[Report This]Date: September 22 2014 8:12 PM Title: Miles High and Unaware
amazing firsty time review and i have to say fantastic keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Thanks a ton and i am glad that my story gets your first review. I will continue to work on this story and attempt to make every chapter good quality.
Date: September 21 2014 3:11 PM Title: Terror Beneath Her Feet
Can't wait for tommorrow
Author's Response:
I hope it will be done by monday LOL, still working out the kinks of the chapter.
Date: September 19 2014 2:46 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
Love this story. Your best work yet. Please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying the story. I am currently writing the next chapter and I hope to have it uploaded soon.
Date: September 16 2014 6:33 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
I agree this is a master piece it have it bookmarked. I love to reread it. Can't wait until the next update
Author's Response:
Hopefuly I will have the update up as early as monday, this chaper I am writing is a bit more difficult to write than my last chapters, since I am changing the setting.
Date: September 16 2014 6:11 AM Title: Welcome to The Party!
Please dear god keep writing this story is awesome can't wait for more do keep me in suspense lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment and I am happy that you enjoy the series enough to want me to continue. I just haven't been motivated for awhile due to lack of comments. Stories take a lot of time and I work pretty hard on them so I lose my motivation when people won't even leave me even a little comment about the story, it feels as if I am writing for nobody and that nobody acknowledges the work, so I took a step back from writing.
But thanks a ton for the comment, I am glad to just receive them. I will continue the story soon, I feel it's the best one I have written and I want to take it to the end, so look out for it.
Date: August 21 2014 9:32 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
Decided to read through the reviews again. Doing a great job still! Just wanted to stop and say i partially agree with simpson3k, cuz im more of a butt crush fan (neck and neck with soft vore) but i do like the parts that do include butt crush. Personally i'd like to see more.
Also i partially agree with userdoesnotexist im not big on the caps. Mainly because like they said we already know she is big, and to me caps looks like the person is shouting, which kinda throws me off balance a little but i can still deal with it.
Gl for the rest of the story! ^_^
Author's Response:
Butt crush is not really my thing, but I will try to find a way to include some more into this story or save a good butt crush scene in another story. I removed the all caps on my later chapters, so that wont be an annoying issue in the future.
Thanks for the review, I am glad to recieve feed back and hear what people want to read.
Date: August 09 2014 1:26 PM Title: Extermination
Nice described and detailed footcrush scenes, sadly the only buttcrush scene is a joke compaired to that.
Nearly a full chapter only about the deathes a single step caused, and ..about 3 lines about the death that the girl sat down caused...and nobody seemed to be on the couch below sissy.
I am dissapointed
Author's Response:
I am not good at writing butt crush, but don't worry I will try to deliver some butt crush on a future chapter.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 5:10 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
That Greg is the biggest BITCH I've ever seen on this website! for that you get a 10!
Author's Response:
I was trying to make him a person people loath, guess I portrayed him the right way. Thanks for the comment.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 3:26 PM Title: Extermination
I enjoyed the death between breasts. Great scene
Author's Response:
Thanks! It is acually my first time writing a between breast crush scene ever, so I am glad someone enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 3:11 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
I just don't see how there's going to be any way out of this for any of them. They're just too small to be even perceived as people.
Author's Response:
I agree with you there, they are pretty much screwed and thanks a ton for the comment.
Date: July 30 2014 1:39 AM Title: Welcome to The Party!
@ UserDoesNotExist
after further consideration I think I will stop the all caps. I have seen this technique work recently on a few stories written by friends of mine of DA and it had a great effect on the story, but this techinique can be annoying in stories with alot of dialouge and I think I will stop the all caps starting from my new chapter (unless others like the effect then i will keep it) I almost forgot to listen to my audiance and I don't want to seem like a hard headed guy who doesn't take critisism.
Date: July 29 2014 11:22 PM Title: Terror Beneath Her Feet
Yea, bud, look. I know it's a technique used by writers, but it's also a technique that's very, very, outdated. When I see all caps I think of an immature internet argument run by 12 year olds smashing at a keyboard. I don't think ginormous.
Descriptions speak louder then word formatting. Mentioning how her voice echoed, boomed, etc. is a lot less grating then writing in capitols.
Author's Response:
I am sorry that is the way you depict the all caps use, but I will use it until I receive more complaints, so far I have gotten none concerning this subject and it doesn't take away from the story in any way. I do appreciate your stand on the subject and will take it into account when using the all caps becomes a nuisance to the other readers and decide to reconsider the use of all caps for the effect I am trying to produce, but so far I had no other complaints and I wouldn't want to change something based on an individual's pet peeve. Yet I am glad you told me about the technique being outdated and I appreciate your advice, but I will stick to what has been working for me til this point until I find the technique serves no purpose or is annoying.
if you for any reason continue this convo, plz message me, I get excited when I get reviews and will be disappointed to see the review is only in reply to this convo.
Date: July 29 2014 5:47 AM Title: Terror Beneath Her Feet
Okay, look, we get she's big.
Don't capatalize her words.
Author's Response:
Making her words in caps is a technique that i have seen done in many successful stories. It is not done simply because she is big, but to place an emphasis on the loudness of her voice to the people who are tiny. Sorry if it's not too your liking, but I will use the caps.
Date: July 29 2014 3:34 AM Title: Terror of my unaware sister?
All I can say is BRAVO! I really like where it is going, the way the scenes are depicted and the sweaty toes, unawareness, their size,.. all this makes this story a fantastic story, really hope a lot of chapters will come out eventually, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch, I will try to update the story more often and try to keep the story of decent quality. I am glad you enjoy it and hope and hope you will follow this story to it's end.
Date: July 28 2014 2:23 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
I´m sorry for my language.
Increicble. Simplemente increible. Soy un gran fan de la acción inconciente, y más aun cuando la gente hace sufrir a los personajes, concientemente, como bichos de formas sadicas y morbosas sin darse cuenta que no lo son, y espero poder seguir esta historia hasta el final.
Good luck.
Author's Response:
Thanks a ton for the review and I also hope you continue to follow this story to the end.
Date: July 21 2014 7:12 AM Title: Yummy!
So far this has been one of the best stories I have seen on this site, please continue to update this story. I'm loving the unaware element you have gone for and hope it stays throughout the whole story.
Author's Response:
Don't worry this story will continue and remain an unaware story. I just need to fix some of the chapters I wrote and the lack of reviews makes me feel I can take my time. So thank you for the review and I wiil try to get the next chapter out soon.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2014 11:37 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
Love this story, and im glad i accidentally clicked "most recent" on the day u posted this. In fact, i like where its going so much i finally made an acount just to tell you to keep it up, your doing great! ^_^
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am also glad you accidentally got to this story as well LOL. I am glad you enjoyed this and promise to keep the story going and deliver on creating a good story (at least i hope I can). Thanks for your support, I hope the future chapters will be to your liking.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 3:20 PM Title: Terror Beneath Her Feet
I'm loving this story! The first chapter was a little slow, but it has really picked up. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for this review, I am glad to hear that the pace is going just the way I planned. I hope you continue reading because this story will continue with relentless giantess action through out.
Date: June 25 2014 7:11 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
Love the set-up, loads of potential. I'll be eager to see where you take this!
Author's Response:
Thanks, i was hoping this chapter would show the potential of this story. Glad this chapter did its job.
Date: June 25 2014 6:52 PM Title: Welcome to The Party!
Great setup, as always! Hope to hear more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, there definately will be more, I have about three chapters already done.