Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

 Sweet sweet chapter! Now it is clear, Peter must go all in, no more hiding, just let it all out! Tell his girl friends what he really feels! After they calm down over his attempted suicide of course. 

Reviewer: Mr E Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow what a cliffhanger! I cant wait to find out what happens to him!

Reviewer: Mr E Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is as about as realistic as you can get when it comes to shrinking. their not treating himlike an object, he has a foot fetish but neither the main character or the giantesses have gone crazy with it and he's dealing with stuff a tiny man might encounter, both psychologically and physicallly. Bravo!

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

WTF!

I knew that he has problems with being tiny. but I was not expecting a beakdown. Good thing you told me this si not the end of the story. Otherwise I would have assumed he died at the end of the installment. 

Wonder what's going to happen next?

Reviewer: blackairow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm.. Excelent chapter and you got me thinking. Actualy a few things that Peter has said, thought and done have me thinking. I'm starting to wonder if Peter has a Manic-Depressive Illness (aka Bipolar Disorder). In an early chapter Peter refers to hitting his first wall. He talks as though he is on a medication but due to his current situation is now without it (but never flat out says medication I'll admit). In another chapter Peter mentions that he is keeping an even bigger secret from Emily and is afraid of how she would react to learning it. On multiple occasions Peter has shown him self to act impulsively and maybe even recklessly at times. He seems like a very active and creative person. He generaly is calm and collected but can get aggitated and irritable. 

Since fighting the spider however he seems like a slightly different Peter. Which is understandable given the enormous stress he was under and his lack of sleep as a result. He seems more quiet, reserved and maybe a little anti-social. He also doesn't seem to enjoy things he would normaly enjoy (painting Emily's toe nails). Again understandable and really not that different. Not until he take offence to the prank with the spider and Emily saying "small thing" anyway. From there you see a major mood change in him and see him bottle up his emotions until it all comes out in a big explosion. Durring his explosion his thoughts express anger, guilt sadness, sellf loathing, loneiness, hopelessness and ultimately morbid sucicidal thoughts that lead to a suicide atempt. 

I say attempt because you say this isn't the end and I trust you.  So yea this is what this chapter has got me thinking about. To be honest when reading his thoughts in this chapter I thought that Peter was having auditory hallucinations. Assuming Peter does have a Manic-Depressive Illness and did have a major depressive episode, I would assume it was brought on by the stress with the spider and his lack of sleep. 

All that being said I could totaly be way off base with all of this and am simply way over analyzing all of this. Regardless as to wether or not I am right or not, it once again goes to show  how gifted and tallented you are as a writer. You truely have a gift at writing charaters who don't feel like characters in a story, but feel like real people. 

As always, looking forward to your next chapter :) 

Reviewer: Bravado Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok, this is by far the greatest story on this site, other then your other story, "who's really the bigger person" man I love your work, I'd seriously pay to read your stuff, now as for this story, you did one of the things I've always wanted to see happen in a giantess story, the main character attempt suicide, now im not a cold hearted bitch so don't think like that, but I've wanted to see someone in his situation finally break and take himself out, now im probably guessing a girl saves him and the story goes on, but still, thank you for being such a great writer

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

Yeah, it's true that Emily has been a huge help and set all these nice things up to accomodate Peter, but I feel like that's just something any decent human being would do for someone in need, especially for a friend.

And it's not as if taking care of Peter is this huge ordeal that eats up all of Emily's spare time either. For the most part, Peter's capable of taking care of himself with a bit of food and water from Emily every now and then.

Right now, I can't even fathom what Peter's been going through, and to have his friends make bad jokes about about the seriousness of his condition, at his expense? Especially when like he said, he's almost died several times? 

Peter's entire life has been turned upside down, all of the girls still have their lives intact, I think that maybe they could have been a little more understanding. I mean he had to fight a fucking spider! I'm scared as shit JUST going to sleep knowing there's one nearby, I can only imagine the nightmare fuel an encounter like Peter's would have given me!

Anyway, despite all I've said I consent to the fact that he's got some of the gentlest giantesses ever written on this site. It's just that I don't find them without fault either...

Hopefully he makes it out of this alive. Maybe he feels like a dick right now for what he said, and yeah, it WAS harsh, I'm not gonna deny that. But I really think that BOTH him and the girls need to apologize here.

 

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Your muse is going into overdrive. That some battle with the spider. Hope that's the last we see of spiders in this story.

Author's Response:

Trust me, I'm done with the spider. Seriously, thinking about it while I typed out the chapter gave me the creeps. I actually had to look over my shoulder a few times because I could not stop picturing the entire scene.

Reviewer: blackairow Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

Another great chapter. And yea you'll get no complaints from me that it was up sooner than later. I think this is my favorit story at the moment. As always, looking forward to the next one :)

Author's Response:

Well then I'll have to take my time with these next few chapters. Some heavy stuff is about to go happen and I want to do it as best as I can.

 

Hey, with all of the kind words you guys have been saying you deserve a story as good as I can try and write.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

First off; Emily could be mischievous and still be pure of heart. After all; nobody is 100% perfect! And, if Emily and company are gentle and unselfish, more often than not, then that Zulu legend could still apply to Pete.

Which brings me to my next nitpick; if that stranger couldn't see or hear him, what makes Peter think Tim would be an exception to the rule? Especially, if Tim is an immature shit-head more often than not!

Still, I suppose it's better to err on the side of caution. So, I'll give this installment a nine, instead of the originally planned eight. ;-)

Author's Response:

Now the stranger didn't hear him . . . I never said he was unable to see him. There are in fact numerous reasons why Peter went completely unnoticed by that guy. But that man was entirely capable of seeing Peter, just like Emily's mom.