Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2014 2:37 PM Title: Dangerous Care Rides

It just blows my mind that you can up with something so perfect within a day. It's not just the witty and entirely realistic dailogue, but the descriptions are just unreal.

It's really heart warming to see how much she indulges him. She could refuse him at any time, but can't stand to see him hurt or dissapointed. It's also very funny to read! Though, I'd be lying if I said I spent most of the chapter laughing. ;)

And then after his little 'control session', she goes back to being the dominant one. It's more playful then it is controlling, I think.

Checking out the chapter end notes...

Yeah, that scenerio you mentioned sounds amazing. If I may make a suggestion, it would only be that during her work day he could wait for her to have a customer, and then go ballistic inside of her to get 'revenge'.

Also, a chapter where they go to a movie could be fun too. There could be more food play, where he gets dropped into her popcorn. It would have to be a pretty vacant movie theater though, so they wouldn't get caught. Or it could entail some other type of sensual interaction.

Uh oh. I seem to be hogging all of the author's responses. I can just hear my fellow readers plotting my demise in the shadows. XD

Author's Response: I mentioned best reviews ever, didn't I? Just checking on that ;) I'm glad you liked the dialogue! Despite their vast differences, they're still a couple. And that's the sort of relationship I like- calling each other dicks and things among that sort. Haha. The revenge is interesting, although I didn't exactly plan to do that prompt :p But oh. My. Goodness!! That movie theatre idea is brilliant. You're brilliant! Don't be surprised if that happens in like the next few chapters or maybe even next chapter :o oh gosh... I feel bad now... I'm gonna start replying to everyone.

Reviewer: QMajor Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 11:24 PM Title: The Panty Prison

This is great!  You have a real talent for describing this stuff.  The interactions are intense but you still keep things gentle enough that the characters can seem real.  I look forward to wherever you take this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I work hard on the descriptions, it isn't easy! But I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 9:56 PM Title: Unaware Giantess

Another fantastic story!

As for suggestions, theres an unaware story I had in my previous review, but if thats not gentle enough, maybe we can have a overprotective wife. She loves use bondage on him, and he likes it too. The guy likes panties and she likes it too. Then the giantess wants to put the man in bondage AND put the man in her panties all tied up. The man doesnt want to do it, but the giantess says that it will bring her pleasure and keep her safe. The man finally thinks its a great idea and enjoys being literally helpless.

I know its similar to your first story but this has a little twist in it. Otherwise, there is always my first suggestion from my first review.

Anyway, I enjoy reading your work.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 1:42 PM Title: The Panty Prison

Hand play is an interesting scenario. And bath and shower scenes are also a lot of fun.

You know the Lurkmeister? That's awesome! I've been reading Birthday Wishes for quite a while. Can't get enough of Steve and Kelsey. :)

Also, I guess I don't assossiate domination with slaves. I think of it more as the giantess taking complete control. She would never hurt him or purposely frighten him, but she's not above simply using him for her own pleasure. He may not like it, but hopefully he'd enjoy it. Though, I also enjoy the thought of there being a loving relationship between the two, so role play is a better choice.

Now, as for this scene:

Unaware has always been something I've been drawn to, but it can be dangerous. The fact that she indulged him so that he could feel like the one in control is so cool. And then he just shrugs off his 'near-death' experience to help her achieve her pleasure. He knows now that he was never in danger, but that still doesn't remove the feelings of hopelessness he had earlier.

That may be the only thing I don't totally agree with. He knows that she's in control and understands his limitations. But does he still fear asphyxia? It'd be neat to see some sort of heart to heart between them where they talk about this. Though, if you did do this, I may be run out of town for suggesting anything other than smut! Anyways, those are my thoughts.

*Reading the Chapter End Notes*

Inspired by...huh. Now that's a fun fact!

