Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

Just caught up with this story. Thst was a close call he had  a couple of chapters back witht he mom. Not sure this slumber party is a good idea. I have a feeling the number of people who know about his shrunken state will increase.

Reviewer: False Shepard Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh man that was a good interlude chapter. I'm starting to think Peter is a little Bi-Polar. That would explain the sudden mood changes and the dark thoughts that he can't seem to shake. That's just my guess :). As usual can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow, I just read all 8 chapters, and this is great, it is more like a story than a fantasy.

Theres a lot of good scenes and the plot changes often, expanding from Peter in Emily's room.

These moments with Joseph and the other animals are interesting. I was about to skip those parts, but they were actually entertaining.

Therer is a lack of sexy stuff in this story, but I think its about to be intense in the coming chapters.

Any chance Emily's mom will have some fun? I would like to see some action from her. Also, your description of Emily's mom made her look like a grandma in my opinion. She sounded lost and clueless and I hope that impression gets changed.

The story is fantastic though. I cant wait to read more. Very entertaining.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry to disappoint you on both levels but there won't be anything else involving Emily's mom and the sexy stuff won't be really intense.

The purpose of writing this story for me is to take some scenarios and fantasies and bring them to life, while keeping them as real as I can get away with. Sure sometimes I add in some completely unrealistic elements like Joseph the pet ant but even he has a purpose. Just a quick heads up, if your a writing critic then Joseph's point in the story might seem pretty stupid.

The point is I could add in a lot of sexy stuff but that would only take away from the story since it would be incredibly out of character (Emily just discovered a giantess fetish and the next day she's inserting Peter into her pussy).

So if you're looking for some intense sexual action I'm gonna have to say sorry to disappoint. I prefer to add in fetish material around a well built storyline.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well, at least she wasn't instant horny dominatrix like most other gts-mothers (of their daughters' shrunken boyfriends) are depicted.

Author's Response:

While I do enjoy reading about that I've grown very tired of that being the only depiction of gts mothers.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Things are heating up an this story just keeps getting better. I loved the butt part and I hope there is more of it???!!! Anyways keep it up bro!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I tried my best with the butt moment since people have requested it. And I definitely plan on adding more.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

You know, Emily's parents must have a lot of faith in her. To keep whatever friends of hers visit the house, while they're gone, completely in line, I mean. Because, if Tara is one of those "nobodies" who don't _ever_ come up to Emily's bedroom, than her family's living room is about to be visited by an even bigger nobody (lol)!

Btw: for someone reason, I keep picturing Emily as having the straight hair; and Tara, the wavy/curly look.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Heh-heh! I love Peter's moral stance. Reminds me of something Johnny Carson used to say on the (all-time best version of) THE TONIGHT SHOW.

"We have standards on this show, folks. And, someday, we're going to live up to them."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

He should've kept the arachnid as a pet. Assuming, of course, you wanted to keep the superheroic references coming.

"Spider Pete; Spider Pete!
He likes to smell Emily's feet."

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! Are we finally gonna find out who or what shrunk him down? It certainly feels that way after this chapter!

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

Intresting story. Your a talented writer. He's lucky that he woke up in the room of a freind. Then again I suspect that maybe no accident. I see a plan at work here. 

Fighting spiders and a mouse sucks but that ant is proving useful. First story I can recall where an ant is a pet to a shrunken man. 

 

Wonder where this story will go from here.