Date: April 18 2017 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: Mall Excusrion & Moving Along
Will there be more chapters or not?
I love this story so much.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Thought you abandoned this glad to see it back. One of my favorite stories on the site
Author's Response:
Nope, deffinetly not abandoned! I hope the next chapter will not take as long to get out. :)
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
really amazing story, I would love seeing if this is finished a story with the micro/nano guy not being invincible and would be digested. you gave incredible talent in writing out details and I love the conversations between the girls between the plot, also awesome mix in between with sarcasm humiliation and irony.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the high rating and praise, glad you're enjoying the story so far! I'm not sure if there will ever be a fatal end to the story, but perhaps an alternate ending someday. :)
[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Great story! You've written it really well! The AV parts are my favorite
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you enjoy the new chapter ^_^
[Report This]Date: November 24 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 5: Inner Journey with a side of Living
Very mass, continue the story with Adam's discovery.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 5: Inner Journey with a side of Living
Great story sofar. Your writing is good all I have to say is becareful of your grammar and spelling. The core of the book is great. You have good ideas and are letting them out in a way that others can enjoy it. Not bad for a first attempmt, even better since most first attempts are only one chapter. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I realize, especially after I read through it a few times, that I missed quite a bit in my proof read (It was late at the time). Usually a friend of mine reads through it and points things out to men, but he wasn't available when I went to post it and I wanted to get it up. As I've said before this isn't really my first attempt, but it is certainly my most successful so far :) I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I appreciate the critique; There always has to be a moment of pain so we can learn, grow, and adapt ;)
[Report This]Date: October 22 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Erotica followed by Consumption
I really hope youll contine one day. This story is amazing.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate the compliment! And yes, it will continue, shotly infact. You know how life just loves throwing you those curve balls every now and again ;)
[Report This]Date: September 22 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 4: Erotica followed by Consumption
Nice work on the last couple of chapters. It seems like he can never catch a break. I think I can guess how his fantastic journey might end...
Author's Response:
Indeed, he should have an interesting trip ahead of him :P Stay tuned, new chapter should be coming soon :D
[Report This]Date: August 22 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
This is... wow, it's great. You're definitely one of the best shrink authors I've read in a while - and I've been reading this stuff for, what, five years at least? I can't wait for the next post, and I'm glad to hear you're making it a non-fatal 'full tour'. I haven't read a good one of those in FOREVER. I have to agree, so many other foolish authors just type out tiny little descriptions of the parts that really matter.
You mentioned you wrote more stories elsewhere - you should put a link to them in your bio on here, I for one would love to read them. I just hope I can polish up my skills so I can become as good as you. ;)
Author's Response: Ha! I wouldn't say I'm that good, but I'm glad you've enjoyed what I've wrote so far. Next post should be coming up shorty, providing life give me time to actually write it :P As far as any others that I've wrote, the only other vore/giantess related on is already posted up here; For the most part everything else I've wrote is just normal creative writing or RP-ing Hope you continue to read! :)
Date: August 21 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Very well written! You are very vivid in almost every scene and it is a pleasure to read your story! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it and I hope you like what's to come! :)
[Report This]Date: August 20 2014 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: Erotica followed by Consumption
I continue to love the detail you put in. It's so easy to picture what's happening with the level of descriptive detail you use. I look forward to even more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the high vote. I'm glad you continue to enjoy the story, hopefully the next bit will be just as good :)
[Report This]Date: August 13 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
I've been a lurker here for a while, and your story is one of the most vivid and exciting that I've come across in a long while. I like that it is an adventurous story, but not voilent. And a lot of the situations you've illustrated are very well excecuted. In the next chapter, I look forward to your handling of Adam's current situation.
Author's Response: Thanks for the high praise and review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, and like they styling. Stay tuned, a new chapter will be coming soon :)
Date: July 24 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Was really enjoying this, hope you do more chapters
Author's Response: There will be soon, stay tuned :)
[Report This]Date: June 16 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 2: To the Depths and Back
Good show! The indirect character interactions through Adam's thoughts and Cassy's dreams greatly compensated for the lack of direct dialogue which is typically a huge weakness I tend to notice in most micro/unaware stories. Good transitions and an entertaining read!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far, and I'm glad everyone's liked the little dream transitions. Personally I had a feeling people were going to find that it detracted from the story by interrupting the main focus, but it seems to be quite the opposite :)
[Report This]Date: June 08 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
That was wonderfully descriptive and I liked the transitions between dream and reality, and occasionally shifting focus to Cassy's point of view. I really do like the stories that take on the giantess's POV, instead of always just being from the "victim's" perspective.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy the detail, that's usually one of the things that bugs me the most about a lot of writing in this particular fetish. Not so much on here, but else where you'll get a two sence description for something that should be a paragraph or more. Hopefully I'll be able to do something similar in the later chapters :)
[Report This]Date: June 08 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 2: To the Depths and Back
You did great on this chapter and personally I think his sister jess should be next. I think Brandy should be last because I'm a big fan of the girl who hates you stuff and on top of that, she can take him home which unlike being next door should be far enough away that he ends up having to get her attention in hopes that because they all got along in the past she'll help, of course it doesn't and she's quite unmoved by his plight and ends with her keeping him as a toy and laughs at his predicament while using and then discarding him after an incident which makes her think he's dead and laughs about it. Of course he's damaged but alive and makes it home on her unaware body. The ending is up to you, but if you go for a deathscene my suggestion is where his mother (or sister if your truly against using his mother for one reason or another) comes home and unawaringly finishes him off preferably not crushing until after death. Maybe fart or toilet, foot stink suffocation or sqeezing toe suffocation, or drowned in some way even if it's just in a bottle of her water.
Author's Response: Hate to disappoint, but the fatal part of vore/giantess never really appealed to me. Jess will be making an appearance shortly however! :)
Date: May 25 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
nice story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Another new author and another amazing story! This could be a very good story, Keep up the hard work. Hopefully the next chapter is just as good, or better!
Author's Response:
I also hope the response to the next chapter is as good. :)
And as I've said, this isn't my first story involving shrinking themes, but it is my first story posted on here.
Thank you for your high review! :)
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
You should definitely continue! This was one of the most elaborately described unaware stories I've read in a long time!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really appreciate it actually, especially coming from an author whose stories I've admired and eagerly awaited new chapters to! :)
I'm hoping everyone likes the next chapter as much, if not more than this one. :D
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks!