Date: July 24 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story and nice setting. Ryan got what he deserved.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 2:47 PM Title: Final Chapter (28)
Hmmmmmm! Either some counter-intelligence group, working for Uncle Sam, knew what Ryan was planning and had Ms. October infiltrate his cabal as a double-agent. Or, she's working for one of the other superpowers!*
In any case, this was a breath-taking pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing it.
*With an alias like Ms. October, I think I know which one. ;-)
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
WHEW! I can't believe I read all these inervening chapters in one sitting. You do know how to spin one riveting yarn!
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Two words: Battle Royale!
Author's Response:
Season 2 is out if you want to check that out. The sequel to this story.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
The Showa era (1954-1975) was the best.
MRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAW!
Date: July 08 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
A truly...climactic chapter. ;-D
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wednesday-Thursday-Friday?????
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
So much for putting the "fun" in "dysfunctional."
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well, at least we now know why Alex is behaving this to Jaden. Crap rolls downhill! But, while it explains, it still doesn't excuse.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the thinly-disguised satire within her rant. Very quasi-Swiftian!
[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
Goddammit! So here I am coming back to this story after a while, and THIS is my ending for Ryan? Yeah, sure I wanted him to die in the most gruesome way possible, but I didn't want him limbless, losing blood and left for dead, while he cries in repentance for what he did.
Actually, maybe that WAS what I wanted to see. But I didn't want him LEFT for death. That's TOO cruel. I have standards, for Pete's sake!
Actually, I don't know if I mind this. Let me mull this over for a while.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2014 12:00 AM Title: Final Chapter (28)
Well i read your first, now i definitely know the second will be great :)
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great Story, i like it when giantess are more than only rampage mashines of destruction :)
I really do hope you continue this even if only in another story.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful ending to an awesome story, can't wait for the sequel ;)
[Report This]Date: August 31 2014 10:32 AM Title: Final Chapter (28)
would love to have a follow up chapter of jaden's, alex's and ava's fun time together!
great story btw!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2014 11:05 PM Title: Final Chapter (28)
This was a great story filled with turns and cliffhangers. Was hoping to hear more about Crystal and her friend(can't remember her name unfortunately).
aaron
PS loved the ending that leaves room for a sequel.
Author's Response:
That was the point lol. The sequel (when I get to it) will be twice as deadly, twice as messed up...but it will be awesome!!!!!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2014 9:23 PM Title: Final Chapter (28)
That was an amazing end to the story :) well done for finishing it and keeping it at the same good quality through out. For a first story it couldn't of gone better :p. Glad Ryan finally had his life brought to a brutal end. Jadens one lucky guy lol.
Author's Response:
Lol thanks. I always wanted a woman's point of view to all this. I message you on kik, hope you reply if I do.
Other than that thanks for following the story. I really appreciate the comments and feedback.
Date: August 30 2014 8:14 PM Title: Final Chapter (28)
That was a great ending, I look forward to your next story, there better be one :) (but seriously, you are a really good author.)
Author's Response:
I appreciate the feedback and compliment. I'm trying to be a better author than I already am lol.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2014 8:14 PM Title: Final Chapter (28)
This was an amazing way to end the story! Kind of found the whole final battle thing was a little over the top (liked the first half better), but hey, I can't really complain, it's just a story after all, & things had to pick up somehow!
Can't wait to see what the next story brings! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for following the story like you have. I'm just excited that I made over 200 reviews my first story on here...time to do some back flips lol.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2014 6:56 PM Title: Final Chapter (28)
You probably can't hear it through the computer screen but I'm clapping for you.
I really loved this story man it had everything: characters that felt real, a solid story line, a visible relationship between giantesses and regular sized people, an air of mystery, and some great backstories. My favorite scene has got to be when Jaden had a break down while Alex was trying to kill him. The sheer emotion he was feeling was palpable and it felt real. The parts told through Jaden's view points were the best. Everything from when he was explaining his past to when he was hanging on that metal cross (oh wouldn't it be hilariously ironic if Jaden was an atheist).
Some parts it seemed like you were dragging it out a bit, like when the girls spent a half hour talking to each other outside about how they're ready to storm Ryan's base of operations. But you know what? I didn't even mind all that much. It was good build up to a brutal hallway fight. And I definitely love Jaden throwing down in fisticuffs with Ryan after he was reduced to normal size. That more than anything felt satisfying.
All in all man you did an amazing job with this story and I comend you for being able to make it last as long as you did, I have yet to reach a story that's at least twenty chapters. I look forward to the sequel you have planned.
Also I'd very much appreciate if you'd point out to me some of the women on this site that you mentioned before. I'm very interested to see what they have to say on the subject of giantess fantasies. ;)
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the feedback and as for the girls on here. One reviewed directly under on you and I've seen a few names on here. At least I hope they are women....If not...I will be sad.