Date: March 23 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
option C,im all about some ass play brother.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter Three:Option D
Option b
Date: March 22 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Option c two inches.. By too big and not too small! It's perfect! Also I vote some butt action included in this story... A little booty is always nice!! Lol or big booty which ever you prefer lol
Date: March 22 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Option c two inches
Date: March 22 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter Three:Option D
Option B
Date: March 22 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dude!!!!! Ive been planning to do a thing just like this!!! :D
Date: March 22 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter Three:Option D
C
[Report This]Date: March 22 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter Three:Option D
Option C. Two inches would be nice. I enjoyed the twist, haha.
Date: March 22 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter Three:Option D
Option C. Actually like this democracy system, nice call.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2014 11:24 AM Title: Chapter Three:Option D
Option d small enough to fit in a persons hand. Also since Sarah needs a shower. Would it not be intriguing if shrunken jimmy joins her?
Author's Response:
Yeah that could be where we are going with this,im trying to keep Sarah gentle in this story but it's ultimately up to you guys.
Date: March 22 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Option D!
She gets out of the shower and notices him loafing around. She finds the formula and decides to make him a drink with it to see what happens. He takes it and drinks it up quickly.
Once he shrinks he finds out that there are more terrible things than just her feet. He'll have to be worried about being swallowed alive, shoved up her butt, or crushed! How will she want to play though?
Left all the big creativity to you and maybe left room for future chapters if you like any of those options.
Author's Response:
I like the options Lupe,i'll see how Ican incorporate some of these ideas next chapter.
Date: March 21 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks. I appreciate the compliments. I am currently a little busy at the moment so I cannot write chapters to my stories consistently.
Also, I am not exactly the best story writer becuase I go straight to the point, to the action. One criticism that I receive is my lack of detail which I am steadily improving as I write.
Therefore, many writers here appreciate my suggestions becuase of my concise and inspirational ideas.
Anyway, I think interactive stories are great becuase it lets the readers take whats already on the plate and decides what is next.
I would like to thank ChaosDuck for this story and his generosity to write it based off of suggestions.
Date: March 21 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I go with @TomSpeedy with option d
Date: March 21 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
@TomSpeedy I think you should be a writer on this site!! I've seen where you've done other reviews and you should write some stories of your own!! I'd read them!!!! .... As long as there was some booty action in it lol.... But to a review for this story so far so good.. I don't want to vote this time I just want to be surprised!! But I would however like to see our character shrink and keep Sarah the same sized!!
Date: March 21 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter Two :Option B
The formula has msotly been described as some sort of enhancement drug, or at least that's what Jimmy makes it out to be. It could be be pretty much anything, and have any effect.
Author's Response:
That was the original intention but it's been left up to you guys.Im going to be very pliable with this story or else the title would be misleading.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter Two :Option B
The formula is a shrinking one, correct? If yes, then option D.
Sarah comes out of the shower and Jimmy notices the smell is still there and pretends to faint. He chuckles and gets back up but Sarah is not amused. She whacks him in the head and Jimmy falls down unconscoius.
Sarah, murmers to herself that she is tired of Jimmy complaining about her feet. She decides she needs to cool of and this time takes the formula and looks at it. She sniffs it and smells something awful.
She decides to get revenge on Jimmy and prepares a drink for Jimmy with the formula. She wants to see how he reacts to this formula since it is much stronger than her foot stench.
Jimmy lies on the floor unconscois, but opens his eyes only to fall asleep again. Sarah is impatient and forces the drink into Jimmy who panics and realizes that it is the formula.
Sarah sees the fear, and is delighted that Jimmy is truly afraid of the smell of something else other than her feet. Her size overpowers Jimmy and she manages to have Jimmy drink every last drop.
Sarah laughs and walks back to the kitchen while looking at Jimmy. Jimmy is slow to get up and he is blabbering something. He cant utter anywords, and soon, he shrinks instantly to a few inches and is surrounded by his gigantic clothing.
Sarah sees Jimmy dissapear and only his clothes remain (to her view). Sarah runs toward the clothes and finds a cute little Jimmy just a few inches tall.
Date: March 20 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter Two :Option B
Option C, lets go!
Date: March 20 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter Two :Option B
Option A.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter Two :Option B
Option D Sarah's old volleyball teemates want to get together and have a reunion to talk about old times (and show off their men) she is in charge to bring the appetizers and she gets buffalo wings. Jimmy's secret sauce is brought along because it might go great with the wings. Or so Sarah thinks when she opens the refrigerator next time
Date: March 20 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just as a suggestion: Having just the option may get rather confusing down the line. I'd recommend if not chapter names at least something like Chapter 2: Option B
Author's Response:
Duly noted