Date: September 09 2014 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Made an account so I could review this.
I'm really enjoying this, I like how much foot-focus is in the story and how she toys with the students using her feet.
Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great story so far, my only issue was the clustering of paragraphs, but that issue is not that great in your later chapters. I love giantess foot scenarios like these and I especially like that the story is based around a crowd as opposed to one small person, which are my favorite type of stories and they are not very common, I am glad your story is a good crowd shrink story, so I have something to look forward to while I browse the site.
The description is very good and the internal conflict you gave molly about the situation and how she treats the tinies after making up her mind is amazing, I hope to see all these good things in your future chapters, great work.
Date: September 01 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
This story is incredibly awesome, please do not stop!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the way you describe the in-shoe moments. Keep it going!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree that a little more than feet would be nice, but it's your story. What you have now is already really good.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying the story at the moment and I think it's great. Would like a bit more than feet but that's just my opinion.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is getting good. You seem to be getting a better feel of these characters as well. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Date: August 31 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good story well done
Date: August 30 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Woooooooooooow this is really good man, really like your writing style and the story, the character of Molly wich is initially a good girl but due to circumstances, becomes a gentle giga giantess predator, really hope to see more of that artwork, but please try to make little parahgraphs, it's much easier to read
[Report This]Date: August 30 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. This story is great. Perfectly paced and perfectly detailed. And I'm loving this Molly character more and more. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Date: August 30 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
The big block of text on Chapter 4 is a little hard to read. I recommend starting new lines for each instance of dialogue; that'll make it much easier to follow.
Date: August 30 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking it a lot so far. Please note character development. Would be nice if the people were toyed with and interaction was going on rather than killed. My opinion of course. I like where it's headed though.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2014 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like where this is going
Date: August 29 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Amazing!, really good beginnig, I like where it goes, hope you'll continue that one for long!
Date: August 28 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far.
Date: August 28 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, wonderful start