Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2014 8:52 PM Title: I need you

In the up coming chapters i would like to see Bradley made Avakonian size for when he speaks to them and maybe to also make him feel easer so he is not facing a bunch of giants.

Also if you do make him Avakonian size, he will find out that Arell is not as big as she seems and maybe on the short side comming right above his chest when he is the size of Avakonian.

Its the lest Arell can do for all the things she put him through and as a birthday gift to him and as a thank you for comming to speak to her people if its that easy to make a 7 mile tall girl shrink to Avakonian size it should be just as easy to grow him to Avakonian size.

 

Just something i felt would be right for him.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 9:51 PM Title: She's Back

I think i will like Arell this time around, unlike last time when she was out to take over the planet, she was a bit nuts last time.

I think this time around she will be a bit on the normal side and there to help than to damage lives. But i think there is only so much she can do to help, even her tech can do so much to fix this.

I look forward to what she will say and if she will talk about what happened when she told her people what she did and about the people of Earth.

 

A very nice chapter.

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 6:51 PM Title: She's Back

well they're either saved, or completely screwed.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 9:12 PM Title: Comics and Plans

I think the plane will work and it will not at the same time.

She will see the American flage but knowing her she will just think it was another dimension of the US and she will just keep thinking she is still in another dimension and not know she is still miles tall.

They may in the end have to nuke her or something. Who knows maybe Arell will show up and blast her with something.

 

Maybe Arell will see or hear that her Earthie is in danger and grow him to Avakonian size when he is still in the town and he can yell at her to put the town down.

 

One thing just putting this out there, if she is seven miles tall you think the air would be a bit thin for her and the people she is holding to breath normal.

 

Keep up the nice work

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 5:02 PM Title: Out of Retirement

really digging the story but I think it cut off at the end of 4.

Unless it's supposed to be "Pray that that giant egghead doe"

Author's Response:

Should be fixed now. Thanks!