Date: April 27 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
wow I rellay love this story
You are a great writer all characters are great and make you want to know them better.
so please write a lot of new chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! Glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: March 31 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
I've said it before and I'll say it again: this might be my favorite story ever. It focuses on what might actually happen in real life if a shrinking epidemic spread, as opposed to the "every non-shrunken person is an asshole" angle of most stories. I'd love to do some pics for it if you like!
<3 Cassie
Author's Response: !!!!!!! We should talk.
Date: March 30 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
I hadnt taken the time to read this little gem of a story cause the synopsia didn't seem terribly interesting at first but now after reading all the current chapters, I honestly wanna know what happens next now..
Its one of those rare stories that doesn't feel like the fetish based stuff is the focus and I like it.
Keep it up man, you're doin great so far lol
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: March 29 2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
Glad to see that this story continue too. Can somebody just refresh my memory & tell if the unshrunken enhanced people has been mentionned in previous chapters?
Author's Response: Rich folks benefitting from nanotechnology enhancements was mentioned in chapter 2, but when I do a full overhaul of the series I plan to seed that idea a bit more in multiple sections.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
I'm glad to see this story continue. As you said, I'm looking forward to the kinky stuff. In the first chapter, it looked like Erica was trying to maintain some kind of social life for her siblings. Maybe even trying to set some of them up. For her, it could be a way to eventually unload some of her tiny family members by partnering them off to someone else that would take responsibility for them. The fewer shrunken family members she has to take care of, the more freedom she has to pursue some measure of her own life. I can already forsee that Britanny is going to have a rough time when she shrunks with her soriority caring for her. Interested to see how she can be rescued from that. Keep up the writing!
Author's Response: I'm looking forward to the kinky stuff too! The story began as an fantasy romp, but as I grew to love the characters I back more invests in exploring their transitions. There will definitely be some pure embarrassing fun in the coming chapters, but the real crazy kink will have to come in other stories. Next chapter though is going to have our shrunken heroes dealing with a whole group of giggling girls, exploring how to have fun with women other than Erica, and generally finding out what life as a toy really entails.
Date: March 14 2015 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
Any new chapters coming soon? *waitng anxiously
Author's Response: Not for a month at least
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
I loved this chapter <3 we need more!
Author's Response: Yay, glad you had fun
Date: January 06 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
Care and control of the reduced is a great name for a book. Interesting how Erica is using it and making sure they plan for the future. Love how she now has set mom straight. What will happen when they are all small and no one can stand in her way? It will be great when the older sister shrinks. Will Erica keep her word? Is it possible that maybe an adult female like an Aunt or teacher will enter the picture?
Well done,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Huh, never thought about the idea of Erica having a mentor. ERICA IS BIGGEST OF ALL!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
This is really awesome. I love stories which go strong on the detail, and you've done a great job with that. Your prose is very evocative.
ps. I know she was a bit of a jerk but I still feel sorry for Brittany now ^-^
Author's Response: So do I! Thank you for taking the time to comment, makes my day. I'm glad you liked the detail. I love describing the little mechanics but worry about bogging things down.
Date: January 04 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
Yay! Finally an update. It had been so long I was thinking of Pming you to make saure you hadn't died!
Your so great at both the discriptions of the giants from the tiny's point of view and your exploration into how a family would feel to be in the care of the youngest, and formerly smallest member.
Things I'm looking forward to, The akward first day Gina gets to "babysit" And Brittneys shrinking. Can't wait!
Author's Response:
PM me anyways!
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, after writing it I almost just skipped it altogether in order to get to more action heavy stuff.
Gina's going to be a great babysitter, she just has to remember to wear turtle necks.
Date: January 04 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
It's great to see my favorite story back!
Each chapter is such a gift. Your attention to detail and description of perspectives is incredible. It makes this story so realistic. ("Her eyes like judgemental shop windows") I know it is geared towards a "fetish audience", but this would make a great novel!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the note on specific details!
I would love to try to publish e-books, I hope to get my writing level up to that point.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
This is a great story so far! Very creative, I am looking forward to reading more!
Date: January 04 2015 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
awesome story. you're a great writer.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
So someone's already written a book. Why am I not surprised. People will cash in on anything. "Dr. Terrance Smith." Probably has his own talk show on cbs and makes quotes like "Loud is not allowed."
Everyone's coping differently. Cole seems the most leveled of the childrens I think he'll recover quickly. Hell he's got the attention of a young, curvy, latin girl. Sooo..silver lining?
Keep fighting Brittany! Make life earn the right to shrink you and when it does happen maybe start a clothing line? There's a whole new customer base no one's catering to. Small Comforts are a bunch of hacks. Jump in now and you'll be raking it in hand over fist! 5 years fron now you'll be touring Paris debuting clothes you designed yourself AND model in!
Anyway good chapter.
Author's Response:
Damn, that's what I love about your stories. You get out into the bigger world instead of just staying in the living room.
I love those ideas and might just steal some of them.
Cole is having more trouble adapting than he expected, I think he had more control issues than realized. Hopefully he'll figure out how to enjoy life at his new size.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
Great stuff, nice to see this back.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
Great chapter. These characters, dialogue and Erica's personality are what make this story for me. Love how she had to threaten Brittany to give her that cd. Always nice to see a meek person with power but yet doesn't abuse it. Well done.
Also loved the "chores" of painting her toes and the image of her using some extra tiny paintbrush to return the favor is quite funny.(hope that happens)
Can't wait for Brittany to shrink. And Gina's character was a nice addition that meshed very well with these characters.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the specific notes, it's really enjoyable and helpful to hear what details worked for you.
Man, everyone seems anxious for Brittany to shrink. What did she do to you?
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
Glad this is being continued. Can't wait for Britney to finally shrink.
Author's Response:
Everyone has it in for Brittany. She's not so bad, she's just scared.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
An interesting development in this story with this Chapter. Glad to see your still continuing it, now if only others would do the same :)
Cole had manicured nails, seems to tell me he might be gay, the again might just like his feet neat and tidy.
Date: January 03 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
Loving the story! Glad to see you're continuing it :)
Date: January 03 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection
You have no idea how happy it makes me to hear that you plan on continuing this story. I can't wait!
Author's Response:
Good timing, just about to add chapter 5!