Date: June 20 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Beneath that smile was something entirely different? Better find a way to let it out or it'll consume you from within!
Sooner or later his secret will be out and he'll have to deal with it. Enjoying this so much!
Author's Response:
You'll have to figure that out yourself. The signs are all there.
Date: June 19 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Finally some action! Let's hope for more and naughtiness :)
Date: June 17 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hmm I take it Peter is on a medication. Question is what is he taking and why is he taking it. Now I'm looking for signs and symptoms to try and figure it out. As for the greater amount of survival aspect than the gts in the story, I'm not phased by it. Just like "Who's really the bigger person" you do an excelant job at creating characters and worlds that suck you in as a reader and hold your intrest and keep you wanting more. You're not just good at writing giantess stories, you're a great writer period.
Author's Response:
that means a lot to hear someone say that. Writing is what I love.
Date: June 16 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Do not forget boobs my fella jajajajajaja.
Excelent story ;D
Author's Response:
you can never forget about the boobs dude
Date: June 16 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Either Emily and Peter will discover new feelings about each other or they will have to deal with other girls finding him. I blame the necklace.
Date: June 16 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hope more giantess content is soon,,& also look forward to your new Sequel to Who's Really the Bigger Person.
Date: June 14 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Seems like a great story... Just read the 1st chapter, but I'm sure the rest will be great :)
Date: June 11 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, great story so far, you give great descriptions of everything hes experiencing and the ant-dog was kind of creative, a good relief side-character :P. I have to agree with a previous reviewer however some butt stuff, either aware or unaware, would put this story near my tops. Keep up the good work, loving it.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot. And don't worry there will be some butt stuff. But you'll have to wait a bit, all good things must take their time. I almost have this paced out just the way I want it and I'd hate to sacrifice the story for just one moment.
Date: June 07 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Although I don't have arachnophobia, spiders creep me out when they're shown up close. Altbough having a pet ant is weird to me, since they travel in groups a lotnof tuebtime and would probably not stay in the vicinity of a person.
The ant and spider size comparisons raises an interesting question. How small is Peter, in terms of measurement, anyway? I don't think it was brought up before.
P.S. : If you don't have your own computer, invest in a flash drive. Otherwise, things might get embarrassing.
Date: June 05 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far this is a very interesting and great story!! I like the adventure and the feet action incorporated into the story. I'd like for the butt action to come into the mix too! Butt action in these giantess stories is always the BEST!!! I can't wait until you involve it. Please add it soon and have lots of it. Thank you!!
Author's Response:
That will come i promise but you'll have to wait. I know exactly when I want the butt action to start but I have to take the time to set it up properly.
Date: June 05 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
He told her what he did durring the day, does that mean he told her about exploring her sneakers? Possible solution to saving your stories but only having s hared computer, you could save your stories to a usb flash drive. Loving the story so far, can't wait for the next chapter
Date: June 05 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
WHOA, this chapter was awesome, and also frightening as all hell. I hate spiders enough in real life to be VERY afraid of the prospect of bring attacked by one while tiny...A complaint I have is that it was kind of odd how both characters seemed to shrug off the fact that he was almost killed by a spider.
Emily only appeared to wanna kill the spider because she hates spiders and not cuz her it poses a threat and almost killed her best friend. Anyway, that bit of awkwardness was my only complaint this chapter. Looking forward to the next one!
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Also, about the "saving your works to a computer thing", you should open a google drive account and type all you stories in their built-in editor. You don't even need to download anything, the editor is online, or you could download it if you wanna use it offline too...
Anyway the point is that anything you type up in their editor is saved on the cloud. That way, when you logoff your account, all your writtings are stored away but not able to be reached by anyone you don't want to! It's VERY handy, especially if you don't have access to your own computer. And like an email, you can access your files and work on them from any computer with internet.
Date: June 05 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Worth the wait.
Yes, how did Emily get all those things? There might be things she ain't telling Peter.
Date: June 05 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice trick to get her to take her shoes off. I've never read or thought of anything like that before.
He's worried about her thinking he's weird becasue he likes, feet but I have a feeling further on in the story that wont be true. especially if he can think of ways to help her relax.
Date: June 05 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the realism (how she's helping him, how he's freaking out etc.). Also the details from the environment to the conversation which might be the most important part. his little freak out where he ran away from her was a nice touch too.
Date: May 31 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
What if Peter is right? He might have been joking but it would be a new perspective for all of them if it turned out she had grown in the first place? After all, the rest of her family are out....
Would be a twist on the title like your previous one .
Author's Response:
That would be a hell of a twist. But I don't know how to explain the giant house and the fact that no one has noticed the giant house. After all Emily has been going through her whole daily routine, in that time someone would have called the police.
Date: May 30 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am really liking your story!
I can see that you intend to make the plot and characters as realistic as possible and you are doing a great job at it! It's very refreshing for me to read a story where the main character is shrunk and held in care by a friend and not by a sex crazed giantess (not that I dont enjoy that.) Although, I hope that you continue writing this story with an amosphere similar to what you've shown thus far.
P.S. Mutual love and romance would be a much better route than making his female friend a dominatrix, in my opinion.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
And Emily isn't really a dominatrix, she's Peter's best friend. Of course she's going to take care of him but she's also going to tease him a little. Nothing sexual, just something a normal friend would do.
Date: May 30 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmm. I like giantesses, I like Batman, and I like this story. The only problem I have is that I feel that ... the main guy is having a little too much fun a little too fast in the story. You don't cry for nearly an hour about being shrunk and have fun in the Batcave that quickly. Hopefully this can be remedied with occassionql flashes of emotional distress from... the protagonist. Seriously, I tbink I forgot his name already.
Didn't spot any vlspelling errors, but then again, I wasn't paying attention.
Author's Response:
Well let's look at things through Peter's (the protagonist´s) eyes. Eyes he's feeling the overwhelming effects of shrinking to two and a half inches tall. He broke down crying and everything. Afterwards, when he's cried everything out of his system he's got nothing left to feel. Think back to when you were young and so upset by something you cried over it until you ran out of tears, where do you go after that? After you've felt about as upset as you can get you're pretty much just numb to the situation. To put it simply "Yes I'm shrunk. I've already cried over it, so what's left to do but move on?"
And then comes along a giantess who happens to also be your best friend. She comforts you, offers to take care of you, and let's you sleep in the fucking BatCave. I'd be feeling pretty good right about now.
But don't worry, Peter will have to learn to get used to being at his new size and dealing with some "teasing".
Date: May 30 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love the sense of fun mixed with the schocking situation. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Date: May 30 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice fun chapter. I hope you don't have her go razy with power and eventually see him as a sex toy. That's all, both of them are too likeable for that.