Author's Response: You give the best reviews in the entire world, I swear. I grin when I read them. I love bath scenes! Yes I do! Well not personally, I message him and he helped me get the confidence to write and such. I love his story too! It's great. I'm the same as you, actually. I don't think slaves connect with dominance- I don't really enjoy slave stories. But so many people associate giantesses with sadism, masocism, things like that. My tiny enjoys her taking control, enjoys when she uses his body for her pleasure. He likes it. She never has to force him to do anything- that's the dynamic I enjoy. And so in turn, she cares for him. To be perfectly honest, I never thought of the fear factor. I mean, I do plan for a chapter full of love making as opposed to fucking and insecurity, because despite being a giantess she's still human, still a woman. We're quite delicate! And so is the man, and being small to me is probably the most frightening thing. So yeah, there will he tenderness rather than smut and my own exploration of ideas. I'm happy to know at least you'll enjoy that! I'll be thinking on the fear however. You've intrigued me. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for your review.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 8:06 PM Title: The Panty Prison

One of the hottest chapters I have ever read!

I absolutely am fine with these characters without a name or description. Im tired of reading about these blonde giantesses and Im a fan of brunettes, so I appreciate that you let me fill this amazing story with my own descriptions.

As for suggestions, what about a tiny man wandering in a house and finds a woman using a sex toy?
For days, he gets aroused watching her use the toy and one day he decides to check out the sex toy when she leaves it on a pile of clothes on her bed. The guy approaches it and sniffs it cherishing the scent.
He leans in, closing his eyes to touch it, imagining the giantess using the toy, but then the man trips on a piece of clothing. The clothing was her wet panties where his limbs are now sticky. He makes the mistake of trying to rub the fluid off himself only to have his arms pinned to his sides.
Now, he wants to get out of there and decides to slide down the side of the bed. Only his legs are now free, so he reaches the edge and jumps. His body starts rolling along the side of the bed, and he lands in some wrapping paper as he continued rolling.
The wrapping paper sticks to the man, and it starts rolling him up until his is covered by the wrapping paper. The giantess returns to see the wrapped object and takes of the wrapping paper. She sees the man, but mistakens him for a sex toy. She gets excited and prepares to use him. The guy cant shout becuase the fluid has reached his mouth and tried up so he cant talk.
The guy, however, realizes that his arousal is fear and he tries squirming which entices the giantess to think that he is a vibrating sex toy. She uses him countless times, and he is placed where the sex toy originally was only to know that the giantess will use him everyday.

Anyway, excellent writing! I cant wait for the next chapter, or I guess in this case, the next story.

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 6:52 PM Title: Special Ingredient

This is some very nice work you've done. It might sound like a weird thing to fixate on, but I was very impressed with your ability to convey description through movement, particularly during the meatier part of the mouthplay. Given the complexity of a human interaction that has absolutely no basis in reality and therefore no easily accessed vocabulary to communicate how truly intimate it is, it can be hard to pull off, but you did it quite well. Overall, I think it's a neat experimentation with the genre to not give them names or even really identities: it's a relationship story, and it feels very tight and focused. Good luck to you in continuing.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 3:36 PM Title: The Panty Prison

Well...that was excellent. It's actually quite nice without names. Makes it easier to think of myself being the little dude. :D

My only concern is that we missed the previous night of fun, but I can just imagine what took place. And she usually keeps him pressed against her nipple while she's at work?! Man...this chick is definitely a keeper.

On the topic of ideas and suggestion... I'd definitely be interested in seeing a chapter with some mouth play. 5 inches is possibly my favorite, but  2 or 3 would be easier to work with. Breast play is also a close favorite!

I noticed that you didn't give any descriptions of the characters...save for the shrunken man's blue eyes. Not that I minded. I was able to mentally fill in the rest. ;) Then again, maybe that's the idea.

Author's Response: Oh, Hm, I messaged you privately through your contact in your profile, but I have figured out how to directly respond to you. Forgive me, I've been creeping on the site but have only just actually gotten one!

Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 1:40 PM Title: The Panty Prison

Haha, I enjoy that in less than twelve hours you went from being sure you had nothing to write to putting out a full fledged and incredibly hot story. :-) So happy to see you posting here and can't wait to see what happens next to your little man. ;-)