Reviews For Meeting Marie
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Reviewer: shrinkchicken Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2014 7:33 PM Title: Morning Madness

Beautiful chapter.  Not enough authors explore how injuries can occur while tiny.  I love where the story is heading, with the protagonist out of luck and out of hope.  Keep on writing!

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2014 5:38 PM Title: Morning Madness

Muito bom!

Continua ...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2014 10:17 AM Title: Tiny Todd

It's so refreshing to see a giantess and her little boyfriend starting off on the (ahem!) right foot.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 5:40 PM Title: Secrets not so Secret

Well this guy's life certainly sucks. Hopefully it gets better, but something tells me that's not going to be the case.

Reviewer: Ghostkiller Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2014 2:59 PM Title: Secrets not so Secret

Can't wait for chapter three!!!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 7:22 AM Title: The Man with the Beard and the Drug Abusing Father

Well, at least you've provided a real-world reason why his parents won't come looking for him after he's shrunk. Most gts-authors (myself included) always seem to overlook that angle!

Reviewer: ChristianPlaysMCraft Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 4:02 AM Title: Secrets not so Secret

It's great cant wait for the next one

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 7:03 PM Title: Secrets not so Secret

Sounds like the perfect set-up, Dude!  Is this going to be a shorter story, or a long one? 

Seems like alot happened within the first chapter, and you've only briefly introduced the characters...

I mean, I'm not one to say that I don't like getting right into it, but... a lot DID happen!   Maybe, just a bit more 'development', or 'build-up' would have added more to the suspense.  

 The hottest girl in school discovering your fantasy's and even though, she's never really talked to you, she decides to invite you over to her house.... and make your wildest dreams a reality...

Don't get me wrong, I love it!  That's just the only thing, that I could see, that you could of done differently

Keep going.  I can't wait for Marie to become the Towering Beauty!

 

Reviewer: Tiny T Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2014 5:25 PM Title: Secrets not so Secret

no critism from me, i like this

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