[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 6:06 PM Title: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
That line: " I'm big and you're not! I'm a freak and you're not! I'm a monster and you're not!"
Brilliant, it shows her true feelings. Deep down, she hates herself for being so big and scary. I guess even though she never wanted to be seen as a monster, she became one because she was seen and treated as one for so long she believed it.
Ben and his friends are nothing short of amazing, willing to forgive her for what she did to them. I guess now that the army has intervened it will be up to Ben to defend her. Quite the role reversal. Also, I need to change a last name in a future story of mine now that I know Amy's last name.
Author's Response:
As always your words are much appreciated.
And they haven't forgiven her yet, that will take time. But they do feel bad for her and want to understand her. Once that happens they'll decide if they forgive her or not.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 2:21 PM Title: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
I hope the next chapter isn't going to be one of those "Death by Poonga-poonga" deals.
Date: April 28 2014 9:21 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Aww, Amy is so cute! It's obvious how excited she is to have people at her house..I think deep down the gal just wants some decent friends who aren't afraid of her. Despite being a bitch, I feel bad for her: even having people willing to defy you must seem like a luxury amidst a sea of people who do everything you say without question! People who do what you say because of fear aren't friends...
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 9:14 PM Title: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
Best bully ever!
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 8:52 PM Title: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
Parkour eh? I think some MMA training could've had more of an effect against bullies, but I geuss no matter the skills, Amy still has the biggest advantage.
Amy's turning out to be quite the goddess. Can't wait to see what else she has planned.
Author's Response:
I thought it would make for a more interesting chase rather than run away whenever she puts her foot down.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 8:29 PM Title: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
I like how we get these little glimpses that they might start liking each other. But Ben can't give into her yet. He needs to continue challenging and surprising her.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 8:16 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
YESSSS!!!! You added the booty in the story!! I love this story now!! Just keep the butt in the story please??!!! If you're into gas from the butt go for it.. If not I love it just the way it is!! It would be cruel on Amys part but it would be a good punishment if Ben got out of line she could punish his friends!! I love da booty!!! Awesome story and keep the chapters long! Thank you for adding some butt
Date: April 28 2014 7:38 PM Title: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
Hmm, I don't hate Amy for some reason. She could do a lot worse than this. anow it remains to be seen how the boys counter. Might be up to Ben since Mark between her cheeks and Johnny immobilised by her breasts.
I would love to see how Ben finds a way to fight back, she is not as invincible as I thought and I can tell how she was amazed at how much harder it was to catch them than she believed so it is not all hatred and they got some insight as to why she feels so powerful when they were in her palm.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 7:11 PM Title: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
This story is still awesome. I really like the friendship between Ben, Mark and Johnny. But I didn't expect them to know parkour. The good thing is that you explained how they knew it in a semi-realistic way, and I enjoy realism in my giant woman fetish material.
In my last review, I gave you points off for improper spelling, while messing up a word myself (spelled condition as 'conditiin' by accident). Since that was hypocritical of me, I was going to omit the misspelling of "below" with "bellow" and give you full marks. Unfortunately, you messed up usage of the words "peek" and "peak", and for that you lose your full mark status. You only get 4.9 stars out of five for this chapter.
Also, spelling is less like kryptonite, and more like a vitamin. You're just spelling deficient.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I wanted them to know parkour because it seemed like a really cool element in a chase scene. Guys running around in circles is both boring for the read as well as for Amy. So I wanted to liven things up. But, like you, I enjoy realism. So I also had to figure out a way to incorporate without it being like a deus ex machina kind of thing. Once again Assassin's Creed has yet to let me down.
Btw I think I might be allergic to that vitamin.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 6:57 PM Title: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
This is a great chapter once again.. Have a feeling if feeling that once the torture is over, Ben will have some alone time with Amy... His friends may still have to deal with her though, so I wonder how ben's gonna take that
Date: April 28 2014 6:14 PM Title: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
Loved the new chapter man. Awesome in every way
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 7:51 AM Title: Window Shopping
As "tongue-in-cheek" as the last chapter was, you are proportionately serious with this one. Re: the all-too-plausible point that the local police would probably be ordered to ignore any official complaint via Amy's parents' friends in the state government. Thus, I look forward, quite eagerly, to the sixth chapter (to see whether or not, Ben's friends get "tortured," first).
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 7:29 AM Title: Free Samples
Yes, you did. Refreshingly so! Stabbing her tongue?! Definitely a new one.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 6:23 AM Title: Window Shopping
For curiosity's sake, can Mark be black? I feel like a group of three friends, one of them has to be a minority, and I've never met a black Johnny before.
I really dig this story. And the explanation as to why Amy's parents has the government by the balls is perfectly logical. In today's world, exclusion of a particular person solely on their condition is not approved of, so the government over-compensates to stay politically correct. Only in this case, Amy's conditiin is being 120 feet tall or something. One good attorney and Amy getting arrested can end up causing an incident.
P.S. You spelled "rumors" as "rummors". 4.99 stars out of 5. Clean up your act.
Author's Response:
Sure he can. I actually prefer diversity between groups of people in stories like this.
Clean up me act? Come on man, I wasn't kidding when I said spelling was my kryptonite. If the essence of spelling could be transmuted into a physical substance, it would kill me faster than exposure to Plutonium.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 1:48 AM Title: Window Shopping
Leaves us in suspense. Great chapter. Cannot wait to see where she takes them and what she will do to them or make them do.
aaron
Date: April 27 2014 10:16 PM Title: Window Shopping
Cool story, I like the scenarios a lot and the conflict between the characters. Interesting hints about Amy's backstory too and the various government projects involved with accompdating her. Will we learn the cause of her, um, gigantification or is that ultimately unimportant to the story?
Loved the mouthplay chpater. I know you're more of a foot guy but that was well done so if you ever feel like including more of that, I'd be in favor.
Date: April 27 2014 8:41 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I imagine the government is afraid of her and gadget, you're right. Everyone os afraid of her and this also increases the feeling of loneliness and this only made ot worse for her. Amy is also a victim here. No one understands her.
On a sidenote, I have a similar story in my head, would you like me to pm you the idea because once Aftermath is done, I want to write it and I don't want it to be a ripoff of this but it does have similarities to Consequences as well.
Author's Response:
Hell yeah man. I'd love to hear what you've got in mind.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 5:53 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
So even grown adults are compliant to her wishes. Shame on that bus driver for giving in so easily!
Is there really SO much government backing behind Amy that she's completely unaccountable for anything she does?
This was seen by AN adult and many more people; its practically kidnapping... Is everyone gonna ignore this one as well? No wonder the girl thinks she can bully anyone!
It's not even completely her fault she's like this, there is no discipline, no consequences. How do they expect a developing girl to turn out?
Great story you have here! This is slowly working it's way up my list of "the greats" on this website. I'm eager to see where things go from here!
Author's Response:
Now who ever said this was a world without consequences?
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 5:49 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Now is the perfect time for some butt in this story!! But so far very good!!
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 5:32 PM Title: Window Shopping
Great chapter... Can't wait to see what Amy does.