Date: September 11 2014 2:05 PM Title: trampling the cheer squad
Nah, Cary, Min's forum is mostly for gentle SW.
MrHippo, you could post this at the VSW, but it's not very active there. You could take this to CoiledFist, too, though there are readers who will tell you that the presence of women spoils the story just like readers here will ask you why your giant man isn't a giant woman, even though you clearly tagged it. Wherever else you post, I hope you will continue to add your stories here, too. For whatever reason, M/f seems to be a magnet for comments that are essentially "this isn't my kink so gtfo." Fuck that.
This is one of three stories tagged M/f across all the pages of the Most Recent section that I see right now. That's a drop of M/f in a sea of F/m. I simply do not understand how F/m readers are failing to find enough porn to satiate themsevles that they have to come in here and discourage you from posting. I hope you will ignore this bullshit. It would be nice to see more from you, and the administrators of World welcome M/f, so don't worry about it. There are even tags and all that good stuff, though apparently even at a site about sharing stories we can't expect one another to read, eh.
Author's Response:
I take all feedback even if it's negative and use it to improve my writing. I posted a M/f story because I read a few of the reviews on other M/f stories and there seemed to be a desire to see more of it. I myself like reading about giant women but thought i'd try my hand at the other side. Thanks for kind words Binary_Prophet.
Date: September 11 2014 12:23 PM Title: trampling the cheer squad
I guess you and I will have to agree to permanently disagree, Naoru. Shrunken women/giant men would be more suitable for websites like the one run by Minimizer. He's got a shitload of such stories, there!
Date: September 10 2014 9:00 PM Title: trampling the cheer squad
Honestly, I wouldnt go with guys shrinking in a cheerleaders locker room. Why?I would love that yeah, but it has been done so many times, and this site needs more male giants. I know its a giantess place, but diversity should be encouraged no repressed.
That said, you might like to elaborate more. Everything happened too fast, and not enough exposure for any of the deaths/interactions. Try to take your time, to pause, and describe sensations and scenarios a little more. To put on the thoughts of the victim and unaware tormentor. Slow it, at least for your next one.
Author's Response:
I like reading diverse stories and noticed the same thing you wrote(about the lack of M/f). I will probably sway more towards the F/m genre in the future, but thought i'd try my hand at the other side. I appreciate the feedback because it's really the only way I know how the readers want the story to be paced.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2014 3:29 PM Title: trampling the cheer squad
I enjoyed this as is, with giant men and little women. :)
I really like it. It's short and sweet, but has some great descriptions. I only wish there was more of it. I enjoyed the way you described the world and wanted to spend more time reading it. Would love to see you dig into some greater detailed action.
Author's Response:
Thanks,I don't think I can expand on this story but I will try to make longer chapters in the future.
Date: September 10 2014 3:16 PM Title: trampling the cheer squad
Maybe a chapter two
Author's Response:
I don't know how I would want to do a second chapter on this story.Hoped you enjoyed it though
Date: September 10 2014 10:40 AM Title: trampling the cheer squad
I agree with him. Would have been better with the guys shrinking in a cheerleading locker room
Author's Response:
I thoght about doing that first but changed midstream. I might write a similar story containing giant cheerleaders in the future.
Date: September 10 2014 8:45 AM Title: trampling the cheer squad
it would've been better if it was the other way around where the guys shrunk in the girl's locker room
Author's Response:
I might give that a try in the future.