Date: March 24 2015 11:13 PM Title: Back When She Was Alone
and i thought a plot , The tall tree,which is as high as Izzy has some fruits.but Izzy didn't notice. when Natalie and her friends pass by they find them and eat them. to human the fruit will keep them full(no hunger)for long time but to Natalie,she grows...
Date: March 24 2015 11:08 PM Title: Back When She Was Alone
i would like to see Natalie grows . Izzy is ok if u want to grow her.and i want to see more giantess adventures
Date: March 21 2015 11:15 PM Title: Back When She Was Alone
Im excited to see where you take things! Hopefully you decide to update again soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: March 21 2015 6:24 PM Title: Back When She Was Alone
An interesting idea, you have here. I'm looking forward to see what you do with it. Is there a reason that the girls of each set have gained a different degree of growth? Curious...
Author's Response:
It'll be revealed..
[Report This]Date: January 21 2014 11:22 AM Title: Separation Via Storm
That was a great chapter, you took a bunch of ideas and twisted them all around. Now there is three separate storylines going on. Hopefully this sparked more ideas for you.
Author's Response:
I think it is! Thanks for the compliments, I saw pretty proud about this idea haha, it's nice to see people agree.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2014 10:59 AM Title: Separation Via Storm
So not just one or two giantess but four! Maybe you should create a whole native tribe of amazon sized women that protect some sacred relic of a past civilization that is the cause of the mysterious growth of women on the island, And unknown to them,despite the fact that their growth was instantaneous they are still secretly growing little by little, more and more
Author's Response:
I've been think about having a tribe there, there's no doubt about that. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 10:10 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
To character-Ok first think Natalie, your logic is flawed a bra cannot be found at the bottom of the lake if it is floating.
To author- I don't think the girl should be aware of them till later, by having the trio(mainly Natalie ) try to avoid contact with the Titan sized female it might add some suspense to the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, by the time I'm reading this the next chapter is already written though, make sure to review the next one to get your ideas in, thanks!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 2:55 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
Well good chapter. For ideas I going to try and throw some at you now. You could have a huge storm separating everyone, but Natalie and Aren find each other. And Michael is injured and found by that other girl. And she helps him back to health.
Using that storm idea you could all so introduce other characters that washed up on the island. Or have there be other giant girls beside the two we know about all ready.
There just ideas.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, its and pieces are currently in use as I write
Date: January 20 2014 1:36 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
Cool chapter, seems like the end of Act 1. The group has reached a solid dynamic (still with issues to play with) and they see their next big mystery.
I'll be curious as to what caused Natalie to grow and the stranger to grow even more. At first I thought that this would mean that Natalie would continue to grow, but if the stranger's bra is larger than Natalie then the stranger probably reached her present mega-height right away. We'll see.
Author's Response:
It's true, both of there's was instant, but there may be a little more growing due to a certain something
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 12:25 AM Title: Michael's Bigger Mess
That was a really good chapter. I like how you add the other giantess. Now Aren can have Natalie and Michael can have the other girl we don't know yet.
Author's Response:
Thanks, but I plan to spice things up a bit more than just that
[Report This]Date: January 18 2014 2:48 AM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I was thinking about them running into or starting out as just two green eyes in the night seen by one of the boys or by Natalie followed by seeing what look to be a huge cat like paw print with the shape of a human foot with only four tows.
Latter on they see what made the print and the eyes belong to. It would be maybe a bit smaller than Natalie around 40 feet or so, it would be a cat boy around 20 or so but looks older than the three of them.
Long dark hair and fur with a long tail and sharp claws and teeth and those green cat like eyes.
He could be friends with that other girl that is being talked about. I was thinking about having him being taller than Natalie but i don't think you will be ok with it so i went with a size that was giant than the boys but a bit smaller than Natalie.
I hope that gives you some help on the story.
I don't know what happened to my post, i have some ideas to what happened to it and am hoping its not the worst thing that happened to it.
But i do hope for a reply, even if it telling me the idea is no good.
I was giving you some help as you asked.
Author's Response:
Yah I don't really see that happening, but I really do appreciate the suggestion and the effort put into writing that out.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2014 12:15 AM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I don't know what mechanism you used to make Natalie grow, so its hard for me to make suggestions. And I'm not sure if its just her size that's affecting her behavior or if the same catalyst that caused her growth is affecting that as well. My suggestion for now is to keep the tension between Michael and the other two. Keep the gentleness and affection between her and Aren.
Again not knowing the source of her growth, I could suggest that there's something special about the island that causes females to grow and that Natalie. You maybe you could throw in a native tribe that has had to adapt to larger women and smaller men. And maybe even turn it into a New World Order story eventually with an growth "infected"Natalie bringing the secret to growth back to civilization with her. Then Michael would have to confront the fact that even if he got away from Natalie, all women would be growing and he'd have to change his attitude or else.
Good story and I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the suggestion, I like the idea of a tribe. As far as reasons ago I just kinda thought to myself it would be magic or maybe the electic shock that happened way earlier.
Date: January 17 2014 11:07 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well in my case, my review requests always centre around wanting to see some giantess vore. In other words, beautiful women putting (preferably younger) guys into their mouthes, and swallowing them whole. Not that I'd want to go all the way down in real life, but the fantasy's fun.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 11:03 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I can tell Michael is screwed next chapter. But I feel like im on team Michael. Maybe you can have the direction of the story where they both little dudes continue to fight and try to win Natalie's heart. Just an idea so far.
No I don't think you needed to write out Natalie's hunt; unless your planning a huge twist in the story.
Maybe you could tell what happened on the hunt and find that captain. Could be barely alive or dead.
Just some ideas, but I like the story so far. And how you update frequently, keep up the awesome writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Team Michael, haha, I love it.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 10:59 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well her hunt probably should have been written to add more emphasis to the whole difficulty of survival. But I don't think it would have been all that interesting to read, I mean one snap of her fingers and the poor animal's head would no longer exist.
This is just me but with a nice big lake on this island I think a certin giant girl deserves a bath...with one or two pituclar peeping toms. But that's just me my favorite scenes in giantess stories are bath scenes. They're my one weakness to my principal of plot before fetish.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestion ;) Taken into consideration.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 10:25 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well Michael deserves what is coming, he has been dragging everyone down with his stubborness, Natalie needs to set him right. At least Aren, though he isn't contributing much at least accepts his follower role and doesn't cause trouble.
You should have Michael get so frustrated with them that he runs off on his own and then Natalie and Aren have to look for him. Michael will probably run into something the same size as Natalie or even bigger. Could be another giantess, something big like a T-Rex or even an undiscovered tribe.
Author's Response:
I was thinking of adding another giantess and a T-Rex coming one of these chapters but never imagined him running away. See this is what keeps n00bs going! Thanks to much!
[Report This]Date: January 16 2014 1:54 PM Title: Michael's Mess
I think there should be some other girl one the island as well as Natalie that lives on the island. Maybe she could also want the two boys because she has never seen one before? And tries to take them from Natalie
Author's Response:
That is for sure taken into consideration, a very interesting idea. How old do you picture the native girl?
[Report This]Date: January 14 2014 10:52 PM Title: Nap Time is Over
Interesting story so far, I mean interesting in a good way. But it's like a story in the Bermuda triangle.
Don't have much to say yet but I really did like that sentence toward the end. "Walking towards each one another despite still being far away."
Keep up the good writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! I appreciate the feed back.