Reviews For Working for Mina
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina

Excellent. I love it when the writer gets on with the action and to skip dinner was a bonus to me. I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date

Nice! Next chapter should be great! I had all sorts of ideas flash through my head while reading this.

   The part where she explains to Joe, about where she used to work, at the laboratory, where she actually created the 'stuff'... I instantly imagined her appartment filled with tiny little slaves!

*   She has been Joes supervisor for 2-year's, that would mean that she's had 2 whole year's to collect a nice little batch of miniature servants!

- But then, she said that she hadn't had a little man for nearly two year's...

I don't get it...

Still pretty good chapter thou'

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date

OK, now things are starting to warm up.

Hmmm...punishment should mean that he is forced to go where he doesn't want to go.

Looking forward to the rest of this story...

 

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date

Keep this up please. Really liking the characters.

Reviewer: scow Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina

Thanks guys! Unfortunately it might be awhile before this gets updated. I just went to upload the story and when I hit add it said I didnt have access. The whole thing was lost. Lesson learned... 

Reviewer: R1111 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina

Had to come out of lurking to say this is great! Lookin forward to see how you develop the story 

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina

Freakin awesome!! I need more!!! Hope there's butt action soon! Keep them coming!!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina

Fantastic setup! I cant wait for the action.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina

vinegary fritos, Mina's toe's, sound so sweet, on those size 12 feet, her wide shapely hips, and those large puffy lips...   Oh, sorry... I got carried away there. 

Can't wait for the next chapter!  ;`)

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