Date: July 23 2023 4:17 PM Title: Ramona Part 1: Self Conscious
Man I loved the tales series, just discovered it and hope you bring it back one day
[Report This]Date: October 29 2014 5:22 AM Title: Ramona Part 5: Break
Did Greg just break his own wrist? Can people actually do that to themselves? Anyway, this story was pretty good. But I'm glad Tales in continuing. Especially since it's been almost half a year.
Author's Response:
No he dislocated three of his finger. It happened to me when I got them stuck in a soda bottle. Doctor basically popped them back into place and said get lost.
Half a year holy crap! College will do that, I better get on it! (runs away frantically)
Date: October 27 2014 2:22 PM Title: Ramona Part 5: Break
Great look at these characters earlier lives. Greg & Ramona faced their issues a lot more head on than I had thought from reading the present day series, it's very interesting. Really good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks realirs for keeping it real. I just hope people liked it and it didn't completely fudge up the characters.
Date: October 27 2014 2:22 PM Title: Ramona Part 5: Break
Great look at these characters earlier lives. Greg & Ramona faced their issues a lot more head on than I had thought from reading the present day series, it's very interesting. Really good work.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2014 2:57 AM Title: Ramona Part 5: Break
Sooo . . . you won't be writing here anymore? If that's the case, I'm sorry to hear that. I think your series if one of the better ones in the community and I was hoping this chapter signaled that you were getting back to it. I hope I'm wrong and that you will continue this marvelous series.
Author's Response:
It was a joke. Humor is very hard to convey through text. I'll never be funny :(
I'm going back to Tales story expect an update in the next few weeks.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 11:33 AM Title: Ramona Part 4: Growing Pains
Excellent work. I like Ramona's relationship with Greg. I feel a bit sorry for Mary, but she seems to be holding up ok.
Author's Response:
Mary's doing okay. Seeing as she's not elevated she probably won't get a story in this series but might be a recurring side character. Depends on who I chose next.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 10:30 AM Title: Ramona Part 4: Growing Pains
Great to see you back :).
Enjoyed this chapter a good bit. Watching Ramona adjust in a world that isn't quite used to elevation and with little idea as to how to support people going through it is an interesting is an interesting thing, and I particularly enjoyed the look at the better...insight, that elevation bestows.
Also good to see some familiar faces. Poor Sheila :(
Author's Response:
The world hasn't quite figured out what's going on yet. The title shouldn't be new world it should be "Old world that's almost new but not yet maybe in two years or something" But that was too long.
Poor Sheila? Feel bad for the chump who got his leg broken. I wonder who he was? Probably no one important.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 2:38 AM Title: Ramona Part 4: Growing Pains
I was just about to say that lol.
'Now you're John Hammond' - Ian Malcolm.
Great chapter.
Aaron
Author's Response:
You were to busy worrying if you could you didn't stop to think if you should.-Ian Malcolm
[Report This]Date: July 03 2014 3:19 AM Title: Ramona Part 1: Self Conscious
Great chapter! I would love to see you continue writing stories from this world. To offer up a theory for the other reviewer in regards to the lack of suspense. Yes, we know the outcome, but not was involved in the journey nor the length of time to get there.
By the beginning of the main story we know that some time had gone by. Elevation was a new phenomonom here, but was normal in the future. To the point where being a normal was strange and started to face discrimination and abuse, as in Greg's job and mugging. The main thing to note in this story is that they were on the verge of moving in together, but hadn't by the start of the main story. By then SHE had moved into her OWN place. So I can suppose that they had some troubles and an adjustment period. I can guess that because they were close friends for years before they became lovers is what probably saved and strengthened their future relationship.
Author's Response:
Wow! Good job. I think you know more than I do!
[Report This]Date: July 03 2014 1:12 AM Title: Ramona Part 3: Ordinary Day
I really liked this chapter. Sorry if my past comments made me sound like I was hating on Ramona and Greg. I just always thought that they were an odd choice for focal characters because they didn't do much in the main story. This prequel story suits them much better.
Judging by how surprised Ramona is by people she knows elevating, I have to assume that people didn't start elevating until maybe a year before this story begins. When did people start elevating in this universe?
Author's Response:
Without spoiling a reveal I have planned Elevation has be happening for few years but was so rare no one noticed.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 1:25 AM Title: Ramona Part 2: Changes
You bastard! You split them both up! Damn you. Damn you all to HELL!!!
Interesting chapter. Although, the problems I always have with prequels appear again. I usually know how it all ends, which takes away a degree of suspense. I'll probably still enjoy this. And although Greg and Ramona aren't too interesting to me, I can still read about Mary. Hopefully, that makes it better for me. I did always like the relationship between the sisters.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2014 8:57 PM Title: Ramona Part 1: Self Conscious
Any chance you'll make that character bio sheet? Because I think I forgot who Wally is. There are a lot of characters, and I'm not that good at remembering. XP But I'm interesting in what's going to happen next time.
Author's Response:
Wally is Walter Ramona and Mary's older brother. I referred to him as Wally tp prevent confusion between him and the Walter's family where Tyler comes from. Just wait till I introduce Sandra Walters just to make it more confusing..just joking I would never do that.
As for character bios well I guess I can try a preview of what I've been working on.
Date: June 16 2014 6:47 PM Title: Ramona Part 1: Self Conscious
Neat!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2014 5:13 PM Title: Ramona Part 1: Self Conscious
It's great to see you back writing again. Good little setup here, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks I hope people find it interesting.
Date: June 16 2014 4:32 PM Title: Ramona Part 1: Self Conscious
Can't wait to see where this goes. Ramona is a great place to start, even if it means poor Greg takes another beating in the past...
Author's Response:
Heh we'll see what happens but it probably won't be good for Greg.