[Report This]Date: February 09 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: Sister, sister
P.S.---were you describing those old "assembly required" Hot Wheels racing tracks? HA! I didn't think anybody else here was _old enough_ to remember them. ;-D
Date: February 09 2014 4:23 PM Title: Character Bio's (Spoiler Alert!)
Maybe Tiny Dann can help you with the photo-capture thing for the biographies.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 9: Sister, sister
At the risk of over-using this word, it is refreshing to see a chapter where the shrunken guy's opinions are given serious consideration, as if he were still normal-sized.
[Report This]Date: February 08 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 7: Agent Freeman and Joe's new suit
(Ret-con) If Freeman's machine acts like the memory-burning laser in PAYCHECK, then Stacy made a wise decision, indeed!
[Report This]Date: February 07 2014 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 8: Friends
A masterfully poignant chapter, indeed! I can't help wondering, thought, what fun you might have in mind for Joe, next. Perhaps, Glada introducing Joe to some of the (other) leotard-clad lovelies from the school gymnastics team?
Author's Response:
God dammit it how I love you people! I hadn't even thought of that!
[Report This]Date: February 07 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 6: MuGenTek
The old "stern-personage-over-the-shoulder" bit, huh?
CLASSIC! :-)
[Report This]Date: February 07 2014 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 5: Flashbacks and Reassurances
Same old story: Jacobius interruptus.
Lol!
[Report This]Date: February 05 2014 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The truth comes out
Your story is coming along pretty good. I like the interaction and relationship between the characters. Play it right and you could be on your way to a classic. You're going at a pretty good pace too. Never having to wait too long before the next chapter. The coming chapters look like they'll be interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the support! Unfortunately, the speed of my chapter-posting will probably decrease, as I'm writing this on my own while also attending college.
Date: February 02 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: The truth comes out
Great story so far. Can't waIt to see more.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2014 4:46 PM Title: Character Bio's (Spoiler Alert!)
I read the first four chapters in one sitting. That's how good they were!
So, any type of pain causes him to shrink, huh? The origin of that unique condition will be one back story worth waiting for. As will all the possible ccnsequences! For example: if some elite, snobbish sorority house gets hold of him, while he's shrunken, will they keep flicking him in the butt with their finger tips jus to keep him that way?
Author's Response:
Haha I hadn't even thought about that! Might need to add that one to the idea books. I can't take full credit for this idea, though.
TinyDann and his Carrie's Science Project gave me the idea of the pain/pleasure size changing.
Thank you for the support, and things are just getting good :D