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Reviewer: shrinkpet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very much like the premise of this series

Thoroughly enjoyed the new format, interactions and also that little history segment.

Keep going and I can't wait to see more stories from you :D

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

Can't really remember what I had said in the other review...

Other than:

Mouth play = Awesome

and

New Format = Perfect

Excellent grammar and I also didn't notice any spelling errors. Although, in a chapter that hot, I seldom look for such things.

 

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very neat point of view on the familiar New World Order.  I love that you've focused in on the moment of transition from people like Catie being shrunk person to pets.

 

 

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