Date: March 12 2015 12:25 PM Title: Track Practice
More like an older vintage made on a relatively smaller budget. And one can either like it...or not.
[Insert "shrug" icon, here.]
Author's Response:
I did my research on it, seems like Fifty Shades it wasn't well received in its time either in domestic markets. Not my kind of movie , as surprising it may sound since I am a regular on this fetish site.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 12:51 PM Title: Track Practice
Really enjoyed this chapter! Glad you found the time to update the story.
Curious as to what the other multinsized story you're thinking of.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I look for the little pockets and make us of it.
It's still set in the Intersizables universe and like Downtrodden, it started life as a completely different idea, totally unrelated to the series vgiv had in mind but I wanted to adapt it straight it away for the series. Just couldn't figure out how to let it until recently.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 11:44 AM Title: Bios
Nah! It's a reference to an erotic cult-classic of the 1980's. Sort of the FIFTY SHADES OF GRAY of its day.
Author's Response:
Is it as good as the Fifty Shades of Gray everyone knows today? Or really just a higher standard of erotica?
[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 7:53 AM Title: Track Practice
Well, specifying what I loved about this chapter feels--to me--like the vivisection of a good joke. Kills the enjoyment. But, I'll do my best to oblige!
It's refreshing that Alvin and Cassie are starting out as just friends. Most of the time, in other's stories, it's more like lust at first sight on either the giantess' part, or the little guy's, or both. In other words; a glorified sadomasochistic bond (minus the 9.5 WEEKS worth of "novelty" items).
Author's Response:
I do read smutty stories where the giant gal and mini man try to bone each other within minutes of being introduced but as a writer, I'll try to steer myself from such stories. It just isn't my cup of tea.
That is also a very specific time period you just mentioned, is there personal experience behind it :/ ?
[Report This]Date: March 10 2015 11:09 PM Title: Track Practice
Well I still love this story. I like all of the people in the story. I just want them to date already. It would make so much more since.
Author's Response:
Even Wendy? You like the bully? Well to each his own( or her, you could be a woman for all I know.)
I can't comment on the status of Cassvin( or is it Alssie?) right now. Even I don't know where it'll go and I'm the writer XD!
[Report This]Date: March 10 2015 10:38 PM Title: Track Practice
Great Chapter! Probably my favorite chapter of this story so far! Not only did we get lots of character development and story progression but we also got a small glipse of the past and a small "date" between friends!
The gossip in this chapter was also really funny! I can't wait for the next chapter of this, I can foresee some trouble heading Alvin's way after the treatment Wendy got at Cassie's hands...
Also I saw a small error:
“ I’ve heard of that guy. Want me to take care of him?” Wendy joked, cracking her knuckles.
Don't you mean Cassie^ joked? Wendy wasn't around was she?
Author's Response:
Thanks again. Not sure when the next update happens but it'll be after I update BFG again.
Gossip usually is, especially when the imagination runs wild and creates the most ridiculous explanations. I'm so glad I put this chapter in,it was meant to be filler but like every chapter, it has a clear purpose.
Thanks for pointing out the error, I changed it the moment I read the review. No, Wendy wasn't around, she wouldn't dare show her face around Cassie.
Date: March 06 2015 7:30 AM Title: Bios
Alright, thanks for the info :)
Author's Response:
No problem, I'm happy to answer any questions you have about my stories.
[Report This]Date: March 05 2015 11:19 AM Title: Bios
Any updates soon? Seems like Incorperated was updated.
Author's Response:
Trying to but school is a pain. A lot of the writers are busy and Im writing a story for BFG because I promised The Doctor one. Will try to alternate.
Date: February 26 2015 2:07 PM Title: Hunting the Hunter
I guess then that makes you a well known author on this site then. Sweet, I know a celebrity author that I can borrow money from.
And no that was a pretty good method of getting back at Wendy. It may not have been very painful but I've yet to read about someone doing something similar. Therefore creativity points have been earned.
Author's Response:
I guess so, judging by the response to Downtrodden.
I thought the method would tie into Cassie's love of astronomy, plus you're right, I've never seen anyone try . Any foot related stuff usually involves the person being shoved into their shoe, being taken for a run or pressed uncomfortably. Painful? Yes but it lacks a personal touch, this one achieves both.
One day though, I'll have to write a very painful torture scene, just to see how far I can go. It'll have to fit the story its in but I'll do my best to inflict pain on the character, regardless of giantess or tiny.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2015 5:55 PM Title: Hunting the Hunter
hey, i've been having the same problem with school. At least you've kept up the great quality. That was a satisfying revenge, and you found a way to work in some character development for Cassie. Nicely pulled off my friend.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I had this doubt it wouldn't be satisfying because Cassie wasn't harsh enough. Yeah, school is taking up all my time from story writing and I've plenty of my plate when it comes to this and school. I think its the same for quite of the more well known writers on the site, school keeping them from updating their stories.
[Report This]Date: February 18 2015 3:55 PM Title: Hunting the Hunter
Astonishing story you have here. I profoundly love your noatural writing style.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 1:41 AM Title: Hunting the Hunter
Hey there.
