Date: April 30 2014 9:23 PM Title: The Wake Up
I read through this and can see similar beginnings to the original Titan. But like passer said it's not the only story on this site to use something similar. There was also Final Frontier and Girl from another star, to name a few. I hope you do your own thing though, I'm sure you'll be able to put a good spin on things from here.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 5:11 PM Title: New Home
You know, there are quite a few stories with the plot of giant humans from distant planet that traffic humans from earth for pets; but very few of them are ever mentioned, some have even been lost or taken down.
I think what you have so far is very good. There will be some to assume that this came from Titan. And I have nothing against the Titan series, but people have to remember that Titan is not the first to use this plot, and it certainly will not be the last.
Keep up the progress, cannot wait to see what plans you have in store, and how many more giantesses will be introduced.
Author's Response:
You know I had toyed witha Titan like idea a few years back, but I didn't have the account yet so I never wrote it. Then I got on one day and saw Titan. So, I guess, you could say that this does have a Titanes feel to if, but just like I had in an earlier review thsi is not going where anyone thinks it is. I can promise you that much.
Date: April 30 2014 1:35 AM Title: The Wake Up
@Stubbornstain
Really Nomad had too much sex/alchohol? There's like literally one sex scene in Nomad between Luke and Aisell towards the beginning. And another "implied" sex scene MUCH later on. Compared to Physics, Nomad is downright tame so far, remember how much kinkiness Niall/Nas had in that story, plus all the alchohol drinking when in the holodeck rooms?
Date: April 30 2014 1:10 AM Title: New Home
Was this in any way inspired by the Titan series by any chance? I liked "Titan: Psychics" but the original Titan got boring and Titan: Nomad had too much alchohol and sex in it for me. I haven't bothered with any other versions.
What you have is good and you have included some of the finer details people may not think about. Still, I was hoping for a little more substance, but not to worry. I'll keep reading anyway since I am intruiged.
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This of anything that is missing or any questions you have.
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Author's Response:
You know I was wondering how long it would take someone to ask that question. The answer is yes, but it's not going were you think its going. I still have about 20-25 more giantesses to intro. If you're wondering you'll meet them in the next 3 or 4 chapters.
Date: April 30 2014 12:55 AM Title: The Wake Up
The first couple of paragraphs where rather long, but was an interesting read nonetheless. You should remember that each paragraph contains one idea, and that's when you know to start a new paragraph. For example, one idea is setting the scene and then a new idea is telling the reader a bit about Robert. The description you do have is good but it's let down by the huge paragraphs.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 11:40 PM Title: The Wake Up
I have no idea where this is going but I'll give it a chance.
Not bad on the descriptions but I would take more time establishing your setting. Good Luck. Keep writing.