Hey! Just found this story on amazon and finished it in two sessions.

What can I say?...

It was great! Really well written. And I think I'm in love with Erica. So adorable, yet so powerful.

Excellent story buddy.
Later,
Diesel

What happened to Brittany?!...I swear if you hurt her!....Pffft I'm joking. Her leaving was the natural evolution of her character.

Now real talk uh....Real....(irs)......I kind of really want to write a story in your universe. I really see some potential there and I've been thinking of doing something since I've disappeared for actual real life YEARS!..ew. Maybe with a cameo from Brittany or the Rockwell house because I would actually have to! So I'm asking. Please?!

Here's the thing about detail.  Everyone has experience dealing with small things, picking them up, etc. so we can sort of imagine what it's to be the big one.  But no one has ANY idea what it would be like to be that small.

I mean, hell, people can get intimidated just talking to someone who is 4-5 inches taller than them.  Once you're talking about building size, where they can get right up to you and you can't even see them all at once, you have to focus on parts of them one at a time...

The point is, after getting jaded with it, it's easy to forget that gts stuff would be really intense to experience.  You don't really need a lot of "stuff" to happen if you can actually convey the intensity of it.  The spacial descriptions and details REALLY help to do this, they are not pointless in the slightest.

ps. okay, so part of me was still a little disappointed that Terri got interrupted so early lol

I WANT TO SEE THAT ENHANCED BITCH THROWN INTO A MIRCOWAVE CIRUCA metal gear solid 4 of shrunk and crushed under ericas heel or return the mother to normal and let her oh dear lord that that serority bitch i want to see her die horriable she hurt erika

I thought I was going have a heart attack when I saw a new chapter of my favorite story posted. It had been so long I had basically forgotten about it. 

What an amazing chapter too! Your writing style is amazing and portrays the kind of details that make the story come to life. I hope to see more of this soon! 

Btw, can't wait to see what happens with Danielle after her "coming out." 

Another of me letting a story slide past my radar for far too often. I've been meaning to take a read at it, but never got around to it until today. This is a prime example of something super practical done execeptionally well.

The most impressive part to me is how well you  portray what a thin line Erica walks on being the gentle, benevolent, caretaker of her family which she wants to be. Or a patronizing, condescending, ruler who dominates every last aspect of their lives (which worries some of the family). We see her teeter-totter in both realms, where she truly does have everyone's best interest at heart (which keeps her likable).

I'm extremely interested in how Erica's behavior will shift, with how well you portrayed the amount of pressure she's under and how dangerous a lack of proper judgement can be. Which can be a lot to bear on someone who is still a kid

Been waiting for the next chapter forever! Worth the wait, period. Hopefully in the end if Erica manages to save Brit they all realize who is the boss finally, maybe Erica makes them all rub her feet!!!(her shrunken family)

love this story, do you plan on finishing it?

Enjoying the story so far. I really love the interactions between Danielle and Erica as it really shows how well Danielle knows Erica. It also makes me wonder, what could have happend if Danielle never gave Erica her advice on how to treat the family. Would she be running herself ragged thinking only of her family and ignoring her own needs, possibly snapping under the weight of the responsibility leading to a much darker place? Anyway, thanks for the story can't wait to read the next chapter.