[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 9:58 PM Title: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
One of the best stories I've read in a while on this site. I enjoy that it's playful and somewhat relatable in terms of characters. Also, I like how it's a bit sensual, but isn't to extreme and doesn't have constant sexual themes. Can't the next chapter come any faster!?!?!!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 6:42 PM Title: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
Amy goes from megabrat to uber sympathetic in the span of two chapters.
Hope things work out for her.
Author's Response:
Do you think I rushed the transition? I want to make this as realistic as I can get it.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 12:45 PM Title: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
For some reason, I have the following old nursery rhyme running through my head.
"Ben and Amy, sitting in a tree..."
LOL!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 12:43 PM Title: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
When it comes to evil giantesses in stories, this one has my two favorite tropes:
- The hero rallying the other tinies to stand against her, and even being able to field an effect force against her. (Usually when I despise said giantess.)
- Redemption for the giantess, where she becomes more gentle in nature and maybe even becomes enamored with the hero.
Ironically, this story pits those two against each other. Amy's reign of terror is coming to an end. Unfortunately, she's also turned into a sympathetic character, and our hero whole led the charge against her now has to try and save her. I hope she gets visiting hours.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 6:17 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
So Ben wants to help? I think Amy does need help because she is going down, Ben's show of defiance finally inspired everyone to rise up against the "monster" but sadly, they've got it wrong
Pretty soon Amy will have the proverbial mob armed with torches and pitchforks battering down the door and the only people who can save her are Ben, Mark and Johnny.
Date: May 01 2014 4:33 AM Title: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 2:14 AM Title: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
Disappointingly short chapter. Which shows how fantastic I think this story is if I'm complaining about how it's too short of an update.
I guess I don't mind the army; they seem nice enough. I don't think the town will have much mercy on her, though. Although, I'm pretty sure people are allowed to visit those under house arrest freely.
I didn't catch any spelling or grammar errors today, but I really don't care. The sheer amount of disappointment I have get you a 4.9 out of 5 stars.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 9:04 PM Title: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
That qustioning of ben's last name sounded kind of like it had a connection to something. Is it possible the captain has a connection to ben's family?
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 4:37 PM Title: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
Just as she's starting to open up...the military has to show up.
I wonder if she's allowed visitors besides her parents when she's under house arrest. That's assuming Ben would want to come back, though, he'd be crazy not to.
Then again, the guys could do her a solid and claim that they came with her of their own free will.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 2:09 PM Title: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
Oh, frig! Another cliff-hanger; just when it was getting good.
Date: April 30 2014 1:26 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Wow, you did in less than a month what my story needed half a year to do. 88 reviews and counting.
Applause all around for that!
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 1:10 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
This is turning into one of my favorite reads on the site. One of the best parts, in my opinion, is the relationship between the three "nerds" Johnny, Ben, and Mark. Between the dialogue and the way they behave around each other it's obvious they are very close, and that lends itself to the story very well.
Amy is a very well made antagonist, and I see many different directions you could take her. I'm thinking Ben is gonna try to break her out of her shell, maybe with some personal interactions at school.
The military caught me by suprise at the end of your latest chapter. Seems like someone finally had enough of her behavior.
All in all a very well written and intriguing read. Definetly gonna be keeping my eyes' open for your updates :)
Date: April 29 2014 11:49 PM Title: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
Its ok guys, they have stockholm sindrome, so you can leave them alone now
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 7:57 PM Title: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
We'll someone was bound to call the authorities. 50 bucks it's the nurse she's the only other cheracter with any balls in this story. Ironically enough
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 7:51 PM Title: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
Did you and JTC coordinate your updates to drop these drama bombs on us? This story's seriously great. For a second, I was thinking that Amy's was getting too antagonistic with too little redemptive qualities, but this squashed that thought.
Oddly enough, the only part I thought was weird was the ending. I get that the authorities would eventually get involved, but isn't an army platoon, all wielding RPGs overkill? It's kind of like setting a moldy sandwich on fire, in my opinion. It's doubly weird considering that I love it when reality ensues in a story.
One other thing. For characters who are in nearly every chapter, Mark and Johnny have had little characterization except that they're nerds and they're true friends with Ben. Which isn't bad (Harry Potter's only real personality traits are the same). Maybe a little bit more definition to their characters would be appreciated.
Last thing. I found no spelling mistakes today. Unfortunately, you forgot to capitalize the starting sentence of the paragraph where Amy starts crying. Sloppy work, but you're technically improving. Only a 4.91 today...
Author's Response:
When you think about it it makes sense that the national guard would be called in. Originally it was going to be a seat team but they don't have the firepower necessary to look threatening. The RPG's are mainly going to be for show to keep her in line.
Date: April 29 2014 7:16 PM Title: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
This has to be the best chapter so far!. Great twist at the end with Amy being arrested. Can't wait to see if she'll be bailed out, or if her parents will finally say eniugh's enough... Kinda hoping she does. Was actually looking forward to Amy's story that she was about to tell :)
Date: April 29 2014 6:57 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
If she ever gets out of this, I would love to Amy and the three boys become friends, Amy trying to make it up to the people whom she bullied and also maybe even be more than friends with Ben.
Plus learning about Amy's tragic past is something I would love to read. Her parents might also be afraid of her but they wisely try to hide that fact from her so as to placate her.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 6:48 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Amazing story! I knew that deep down Amy was a decent gal. And as much as I love the fact that there are consequences for what she's done (and I do think she deserves this and more for all the people she's hurt), the timing couldn't have been worse!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 6:19 PM Title: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
Bad timing is bad.
Date: April 29 2014 6:09 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I have to say man....The way this story is going I can't stopped reading it. It surely is a step up from other giantess stories I've read. Keep it up man.