Date: August 01 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great! Time for payback! Ryan will feel the pain he inflicted on others!
Author's Response:
I'm actually excited on typing the next chapter. I have to sit and brainstorm the ideas now lol.
Date: July 31 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 24
Such a cliffhanger!... Can't wait till the next chapter!
Date: July 26 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I must say I find it very clever how you manage to tie in different elements that most people forget about. Kind of like the show Avatar. Awesome job developing Alex's character.
I can't wait to see the big climactic battle.
Date: July 25 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
OK, looking forward to Chapt. 25.
Interesting word count on this story: 111,111.
Date: July 25 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
Not gonna lie I have been following this story intently since last week anxiously awaiting updates. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!! lol Part of me hopes that Jaden grows however, this story has opened my eyes to other aspects of the giantess fetish such as tiny man.
Date: July 24 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was a little confused at the end, who was Alex pointing her gun at?
I thoroughly enjoyed this and yes, Alex does have a real dilemma. Make Jaden a mega who could help stomp Ryan despite Jaden saying he was fine with his size as it or shrink Ryan and crush him right there but pass on making Jaden their equal in size?
Ryan tried his best to make Jaden hate Alex but haha it failed so badly. I can't wait to see who she fires the gun at and also what the gothic giantess is waiting for.
Author's Response:
She's pointing it at Ryan.
The gothic giantess....oh you'll see you'll all see...I did give a spoiler alert about her; just make sure you remember her and remember her well.
Date: July 21 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
Definitely enjoyed this, it was a relief to find out Crystal survived another chapter. Now its time to deal with Ryan, that giant turd.
Date: July 20 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome chapter!... If there is indeed a sequel, it'll be hard to top this story!
Date: July 20 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome chapter!... If there is indeed a sequel, it'll be hard to top this story!
Date: July 20 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so glad Crystal survived that! And Toya, good riddance, she didn't show any redeeming qualities at all, and if she DID have them well too bad! Not everyone should get a pardon, especially from something as fucked up as killing an entire family in cold blood!
Date: July 15 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
This story is amazing! I can't wait for more. I'm off to check out your other stories, thanks so much.
Author's Response:
Sorry this is the first of many stories lol!
Date: July 08 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well, this has to end soon... I just know it does. Great chapter as always! :)
As for hint to season 2, I guess this means there's a sequel in the works!... Awesome to hear!
Date: July 08 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Damn it, Crystal looks very dead now! They need a miracle since Ava is close to death as well, Tasha can't do anything and Alex is hopelessly outnumbered.
Author's Response:
Crystal isn't dead...Yet anyway...As I went back and reread the chapter I noticed that the wrong message may have been given on that part. Which was my mistake and will be cleared up immediately....Actually it already is...Crystal is still alive for at least one more second.
So again sorry for the misunderstanding but no Crystal isn't dead
Date: July 06 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, shit has hit the fan! A bunch of GTS, soldiers and Ryan all vs 3 GTS's! How the hell are they supposed to win this one?
Author's Response:
How indeed my friend. Truth be told...I don't even know lol.
Date: July 06 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
This chapter was great. When I first started reading this story, I had absolutely no idea the plot would get so deep and complicated!
I can't wait to see how this a ends!
Author's Response:
I know right, That's the joy of free writing! Only brainstormed the beginning and off I went from there lol!
Date: July 05 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Damn damn this is one hell of a cliffhanger! Don't keep us waiting for too long.
Author's Response:
Lol I'm working I'm working!
Date: July 05 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bravo my friend, that was a pretty good backstory for Ava, now I know what she meant when she said she's killed before.
I can't wait to see what you go onto when this story is finished.
Author's Response:
I'm actually still brainstomring on that while I try to finish this one up, so now the readers have heard Ava's and Tasha's back story and why they are the way they are, now what about Alex? Oh the tangle web i weave lol.
Date: June 28 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
Whelp that certainly answers my question. Though now I'm curious to hear the girls stories as well (unless it was already explained and I missed it somehow). When did they first kill and why?
These characters of yours are so interesting I find myself wanting to know more and more.
Date: June 27 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 20
That ok, I'n glad your back. Life is funny that way. It gets in the way of things.
Here:
a hand full of regulars’
You mean: handful
And also, an apostrophie like that represents multiple ownership.
Date: June 26 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Can't wait for the last few chapters!