Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

Please continue. Great so far.

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

This looks promising. I like your writing style. Keep it up.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Will this be continued?

aaron

Author's Response:

Yes, that's the plan! I know it's been ages since I wrote the first chapter. Actually, I wrote most of chapter 2 way back in Februry but for whatever reason I put finishing it on hold. This wasn't intended to be a long story either, 4 or 5 chapters at most and it should be wrapped up. Hopefully there won't be as lengthy a gap between chapters 2 and 3 as there has been between 1 and 2 :(

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, another out dated shrink ray left unattended, only to be 'mis-used' and unwittingly shrink one, or possibly both of them...

His mother didn't want that old thing inside the house, so maybe after their downsized  and trapped inside the house, she will decide that todays the day to get rid of that old eye sore.  Leaving the toy-sized boys shrunken and hiding somewhere within the house, and quickly realizing that their removing their only chance to get returned to normal size again!  Oh NO! 

I like it!  ;`)   

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Reminds me of 'honey I shrunk the kids'. Wonder if his hot mom will come home unexpectedly... At any rate this is a great start. Hope to see more.

aaron