[Report This]Date: January 19 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Twist
Nice work! I wish you could do that kind of insertion in your upcoming story!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 23: 'The Mission'
I was pleasantly surprised with how utterly enthralling I found this story! Each chapter was very fluidly connected and ended on a point that left me content, yet giddy to continue on to the next!
I loved the characters and their chemistry with each other, their thought processes and assumptions came with good reasoning. The circumstances rarely if ever felt forced, and the story moved at a comfortable steady pace.
While I wish it would continue, I understand the reason that it was concluded from your chapter notes. I actually was led to this story after being impressed with your more recent works! I look forward to reading more of your stories. :]
[Report This]Date: August 12 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Really great story. I will certainly be reading your next one. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: August 11 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
I'm sorry to see this story over. I was really hoping to see Kai be shoved up Christy's butt, preferably by Tris. Hopefully we'll see plenty of butt interaction in your next story, even though the size difference isn't big enough to allow for full insertion.
Date: August 11 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 23: 'The Mission'
First i have to say i really do like this story, its a pleasure to read :)
What i would like more to read is some more butt action (yeah i am a buttman^^) Perhaps even Kai discovers kind of a buttfetish toward Tris, requesting to spend some time in the back of her panties, in her crack?
As for this chapter, i am glad Serena is save again and all but probably the rescue from the orphanage went a bit to fast and easy..i dont know. That could be a whole chapter on its own.
Author's Response: Thank you :) As for finishing the chapter pretty fast, the story was coming to an end so I didn't want to dwell on the chapter too long. My new story will be out soon so look out for that. :)
[Report This]Date: August 10 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 23: 'The Mission'
Well, I didn't think that 23 chapters was too long. I still can't believe how fast you cranked out this tale! The mystery of what actually caused this phenomenon, still remains, And,... it seems that the 'real story' would just be begining!
You have everything in place for another 26 chapter continuation...
You have a real knack for the 'narrative parts', and your discriptions are very simalar to my own,...I notice some of the very same words that I use, and I have to stop and reread that part again just to compare how 'you' used IT.
I hate to see this adventure ending so abruptly, but at least it ended on a good note!
Look forward to the next tale, and hopefully it'll be much longer than this one ;`)
Author's Response: Thank you! I have noticed from reading your stories that there are some similarities in the way we write. I'm sorry that the story ended so abruptly, and sadly with the ending that it did. But it's only my FIRST story. EVER. So I'm just glad it got a good response. Thank you for all of your reviews wildcatman, I enjoyed reading all of them and I hope to see you in the reviews of my next stories. You helped me a lot through the story with your insightful reviews :)
[Report This]Date: August 10 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 22: 'Rescued'
The girls murdered a boy, raped two people, threatened to kill them, and then kidnapped one. On top of all this, the people they did this to know their names and where they live. These girls are pretty damn stupid.
Author's Response: Haha, they kind of are. They see tiny people as toys, instead of people, which makes them do stupid things. ;)
Date: August 09 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 20: Friends Arrive
Wow... just... wow! This was one of the most suspense filled chapters I've read so far... I have to admit though, Daniel's death pissed me off... :/
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make it as suspense filled as possible ;)
[Report This]Date: August 09 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 18: Fun at the Beach - Part 2
Sounds like that gambling ring must have been in operation for a while. The cops have now broken it up, and all but the 'one' guy who wouldn't fight, seems to have been saved...
Tris could identify that woman that 'bought' him. -'I wonder if we'll hear more about who he was?'
Great chapter! Tris doesn't like the idea of Kai having a little girlfriend,... Christy on the other hand.... H'm, I think I can see where this is going...
Lot's of possibilities... ;`)
Date: August 09 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Good chapter ! Nicely written, as well as the whole story so far. Waiting for what's next !
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: August 09 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 18: Fun at the Beach - Part 2
They probably start chipping shrunken people or something. The shrinking is still a recent event, so they're still be treated as human. It pains me to think that this will go the way of other stories like this. Where shrunken people's rights are stripped and are treated as animals or objects by the law. Tris and Kai's relationship is strained as it is, and I'm sure Christy is still looking for opportunities to get into Tris' pants. Before the introduction of Serena, my solution would have been a 3 way relationship. Now I'm not so sure, unless someone adopts her. Or the government seizes all shrunken people for their own safetly. Keep writing!
