Date: May 04 2022 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 13: Masters
I know I'm 4 years late since the last update, but I just read through this whole story and thought it was great. I love the cast of characters you've created and the nice balance between action and plot you've struck. I don't know if you have any interest in continuing this, but since there were years between the last update, maybe another update is possible in the future? I really hope so, this is good.
Date: May 19 2019 7:31 AM Title: Character Bio's (Spoiler Alert!)
Oh my god I can’t believe I missed the new chapter for so long! Joe is such a classic with his bacon obsession, and now I’m insanely curious about how he’ll go meeting Michelle’s sister ;w; I’m so happy you posted another chapter, I’ve always loved the concept behind this story and had to reread the whole thing because it’s been too long! Can’t wait for the next chapter ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 08 2018 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 13: Masters
How about Michelle opens with: "You remember my boyfriend, Joe."
Then, she opens her (right?) hand and Joe says: "Hi, Maxine! How's the weather up, there?"
Sorry! Just trying to lighten up any resentment your other lurkers might have for the delay.;-)
[Report This]Date: October 06 2017 2:56 AM Title: Character Bio's (Spoiler Alert!)
I know it's been over 3 years but... any chance of an update soon? I'm dying here XD
Author's Response:
Sorry for being gone for so long! Can't promise regular updates but I hope you enjoy the latest chapter.
Date: April 15 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pretty faces
I did (DUH)! :-)
Date: November 06 2014 5:12 AM Title: Character Bio's (Spoiler Alert!)
Please update! I'm dying! I literally have nothing else to say about this book because words can't describe how awesome it is! Please please please write more! :)
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 6:59 AM Title: Character Bio's (Spoiler Alert!)
Read this story three times over now and let me tell you I just can't get away! The more I read this (apart from the sex scene of course because that just sounds bad to say that I 'loved' reading that kind of... Well, business) the more I fall in love with your writing style and how well you can set up an action packed plot with the perfect characters ever!!! All I can say is UPDATE! I know it's been a long time since February 17th when you last updated but I hope you keep this story going because you should seriously publish this at a bookstore! It's amazing :)
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 8: Friends
Omg you're the best writer on this site! I absolutely LOVED that chapter! Just hearing about dr fisher comforting poor joe made me smile! I'm sorry for spamming you with my awe for this story but seriously, I'm hooked !!
Author's Response:
haha I'm so glad you love the story so far!
I've been incredibly busy lately what with school and all and have yet to be putting up new chapters.
Stay tuned, it just keeps getting better and better.
Date: April 28 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 7: Agent Freeman and Joe's new suit
Love the ending to this chapter! Poor Stacey!
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 6: MuGenTek
Omg I love dr Cale and dr fisher! And the way joe and jake react around them! Its both adorable and hilarious at the same time!
Date: April 28 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 5: Flashbacks and Reassurances
Aww that was the cutest story! I love the connection you've built between joe and jake as friends! I like how this story is panning out!
Date: April 28 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 4: No more lying
Ahh! I love jake already! It's nice that poor joe's best friend knows about his condition :)
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: The truth comes out
Holy crap this is such an amazing story! I've only read the first chapter and already I'm hooked! The idea of having a guy who can't get hurt otherwise he'll shrink is so unique and clever! I can't wait to see how the rest of this story unflolds! And by the way, the drawings are awesome! :)
[Report This]Date: February 18 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pretty faces
From a ruthlessly pragmatic stand-point, Sara would've been better off just shooting Freeman in the back of the head. He's never going to say "yes" to her proposal! Which is obviously to kidnap Joe for some corporate rival of MuGenTek's.
Stacy could be a weak link, though. Giada's fellow gymnasts, too.
Author's Response:
Who said anything about Joe being the subject?
[Report This]Date: February 18 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The truth comes out
I just started reading this, and I'd like to let you know that the first chapter is pretty sold.
Your dialogue is probably your biggest strength. The conversations flow well, and fit the scene perfectly. Its also well thought out as there were clearly two distinct personalities speaking, instead of the same voice being called different people like a lot of stories.
Over all Excellent work Antboy94, your a good writer and I look foward to reading more of this when I can.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliments! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, considering it's only going to get better :)
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: The truth comes out
As said, here's a review!
Liking the characters! Michelle, Stacy, Joe, Lisa, Cale & Fisher, Freeman's pretty cool, (this last one I had to convince myself but) and finally Giada.
Clever idea, a family related genetic mutation, unlocked by pain. Now, is it just physical pain? I believe you would like to keep it that way but pain is a sense sent out by the brain and the devastation of an emotional attack can register pain in a different but altogether same way. I know i'm getting deep here but it's an idea, blurb, suggestion, theory, take it whatever way you want.
Fisher is probably my favorite character. I don't know why, he just is. And his little (emphasis on "little") crush on Beverly is a nice touch considering she is pretty much the only woman he sees on a daily basis.
All in all, a good story if maybe just a teensy weensy bit fast paced!
(I have the same problem myself)
Author's Response:
Haha, didn't expect Dr. Fisher to be such a hit, but then again, I didn't really see this story going past the first chapter, yet here we are! I try and do the best I can with pacing myself, but I do tend to rush it once in a while, I'll admit to that.
Interesting theory, the idea of emotional pain. I will say that it plays a role in keeping him small, but whether or not it can actually induce the shrinking... Let's keep on moving forward.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: February 16 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Love
Aw! Dr. Fisher is crushing on Dr. Cale?! *shrugs* Well, why not? I wouldn't be against a chapter where they both wise up about each other.
Who knows? Maybe they could even enjoy doing it, nice and gently, like Joe and Michelle just did!
Author's Response:
I don't know, Dr. Fisher made it clear how uncomfortable he is wiht the thought. However, considering where Michelle ane Joe are headed, maybe our protagonoist can change the good doctors mind.
Date: February 15 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: The truth comes out
I loved the chapter, very sexy. But I kinda didn't like that you time-skipped over the part of the sex...Especially if there was insertion, which it seems like there was since Joe mentions bodily fluids. Anyway, thats my only complaint, everything else was spot on.
Author's Response:
Haha I was expecting that. Trust me though, I dd what I do for reasons.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: A lesson in the shower
Hey I got your msg.
Alrighty, I'll give you a review on this. In all honesty, I DO read this story per update, I'm not sure why I don't comment though...
Anyway, I liked this chapter, especially the shower scene. I also like the message she was trying to convey to him by being rough with him. She's right about that, he can't expect the entire world to be careful with him so HES gotta be more careful.
Love the relationship youve built between them, they seem to really care for one another which is something you dont see too often in stories on this site. You know, siblings actually not hating eachothers guts...
It has potential. I'm not sure where the story is headed; if you have some kind of end goal or if its just "the life of shrink boy". But either way, its a good story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! And that's my goal; leave the reader wondering. Do I have an ultimate plan? Is there something more to this? Who knows... well I do, but that's besde the point.
Siblings, as much as we don't always show it, do ultimately care for one another, and that was the message I was trying to convey here, so I'm glad I got it across.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 10: A lesson in the shower
Great flashback! Skirted the edge of the I-word without actually going over it. As to Giada's new boyfriend?
I have a bad feeling about that. Like Agent Freeman is going to have to warm up the old memory zapper.