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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 10:11 PM Title: 9. Fun and Games

Well all 9 of the chapters were good. I'd like to see this story continue.

Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 7:16 PM Title: 1. The beginning of your new life

Overall a really good story, and I can see why it was popular on DA.  One thing that really stood out to me was the armpit torture earlier in the story: not enough content like that floating around, and this worked pretty well.  Kudos!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 4:16 PM Title: 1. The beginning of your new life

Well this looks fun!

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