Author's Response: I don't plan on turning the story into something like that, I introduced this chapter to look into how certain groups of people see the shrinkees, one particular minded group being a small group of 80 people. The other group being kids at the orphanage, picking on the smaller kid and not realizing the extent of what they are doing. Thanks for writing down your concerns, I'm glad I could answer them. :) The story still has a long way to go from here.
Date: August 08 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18: Fun at the Beach - Part 2
Wondering when the F/f tag would become relavent.
Author's Response: Yes I've been planning this for a while. :)
[Report This]Date: August 08 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 17: Fun at The Beach - Part 1
Holy Crap! Tossing a three inch guy around, what a bunch of goof-balls! "*.*"
Christy really freaked 'em out though... Ha!
H'm, predictions? Well, I 'd say that the little green-eyed, red-headed girl, that's sitting next to her older sister's (the group of teenage girl's, that was giggling at him when they first arrived); has been put-up to snatching Kia from the towel, and bringing him back over to them...
He'll be carried far enough away that Christy or Tris can't hear him yelling, and the teen giantesses will instantly put him to work applying sun-tan lotion on their bare naked backside's! Yeah! ;`)
Author's Response: Haha, I like the prediction, somewhere in an alternate universe I probably wrote that :P
[Report This]Date: August 08 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 16: Shocking News - Part 2
Ah, the possibilities... This is finally starting to heat up! Christy's getting the idea now, I hope that Tris starts to 'come out', and realise that the two of them need another tiny to play with....
Damn Carly just had to sit her 'big butt' on her (little)brother, and smother him out! :(
I was hoping that Christy would rescue him, from that 'captivity' and give him a good home with her,... she could still use the hamster cage, if he got homesick...
Ha, ha... I think that Christy will have to find another shrunken 'co-worker', *Hint Hint*
Great chapter Man!
*P.S.- sorry if I offended you w/ that last review, but I call em like I see em! ;) Ya wouldn't want me to just give ya a bunch of B.S. would ya?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :D Also don't worry about Christy not having her own plaything, plenty of other things will come along in later chapters ;) P.S. No you haven't offended me at all, I don't see how you could have :P
Date: August 08 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Wow. You're really an amazing author. It keeps getting better. And you're updating the story so fast, that's incredible. Please, keep it up, you're doing great !
Author's Response: Thanks! It's reviews like these which keep me updating the story :)
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Ooh, wonder how far Christy's going to take this. With any luck, Tris'll either remain oblivious, or be turned on by this.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Anything I say in reply would probably spoil the next chapter :P
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 14: Shower Operation
Okay,... so, just HOW, did he breath...
I mean like, where did he get enough air? I don't think that a 25 yr old woman would be that, 'Loose enough' to contain that much air.
I don't know, that was kind of, just... weird? But whatever...
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I hope that the next chapter takes up where this one leaves off, and Kai gets to pretend to be Mr. Dildo again... only this time, he could just stay on the outer area and do his thing! ;`)
Author's Response: I guess you just need to use your imagination, I just picture Kai being able to breath :P
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Meeting
I think the reaction I would have to Carly's little story would more be disgust than bewilderment. Also, I think it's time for Tris to suck it up and let Christy in on her predicament. She might be amused by it, but she's not going to be all judgmental.
Author's Response: Yes I think Christy would leap at the opportunity to help if Tris told her about it :P
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Really impressed with how quickly you're releasing these chapters. How's kai going to get out, hmm? Maybe tris'll need a little help.
Author's Response: Thanks :) I have a few ideas of how she will get Kai out.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Meeting
I'd like to see a short side-story about Carly and her brother. Maybe, something a little different... She could bring her brother to work with her, and sometime during the day he would come up missing?
Everyone searches for him and they can't find him anywhere...
Some artical of his clothing is found next to the trash compactor (or something like that) and everyone thinks that he's been killed, but then...
Christy finds him and decides to take him back to his sister, but he begs her to keep him away from her because she treats him like a pet...
Christy re-conciders, and decides to keep him...
---or something along those lines, would allow you to split the story and get another plot line going.
Just a suggestion... ;`)
Author's Response: That is some suggestion :D I've been trying to think of a way to split the story for a while and I think I have a good idea, but these suggestions you give me are definitely helping with some parts of the story :)