy. I also would like some smaller shrinking sizes in this story, like 1/8"-1/16". Half an inch is way too big for unaware and micro plots in my oppinion. Again, amazing story, and it's one of my favorites Ive read in a long time on here.

So that's how it all happened :3 Cant wait for the last chapter, hope it will be gooood <3

The chapter was really gread written, didnt touch me that much as the others though because it was mostly a flachback and everything was mostly known. I am not a hugh fan of flashback, I hate when that happens in a series and it's telling too long. But some parts were also knew so it's still great :3 What I liked was the last sentence, that suddenly Cat appeared I think that was not something to expect. I am so damn curious of how the last chapter will come out, what happens and everything. I really hope Tommy and Autumn survive. Maybe Zack gets somehow too shrunk. It would be funny, if Zack was shrunk to ant size and placed in a "safe" transportation box like a matchbox and Tommy stuffs it in his jeans, and in another story something goes wrong because he tries to escape while being in Tommys or Autumns house, as some kind of side story, but I know that wont happen because you already have written and planed everything. Anyway :) Really hoping for a great final chapter!!

I'm loving this story. That twist at the end of ch 6...can't wait to see what happens! Thank you for taking the time to write this story and sharing it.

Ahh!! Awesome chapter <3 I loved the beginning and the ending, the beginning was really hot to read, and the ending was really interesting and a mind twist. So Zack knew about the shrink ray all along, and he was one of the killers too? Both he and Lexi? I really hope Tommy and Autumn survive, please :3 I would love to read a whole story about them, and bad accidents happen mostly caused unknowingly by Tommy, which would be so damn ironic because he was part of the club to protect people, and know his accidental actions would cause some bad luck, especially for his next friends. So I guess Simon will get to know what a one way trip down Lexis digestive tract looks like :3 Really hope youll be able to write out the next chapter soon, even if you wrote beforey youre really busy this week. Awesome plot twist, and I already think this is your best story so far.

Oh right, sure. I thought you had already finished planing so dont worry, maybe in another story!! That would be just awesome actually :) Maybe a story dedicated to this in especial about Tommy and his gf, how he all abandoned and neglected his school friends, because he's just driven by his hormones like a typically teenager boy. The story could focus about all kind of vore and insertion endings for the micros, mostly of Tommy and his gf being together really close or in normal situations too :3

Damn site... thanks god I was able to retriev my review by going back in browser history :( Hopefully it will go through this time. Wow, fantastic chapter. I loved the love scene between Tommy and Autumn <3 Actually I hoped for something like this to happen. You left out the tiny little details for the reader to fill in in mind, thats awesome. You have a fantastic telling style. I dont know if it fits in this story, mostly not, but it would be really hot if Autumn was the killer, and Tommy would never know, not knowing what she might do with his friends. Maybe you can put this into another story again, where Tommy had sex with a gf, and a micro or a few gets some really intime friendship time. For example they could be put into a condom, and Tommy would use it without a clue giving the micro a horrible death inside, and throwing the filled condom away carelessly in the rooms bin afterwards. Or a micro of really tiny size, that Tommy would never notice it, like lint size or sand corn size, would be placed on the girls anus, and Tommy would bang her butt. Or he's licking the girls vagina and accidentally and unknowingly licking off a tiny sand corn sized micro who was placed down there. I cant wait for the next chapter. This was truly the best chapter so far, even if it didnt contain any vore or micro parts, it was so damn hot to read!!

Awh it's fine :) And even if it's not happening in this story, I hope for Tommy to gulp down one of his friends unawarely in another story maybe :3 And aw :( I hoped for the Halloween story would have lots of it, it always works great with a Halloween plot. Sadly I tried before and never got into writing, because it's really stressful for me. I cant concentrate longer than a few lines, and also English isnt my main language. Yeah :( But I got another idea maybe this one will agree, would be nice hearing back what you think. What if Tommy is indirectly responsable for one of his friends, maybe even close friends who were also active in the club, book a one way trip through a girls bowls. It could happen, that Tommy helps preparing some food like an onion dip and accidentally toses his micro friend inside or fall inside and his new gf eates from it. Tommy would be totally clueless and also ironically the reason for one of his best friends to get swallowed. It would work together with the micro trying to get the attention from Tommy, who wouldnt notice the micro, but his actions causes the micro to fall inside the bowl or glass. This would work well together with the idea of Tommys hormons blocking everything else, and especially his friends, and he's just interesting in his new girl. Another idea could be, that his new gf would tell at some point, that theres a tiny ant in her food, and Tommy would just totally blinded by hormones not realize that it's maybe not an insect at all, and would just respons with something like, insects give good protein, as an ironic remark. Or his gf could be like theres an ant (somewhere around) and wants Tommy to exterminate it, which he does by roling up a newspaper and smashing the "bug".

Great way of plot telling as always!! It went different as what I had expected. But this is not much critism, I just dont like "hard vore" what I call it, with lots of food envolved. My favorite vore is always unharmed vore without any chewing, and a medium of liquid like a soda or glass of water/coke, a cereal, onion dip and so on. Im into stuffing too. I like flat tummies more :3 Also I find it more interesting if the stomach isnt much filled with food for the micro to be in. I imagine it more of a giant empty cave, with slimy walls forming digestive drops from the walls and roof. The vore part was really short, I like it more if it's expended especially the part in front of the mouth. Things like the unaware person speaks with someone else, the micro isnt shoved in with the first bite, he/she fell off again and so on. I like the idea of the micro thinking they were saved but then it's all false hope. I love false hope scenarios, also including like "did she/he see me?" "yes yes it's me!! I'm so glad you...", and in mid sentence cut off and the giant just releasing a burp and never noticed the tiny dot, but the micro just thought she/he did, and was just looking "through" the food. What's so awesome is you're plaing to add in a way quicked cycle :)) Thats awesome!! I cant wait for how it continues :)) It's a real killer to wait a few days you know :/ I also liked the ending Tommy not really interesting in the case it seemed lol, and that hes more driven by his teenager boy hormons. I'm so sad you sad you wont include male vore, even if it's just a 2path plot not including 100% of it for him, it would fit so damn great now in here, that Tommy is more interested in his new gf than in the case and is neglecting his friends even. It would be a really ironic and sarcastic twist, that Tommy would gulp down one of his friends and not even knowing about it. Hope for the next chapter already, even if it's tomorrow, maybe youre able to publish it sooner :)) Thanks again for writing <3