Date: April 23 2014 5:25 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Lonely is possible, she could be doing this to feel like she belongs somewhere and being the biggest bully in school is her role there. The little explanation of why the school was built this way helps as she is the only one to reach this size and this could make her feel lonely.
If Ben showed no fear, would it make her question her ways? No fear no matter what she does ?
Author's Response:
Well until now Amy has never faced someone who is unafraid of her. Now we get to see how she deals with it.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 5:20 PM Title: Service Hall
Sounds like Ben is going to regret his actions earlier. On second thought, nevermind. Getting her attention most likely the best thing that could ever happen to him.
@Nostory Yeah...I really don't think that she's shy. I didn't before, because of how she dropped that kid into her cleavage, but now it's even more apparent. I would however say that she's most likely lonely, and dominating her classmates by making them serve her makes her feel better about herself. That's just a theory though. She could also just be incredibly confident and used to getting what she wants.
I'm eager to see how this develops. It's possible that Ben could become her friend, and make her think about treating her classmates better, or she'll just follow through with her own thoughts, and he'll become her new toy.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 5:05 PM Title: Service Hall
Well Ben doesn't need to worry about meeting Amy, she will go to him. Curious to see where this will go, his dream girl is about to become his nightmare.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 8:51 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Awesome start so far... Reminds me of the story Adam and Ashley by ultradude306 or A Different View by DudeManGuy, with a mixed size school. Vince twist to have only one giant/giantess for a change though.
Cant wait to see what happens next... Is Amy the only one her size in the school/city?... Or are there others like her?
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot. And yes Amy's a one of a kind
Date: April 23 2014 1:29 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
@Vivid, maybe she is shy and socially awkward and this is the only way she can reach out to everyone else. Ben may just be what she needs, if he can survive the hell she'll put him through.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 9:08 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Pps feet and humiliation are my favorite tags.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 9:07 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Great idea for a story. I always enjoy it when bullies get what's coming to them. Hope to see more.
aaron
PS will you let us know why she's the only giantess or has she just always been one.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It is pretty cool to watch bullies get what they've earned. Unfortunately for Amy she's the (I can't believe I'm about to say this) biggest bully in the school (there I said it).
And I'll do my best to answer that, I've been going over different explanations in my head.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 8:46 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I wonder if her parents are rich, and paid for the construction of the school. Otherwise it's hard to make it seem 'believable'...but then again, I suppose that fiction doesn't always have to be.
I like the idea though. She's definitely not shy, so it seems like the fun is just starting.
Very cool.
Author's Response:
I know what you mean, I like it when fantasy stories of any kind are thorough. It leaves less room for questions which makes it easier to enjoy.
Speaking of which thank you for enjoying mine.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 8:17 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Huh gotta say I am intregued
Date: April 22 2014 7:47 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Well in that case we should have plenty of humiliation in this story but I wonder you will have her question her ways at some point in the story?
Author's Response:
There will definitely be some big changes. How that happens must wait until the end. Lately I haven't had a lot of free time on my hands but I'll try to get these chapters done as quickly as possible without having them suck.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 6:30 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
She doesn't seem too bad, does everyone fear her? If she only targets bullies then maybe she is not so terrible. I am interested in this story.
Author's Response:
She target's everybody and uses any excuse to strut her power. She'll do plenty more of that as the story continues.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 6:01 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Keep it up! Good start!
Author's Response:
I appreciate the kind words. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 5:21 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Good stuff so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks bro!
Date: April 22 2014 4:36 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Ooo boy you're ending it with the name of a Walter Dean Meyers book, they're either going to Vietnam or hell.
Author's Response:
I'm afraid I've never read that book. I actually chose to end it with a sort of Biblical reference. Though I wanted to leave it vague and open for interpretation for those of different beliefs.
Date: April 22 2014 3:13 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I had an idea for a somewhat similar story at one point. Unfortetunately, I never posted it, and it never made it past the first chapter.
Here:
went by over looked by everyone.
Overlooked is one word. Also it's "blonde" when referring to females. I don't know why, but it just is.
Author's Response:
Spelling, my greatest weakness.
thanks for the help bro. You should try out your story again. I love reading different versions of scenarios.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 2:45 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Now, THAT is a slam-bang opener!
Welcome to the club. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks man, I appreciate that.