Just thought I'd drop by to give you a little encouragement. Your stories are really well written and personally, I don't mind stories that are more plot and less fetish stuff.
Take all the time you need and keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for understanding, real life can really keep you away from this. Not to mention my other gts stories on this site, got a BFG one that I need to write.
I'll get back to this in March( probably, given I usually write 2 chapters elsewhere and school kills me.)
Date: February 12 2015 5:56 PM Title: Bios
I just sat down to browse some updates and had never checked this one until now.
I was missing out.
Great job with this story man. its one of the rare ones that doesn't requre fetish based stuff every chapter to keep someone interested.
Waitin for next chapter patiently lol
Author's Response:
Oh you didn't? It isn't too late my friend, hop on and enjoy the ride.
If you like stories that don't rely on the fetish to keep people interested, then you might want to check my other work. It isn't fetish based at all but since this is a fetish site, I might throw in a few scenes to keep people interested but for the most part, it'll be plot driven.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2015 1:28 PM Title: Hunting the Hunter
Wendy strkes me as being a chronic counter-puncher. No matter what you recommend, suggest, or otherwise try to tell such people what to do, they will spitefully always do the opposite.
Author's Response:
Especially after humiliations like this I'll add!She isn't the sort of person to take this lying down.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2015 9:18 AM Title: Hunting the Hunter
Well awesome story. Oh don't worry I still give a damn about this story. It's probably one of my favorites. It's crazy I didn't think it's been a month.
Anyways I think it's going to be awhile before Wendy stops messing with Alvin. But I can't wait for the next chapter, since it will have Alvin and Cassie.
Thanks for the chapter
Author's Response:
Yeah, time flies eh?
I hope you'll enjoy it, these two chapters were inspired by a suggestion from vgiv, glad to see you like this one.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2015 1:38 AM Title: Hunting the Hunter
I shoudn't be one to talk considering how long it's been since my last update but it HAS been a while...I had to go back and read some chapters to refresh my memory.
Now I will say: this chapter was well written. Having said that I kinda feel like we could have gotten all this info from a simple phrase. Something like: "After punishing Wendy for almost burning Alvin, Cassie headed towards the track to watch him practice."
And then we could have gotten abit more progression. Like I said, it was a well written chapter, but it felt abit unecessary.
Author's Response:
If I did as you suggested, it would affect certain chapters, the impact wouldn't be as great. You'll see what I mean when the time is right. vgiv and I talked about this and we felt this chapter needed to exist. It doesn't progress the story but it does lay the groundwork for future chapters. It might come across as strange to have such a chapter here in the middle of a story but it is what it is.
Thanks for the review and I hope you find the time to update your own story, you cut it off at a really interesting point!
Date: February 02 2015 8:01 PM Title: Bios
Haven't really seen this updated in a little while. Are you waiting for incorporated to be updated in order to continue?
Author's Response:
More like trying to clear my work load, the next chapter is only 10% done. Sorry for the wait, I am just trying to clear my college stuff first.
Date: January 08 2015 4:51 AM Title: Bios
Alright, Giantessworld hasn't sent me e-mails telling me you had replied - even though I've ticked the box in my preferances. Part of the reason for my restraint in the review is: a.Wanted to move onto the next chapter A.S.A.P. and b. I didn't want to come across as padantic.
You know, you come across a good story and you just want to keep on reading. I hope that clarifies things a bit. I know you, perhaps unlike other people, don't mind a long review but I can be rather blunt. And people may misconstrue a review I left as me not enjoying the story. This is normally not the case. I usually review becasue I like a story.
Author's Response:
Yeah that part of the site doesn't seem to be working very well at the moment.
I get what you mean for both points you raised. You don't want to stop and break the momentum, the story is too good for it. I actually kind of obssess over the little details in the story so if you do it I just assume you're really getting into it.
I can tell you can be blunt but sometimes its a good thing because it means you'll point out what other people won't for fear of being mean. Thanks for it.
Date: January 06 2015 2:21 PM Title: Counter
Well Alvin's stepmother will be a bad mood when she egts home. Alvin's stepsister is in a bad mood. Is it resonable to assume that Alvin will end up living with Cassie? He won't take up much room after all. And will be easy to conceal from her parents.
Author's Response:
Yeah she will be, she'll be pissed for getting fired. Well it would seem that it's the best way out isn't it? Cassie's room is large enough for her to hide Alvin and he can always sleep in the dollhouse. Nice idea...real nice.
Date: January 06 2015 1:44 PM Title: In the Company of Titans
Given the space she had, the impact was negligible thanks to the rather , Wendy unsure if Cassie even felt it.
Rather what? That sentence seems incomplete.
By the way, what did Jamila, what did Cassie call you about?”
That setence needs changing. I think you'll notice it right away. I know there's more things I could be commenting on, and perhaps I should have reviewed more of the prior chapters, but I'm always worried about my review being too long.
Author's Response:
Ah sorry, seems even with two people proofreading it errors seem to slip through. A long review is fine, I'll still read and respond to it, length does not matter.