[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 4:59 PM Title: Window Shopping
Short but we learned alot Amy's parents. I guess the kidnapping starts now, we'll see if my theories are right.
Date: April 27 2014 4:49 PM Title: Window Shopping
I've been following this one. Man your story is awesome! Keep updating man.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 4:38 PM Title: Window Shopping
Ahh, I see. I assumed they expected him to just change and continue on with his day, but this makes much more sense.
Finally...kidnapped. A lot more witnesses than I suspected though. I wonder how long she'll be able to hold on to them before the police get involved.
Also, I'm sorry to say that I noticed a fair amount of spelling errors, which don't annoy me in the slightest, as I could still read it fine. I just figured that if you wanted to avoid chrlorez's wrath, then you might want to check over the chapter again.
But yeah, this rocked. I assumed she would only have Ben to play this. This makes for much more fun.
Date: April 27 2014 6:23 AM Title: Free Samples
You spelled "albeit" wrong. Zero stars...
I'm not really a fan of vore. Or feet. Or abuse. I do like it when a small protagonist fights back; that makes things interesting. Although, I hope Ben gets Amy to become a better person.
Just to reiterate, I fucking love this story. But still, zero stars.
Author's Response:
Spelling man, my fucking kryptonite. Sorry.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 1:51 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Really enjoying this story so far. Got to agree with peterparker though, some butt action would be great.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 11:14 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I love this story and where I think it's going!! Is it possible to add some butt action in it?! A bit of booty makes everything better lol
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 9:57 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Really interesting story you have going on, and I love the change of pace of Ben instead of being passive and submissive, refusing to be pushed around and retaliating anyway he can.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 9:20 PM Title: Free Samples
The Brave Little Tailor.
A nice surprise, don't see a lot of tongue stabbings these days.
Author's Response:
Not gonna lie, that made me laugh just reading it.
Date: April 26 2014 9:09 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Ya, also thought that was kind of weird... Still a great chapter.
Date: April 26 2014 8:45 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Yes, Darian I understood what you meant. I was just saying that I'm surprised his friends didn't outright assume that he'd be traumitized by the event, and decide it would be best for him to go home. She didn't say that she wouldn't hurt him, and she went as far to say that she hadn't swallowed him...yet.
She drenched him in orange juice after threatening to drop him from about 200ft, which scared him enough that he could barely stand and vomitted upon reaching the nurses office. My thoughts are that the threat of being swallowed(or possibly chewed) would be an even more horrifying experience.
All I'm trying to say is that it felt to me that Johnny and Mark seemed to be less understanding of his experience then they could of been. There was a possibility that he could've died...especially if she had spit him out from her full height.
I've gotta throw in some criticism with the praise, or I wouldn't be doing my duty as a thinking reader. Not trying to annoy anyone. Just had to get my thoughts out there.
Author's Response:
I'm perfectly fine with criticism. I'm just happy that you're reading it. I love to write and I love gts and the fact that so many people are enjoying it is amazing. So you don't have to justify anything, they're your thoughts. If anything I'm grateful for guys like you reading my stuff.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 8:45 PM Title: Free Samples
Amy isn't as durable as I thought if a pen could hurt her. Now with her pride and body hurt by Ben, what will she do? She is not an evil giantess, I don't get that vibe from her.
She is a very lonely person who got hurt badly in the past and this is her only defence. I have a feeling that as her aura of invincibility fades, she is going to turn from bully to victim as some truly terrible people target her.
Whatever you're doing, this is brilliant ! I can't wait to see what you have in store in for the four of them. Ben and his friends are so likeable and Amy is too despite what she has done so far.
Author's Response:
She is durable, that's why he had to stab her tongue. I imagine it would be the equivalency to a tongue piercing for her.
Thanks so much for sticking with the story so far. It means a lot to know you enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 8:29 PM Title: Free Samples
Really digging this chapter and this series as a whole. Glad his friends didn't abandon him and in fact gave him the right idea to strike back at her. Of course this might mean they're on the hit list too now if she was paying attention.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 8:11 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Awesome! That stab to the tongue was SO satisfying! It's not really that I don't like violent/mean GTS but I was bullied as a kid and seeing a bully get his/her comeupins makes me giddy like a kid on christmas eve!
Great story you have here!
