Date: August 06 2015 6:58 AM Title: Sickly Sister
So good story, I had an idea, I don't think you'll accept but, since you left that story for a while I asked myself if you owuld let me continue it or make a new story with the same concept, and if not, what I'll perfectly understand at least let me give you some ideas because I know how sometimes the writing is blocked, I just want to see that concept being pushed forther it's just too good to stay at this stage!
- Jmeuliere
Author's Response:
All concepts, universes and characters I have created are freely available to anyone who want to use them. If you believe that you have some ideas for this story that you want to write about then you have every right to. To be honest I don't really consider this story my idea since I got the base idea from another source. But if my blessing is what you want then you now have it. Out of curiosity, what are your ideas if I might ask?
[Report This]Date: December 13 2014 10:12 AM Title: A new App
Great story so far and I hope to see this continue, truth be spoken I have recently only come on to see this updated. I love feet, so having Casey stick her toes into the phone and devastating everything beneath and between her sexy, sweaty toes would be amazing. I also move vore so if one of the girls stuck her tongue through the phone and licked up a city would also be nice. You're Also one of the only writers that I know to have giantess inhale tines into their nostrils, It would be nice if that can happen... Oops I am suggesting too much here, don't want to take advantage of you writing out suggestions of the readers. Well weather any of my suggestions make it or not I hope to see more soon.
[Report This]Date: December 02 2014 1:51 PM Title: A new App
Loving this story, one of my new favourites. Hope you do continue it (and quickly ) and are open to suggestions. Loving the work :D
Author's Response:
I'm totally open to suggesstions man. If you got an idea don't be afraid to put it forward. Or if you have advice of how I could be better then that's great as well. All suggestions are welcome. I'm working on the next chapter now but it's hard to captivate the sheer size and change that the sock presents. There are so many points I have to take into consideration and difficult to do them all justice. But hopefully I'll be done in a short amount of time.
[Report This]Date: November 30 2014 5:47 PM Title: A new App
I'm really enjoying this so far, that much so I keep checking back to see when your next writings will be up! Your ideas and perspective are very welcome, being a fan of extreme size difference and what things appear like and how they interact at such massive or indeed tiny sizes.
I really do hope you progress with this story and find time to do so!
Author's Response:
It's not so much the time to find writing (I'm on holiday so got plenty of that) but the daunting task of trying to convey the sheer size and effects the sock will have. There are many aspects I have to include and it's hard to try and fit them. I'm pretty much using this to improve that area of writing for me but hoefully another chapter will be up soon =)
Date: November 30 2014 2:33 AM Title: Sickly Sister
Oh man. As if Australia didn't already have enough problems with invasive species, now there's a girl's sweaty gym sock spread out across the land. You can't help but wonder sorts of new species are going to be introduced into the ecosystem because of that sock. Foot fungus and microbes and whatnot of extremely large scale wreaking havoc on the native wildlife, not to mention the people in the cities.
Author's Response:
Yes, being an Australian myself I can say that the added heat from that sock is not welcome. But yeah, this opens so many things like the heat, sweat, air pollution, crushing cities and giant bacteria. It's going to be hard to write about all of that but I'll try. Hopefully I capture the entire essence of what the sock causes =)
Date: November 29 2014 10:57 PM Title: A new App
Some one already said it but I'll say it again so you know there's atleast two people asking for it, someone totally needs to fart on the phone, it would be awesome
Great stuff so far though, I particularly love the bit back in chapter 2 where the woman who drowned the city in her juices watches a documentary about flooding and says how horrible it would be to drown to death.
Author's Response:
If you have read any of my other stories then you should know that I like butt stuff. It's probably my favorite of th giantess fetih. So don't worry, there will be a chapter like that. However, the next chapter will be dedicated to the effects of the sock on Australia.
Date: November 29 2014 10:54 PM Title: A new App
Please continue with the feet chapters! Maybe have the smell and sweat of her sock suffocate and drown ,people, have her put her toes through and crush with her toes and feet!
Author's Response:
The next chapter will be dedicated to the effects of the sock. The changes are actually larger than expected since the sock is so big!
Date: November 29 2014 6:47 PM Title: Sickly Sister
Really good story you said to ask if you wanted something specific could i ask for some stockings please but yeah really really good story love it
Author's Response:
Stockings? Sure. When I find a way to incorporate it I'll totally have a scene or a chapter. Though. because I've never really got the thing with stockings I might not hit all the right spots but I'll give it a try =)
[Report This]Date: November 29 2014 4:19 PM Title: City wide arousal
Great chapter!
Date: November 29 2014 3:41 PM Title: A new App
I hope she sticks her toes in the phone
Date: October 07 2014 2:32 AM Title: City wide arousal
Yoooooo man I really love your stories, best writer out there imo, I really hope this one will continue for a long time it's beyond fantastic! Very good concept
Author's Response:
I thank you for your comment. I am honoured to see someone with such high regards for my writing, even if your praise is a little undeserving. I will try to continue this story but I have become more of a casual writer now. I don't know when the next chapter will be up but hopefully it will be soon.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2014 10:52 PM Title: City wide arousal
I love giga unaware distruction and it works well here with the shrunken city. Suggestions: Have sweat from someone's feet cause smelly storm clouds to form. Have someone fart on the phone or something. And maybe just give a few more personal perspectives from the tiny people in the cities in the phone its usually easier to illustrate scale if you have one person's perspective
Author's Response:
I like your ideas and advice pertaining to other peoples perspectives. I sometimes try to incorporate such elements but often find it rather difficult. I'll try harder to add different perspectives. As to your ideas of sweat from feet. I like that a lot. I would probably use that at a later date I just have to figure out how to lead up to it. I have ideas on how to set up a fart scene so I'll do that first maybe but I might go for feet first. We'll see. Thaks for your comment.
Date: October 06 2014 6:27 PM Title: A new App
Definitely worth continuing!
Date: October 06 2014 7:10 AM Title: A new App
Loving it so far! would love to see this story stay unaware and maybe get some interaction with Brianna
Date: September 13 2014 3:22 AM Title: A new App
The descriptions are pretty good from the odor to the characters.
I see potential for character growth here
Date: September 07 2014 11:16 PM Title: A new App
Holy fuck! Please do feel the time for it! I hope she torments them for a good long while before finally checking to see what all the tickle is about ;)
[Report This]Date: September 07 2014 10:06 AM Title: A new App
Very nice setup. Could allow for some family bonding from Ashley and Brianna if they eventually catch wind of what is happening, would allow for some characterization and development. Also looks like some comedy bits are peppered throughout so despite the family issues it won't be all bleak.
I'm with BillMann in that I can recall only one other story with a similar bent (Atlas) and it didn't have substance despite being a full story. Your piece has potential and a wonderful parting scene that I hope continues.
I hope time is nice to you so you may write more of this one.
Date: September 06 2014 11:54 PM Title: A new App
I'm liking this so far; definitely would like to see this become a contuing story. This is a concept I'd seen done once or twice in art, but never got a proper story to flesh it out, and I think you can do it pretty well here.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2014 2:45 AM Title: A new App
Would LOVE to see more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I might if I feel the time for it.