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Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Will this story EVER be updated? Haha

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2014 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Been reading a lot of stories like this lately.. Saw a review on it on another writers account, and thought I'd read it... It's been great so far!

Like others have said, would also love to see more Ashley and Sarah. Since theirs giants Ashley's size, I wonder how long her thing with Tim will last. And with Sarah, as she's just starting to get into dating, that should be interesting .

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

If you don't have time to write ATM that's fine

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Are there any other chapters out soon?... Would really nice to see how Sarah and Ashley's school/dating life works, and if they're a any other giants/giantesses other than Matt''s family

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Simply fantastic well written and enjoyable (: I could say more but you obviously don't need my advice.

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

I would have to agree with Nostory you have a great idea with tons of potential. A sister whose jealous of a brother that can fit in her hand is good material just take more time with it. I personally would have dragged out the conversation they seem to have had this dynamic for some so they should be pretty good at pushing each others buttons until Matt goes a step to far then end on him being crushed to build tension for the mext chapter. That's just my suggestion. Still good stuff I'm interested to see how Danielle copes with almost killing her cousin if she even cares.

 

 

 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm enjoying this one

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

A little fast but not bad, Matt is unlucky although this one is more serious. Danielle should be punished for this. 

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

Interesting chapter finding out there's giants as well as giantesses... Wonder if that'll effect the story later on if Ashley or Sarah decide to leave any of their dates for a man their own size?

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great Chapter. Wonder what Amber is gonna do to Danielle!

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wondering about who Luke is too.

Also reallywanna c more of Ashley & Tim, & maybe Sarah, & if theyre's any boys after her.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

 I sense Danielle either bullies him or she has a huge crush on him and it annoys him to no end. 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh snap cliffhanger, who is Danielle. Is she mean, nice, clumsy, who knows. Except for one person.

Nice chapter and story so far. Really enjoying the storyline.

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter... Wonder if we'll get to see some interaction with Sarah/Ashley and their friends... So far it just seems like they disappear during the school day.

As for th cousins, that'll be interesting to see what happens.

Reviewer: ZeR0x Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice job man, I'm keeping an eye out for this one, I liked it a lot and your writing is definitely grabbing our attention!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting story. I like scenarios like these where the size difference is there from the start and we get to see what the characters' lives are like. Will you be explaining why the ladies of this family are all giants?

In terms of formatting, I echo the person who said you should break up the text a bit more. A good way to do this is to start a new paragraph every time a character speaks.

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Very good... Any more chapters to come? Would love to know how things between Ashley and Tim go

Author's Response:

Definitely more chapters to come, but my current schedule is one chapter each day. I am also really glad you like the story

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

Nice chapter, touching scenes with Ashley and Tim, Amber and Matt but you might want to break up the words, harder to digest these large chunks. 



Author's Response:

Good to know, I am still trying to figure out what format works best so I tried to seperate the scenes into paragraphs. I will try making smaller sections.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cool first chapter, I look forward to reading more.  

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

PS: are there other giantesses/giants in the town?

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