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 7:41 PM Title: Free Samples
Damn that was sexy! Mouth play is one of my favorite aspects of gts. So glad you included that!
Two chapters in one day?! Is it the constant 5 star ratings? Because I'm willing to keep 'em coming if that's what it takes, and I'd emplore my fellow readers and reviewers to do the same.
Stabbing Amy with a pen? Hilarious! His friends seemed concerned for his safety, but they still advised him to do it, which strikes me as strange. And then after his terrifying(for him of course...I would've loved it) ordeal, they say he can spend the rest of the day at school in his gym clothes. With friends like these...
And I'm not into vore either, but mouth play is a completely different idea if it's done correctly, which this totally was!
Ok, I'll stop now. I need sleeeep.
Author's Response:
Hey if it were my friend I'd advise the same thing. And yeah they tell him to wear his gym clothes. His normal clothes are saliva-ish, and its not like they have a spare change of clothes on them. The options are either gym clothes or his saliva clothes. And they took him to the nurse so he's not walking around the school in gym clothes.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 7:37 PM Title: Free Samples
Interesting... Still not sure about Amy... If she really wanted to hurt Ben l, she could've done worse., but on the other hand, maybe she's making this whole ordeal slow and painful for him.?
Author's Response:
She's not out to hurt him. She's out to humiliate him in front of everybody.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 7:37 PM Title: Free Samples
Interesting... Still not sure about Amy... If she really wanted to hurt Ben l, she could've done worse., but on the other hand, maybe she's making this whole ordeal slow and painful for him.?
Date: April 26 2014 3:51 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Damnit Nostory! Completely ruined it for me! Even though I had the same assumption, but seeing it written makes continuing the story seem pointless.
And yeah...I'm totally joking. To be honest, torture seems highly unlikely. But your probably thinking that he'll just be put in some very uncomfortable situations. Judging by the fact that there is a feet tag in the categories, and that Amy massaged her feet in the last capter, Ben is going to be spending a lot of time with her feet whether he likes it or not. Something tells me he's attracted to feet, so that won't be an issue.
He'll show her that he can be brave around her, and that he finds her incredibly beautiful. She's already said that she finds him handsome, and his defiance makes her feel normal. The coming chapters will reveal more of their attraction to one another.
Man...I spend too much time thinking things through. I've gotta learn to just relax and let the story surprise me. Then again, my predictions could be uprooted at a any time. Amy could take one look at Ben and go on a stomping spree at school tomorrow resulting in lethal force being taken by the military. Probable? Hell no...but anything can happen.
Date: April 26 2014 12:26 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I am going to guess that she'll eventually be forced to kidnap him and she'll bring him home where we will get a glimpse of her private life while she attempts to torture Ben after failing so many times.
During that process she either goes too far and hurts which causes her to have a change of heart when she realises what a terrible person she is or they realise how much they have in common after a few sessions of torture and she apologises and asks if they can be friends, culminating in some sort of romance.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 10:24 AM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
I kind of like were this story is headed. Amy feels isolated, and it's part of her defense to be seen by those who see her as different as also someone powerful. Ben helps the first part while also hurting the second. I'm rooting for him in the eventual showdown.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 9:16 AM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
Wow. This chapter is excellent...and that was my thought before he even fell asleep. I'm rally liking Ben's character, and his bravery. It feels all too real.
His relationship with his mother and sister is quite touching as well, and the fact that he didn't tell them right away what happened for the sake of sympathy or possibly protection shows even more about him.
As for the dream. His arousal is warranted because of her size, beauty, and power. But I hope it's not because she crushed him so easily. That should be the focus of his fear.
Amy's got a plan, eh? So the kidnapping might not be for a while, or not at all for that matter. This has to be public. And while she could just grab him in front of all the students and say: "He's coming with me, and you won't even recognize him when I bring him back." It feels like she's got something a bit more extravagent in store. Then again...that could totally work.
Anyways, this was my favorite chapter by far. Keep up the fantastic work. I'm eager to see more.
Author's Response:
Uh...wow. Damn. Sorry it's just that when I joined this site like a week ago I didn't think anybody would enjoy my writing so much. I came just to get some ideas out of my head. The fact that you enjoy this so much really means a lot. Thank you. I'll try my hardest not to disappoint.