[Report This]Date: May 08 2014 3:37 PM Title: Workout
Well...
I don't usually care for a violent giantess. But she's not really sadistic. If she was shrinking people just to stomp on them for her amusement, then I wouldn't be interested.
This, however, is completely different... Breast play and insertion? Yeah, I'm into that. She's interested in more of a pleasureable experience, and I can understand that. :-)
I hope she decides to keep one. Not that all stories have 'happy' endings, but it's fun to fantasize.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2014 8:37 AM Title: Workout
Well this a change from your previous fare. I don't like this quite as much because it veers away from my own preferences, but it's still well written and it shows that you can write a broader range of stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your honesty as well as your kind words. I won't stray too far but there are only three tinies left. I'm pretty sure one will make it.....
Date: February 23 2014 6:57 PM Title: Workout
Security blanket? I don't know if he would make a very good security blanket, maybe a nipple cushion though, yeah,,, ;)
Author's Response:
Ok, blanket may have been to broad of a word, but the little guy can hope, can't he? Thank you!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 5:07 PM Title: Workout
Its much more readable now! As for the story, well, so far it's a nice shrunken/violent story, and it's well written and descriptive! I also really liked the little game she had the two shrunken men play, it gave them false hope which she quickly took away at the end. Only 3 people left, I'm excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope I don't disappoint!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 4:30 PM Title: Workout
It's interesting to see you writing a much more violent giantess than your previous work. While it's fun reading about the ways gentle characters like Bianca and Shelly play with those under their charms (often literally), your writing style blends nicely with Kellie's more forceful character. The way teases the tinnies in the shoebox at the start of the story is as brilliant as it is humiliating for them. The story is an excellent change of pace, and between her reasons for shrinking these people and her cruel yet very sexy disposal methods for them so far, you've added another great character and story to your catalog. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you (and Kellie, by extension) have up your sleeve for the rest of her poor victims.
Sorry for the repost, forgot to add stars and wanted to correct some spelling.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the review! My darker alter ego has been clamboring to get out so I gave her a shot.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 3:50 PM Title: Workout
I like the title 'Control', it nearly says it all. I like the shoebox too.
Don't really care for the crushing within her clevage, but forcing the winner to watch was so deviously cruel. I'd like to see her actually keep at least one of them, maybe the guy she works with...
I can't wait to see what Kellie does next!
Author's Response:
three tinies and she can make more.....maybe she will keep one...as a security blanket?
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 3:37 PM Title: Workout
I agree, this story is very hot. She knows how to use her body. I wonder how she will use the other three.
Author's Response:
i can think of two places eaisly....scratches her foot as she sits comfortably...or maybe a prolonged kiss?
Date: February 23 2014 3:17 PM Title: Workout
Very hot so far. I hope she gives the security guy a chance to be cooperative; he might be smart enough to appreciate the rewards.
Author's Response:
we shall see...she still has three toys to play with....maybe one could survive?
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 2:47 PM Title: Workout
I admit I'm not huge on dieing but do love when you assert yourself...er Kellie
Author's Response:
whatever do you mean my little love? was it that apparent?
Date: February 23 2014 1:24 PM Title: Workout
This story seems interesting but im not gonna lie, those chunky paragraphs are keeping me away...
Author's Response:
I (hopefully) fixed them. They were sort of big so I cut them down a bit. Thank you for telling me!