[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 2:55 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
Well good chapter. For ideas I going to try and throw some at you now. You could have a huge storm separating everyone, but Natalie and Aren find each other. And Michael is injured and found by that other girl. And she helps him back to health.
Using that storm idea you could all so introduce other characters that washed up on the island. Or have there be other giant girls beside the two we know about all ready.
There just ideas.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, its and pieces are currently in use as I write
Date: January 20 2014 1:36 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
Cool chapter, seems like the end of Act 1. The group has reached a solid dynamic (still with issues to play with) and they see their next big mystery.
I'll be curious as to what caused Natalie to grow and the stranger to grow even more. At first I thought that this would mean that Natalie would continue to grow, but if the stranger's bra is larger than Natalie then the stranger probably reached her present mega-height right away. We'll see.
Author's Response:
It's true, both of there's was instant, but there may be a little more growing due to a certain something
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 12:25 AM Title: Michael's Bigger Mess
That was a really good chapter. I like how you add the other giantess. Now Aren can have Natalie and Michael can have the other girl we don't know yet.
Author's Response:
Thanks, but I plan to spice things up a bit more than just that
[Report This]Date: January 19 2014 11:54 PM Title: Michael's Bigger Mess
Great! Couldn't have been better. Now a truely titanic women has come in. I don't have any idea how you will progress at this point though, maybe the trio will spy in this new girl and see if she might be friendly.. And maybe they might get caught...
Oh btw since you take reviews into consideration I think you might need to add that reviews give away some spoilers to the story in the summery lets people know so they don't loose the surprise when reading
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, but yah I'm kind of having hard time on deciding where to go from here :(
[Report This]Date: January 19 2014 7:13 PM Title: Michael's Bigger Mess
Well she didn't notice Michael but I am not sure if it is a good thing or bad thing yet, perhaps you should have Natalie slowly grow to the other giantess' size, something about the island makes them grow?
Hopefully Michael has learned his lesson and does not do this again. Oh and the two giantesses must meet, they certainly have to meet!
Author's Response:
They will in time, thanks for the review. Yah I thought about having a growth scene too.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2014 12:08 AM Title: There's Always Something Bigger
You have my deepest gratitude with adding a bath scene my friend and you even made it important for plot development with the whole bra in the lake that was a nice touch. I hadn't even considered that possibility!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, see I said that suggestions were likely to be used! I wasn't just saying that!
Date: January 18 2014 5:00 PM Title: There's Always Something Bigger
I'am loving the story,though I think Michael is the best element in the story so far,I think that you could keep his temperament and like,make him a lone wolf and make Natalie care and search for him,I think this would increase drama to the story,wich is something that lacks in most stories,you have everything to make some of the best stories by mixing GTS and other styles like drama and etc. Also I liked the part wich Natalie kick the raptor and it broke his spine,would love to see more scenes like this (with more details) and some crush scenes (maybe a battle with a group of raptors) and unaware (crush,yeah I'am a crush lover) with smaller dinossaurs. The story is yours and I'am just leaving some sugestions.
Author's Response:
Wow, I love these kinda reviews because they make tons of ideas pop into my head! I like the idea of one person being more alone since one's so dependent already. You'll see some of what you asked for in return for such a helpful review.
Date: January 18 2014 3:09 PM Title: There's Always Something Bigger
Oh, and I was happy that Natalie's punishment of Michael didn't get too brutal.
Date: January 18 2014 2:52 PM Title: The Failed Sail
Having a great time with this series, you're doing a great job balancing the fun power dynamics with actual plot.
Genuinely suspenseful ending to chapter 6.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the compliments!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2014 2:48 AM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I was thinking about them running into or starting out as just two green eyes in the night seen by one of the boys or by Natalie followed by seeing what look to be a huge cat like paw print with the shape of a human foot with only four tows.
Latter on they see what made the print and the eyes belong to. It would be maybe a bit smaller than Natalie around 40 feet or so, it would be a cat boy around 20 or so but looks older than the three of them.
Long dark hair and fur with a long tail and sharp claws and teeth and those green cat like eyes.
He could be friends with that other girl that is being talked about. I was thinking about having him being taller than Natalie but i don't think you will be ok with it so i went with a size that was giant than the boys but a bit smaller than Natalie.
I hope that gives you some help on the story.
I don't know what happened to my post, i have some ideas to what happened to it and am hoping its not the worst thing that happened to it.
But i do hope for a reply, even if it telling me the idea is no good.
I was giving you some help as you asked.
Author's Response:
Yah I don't really see that happening, but I really do appreciate the suggestion and the effort put into writing that out.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2014 12:15 AM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I don't know what mechanism you used to make Natalie grow, so its hard for me to make suggestions. And I'm not sure if its just her size that's affecting her behavior or if the same catalyst that caused her growth is affecting that as well. My suggestion for now is to keep the tension between Michael and the other two. Keep the gentleness and affection between her and Aren.
Again not knowing the source of her growth, I could suggest that there's something special about the island that causes females to grow and that Natalie. You maybe you could throw in a native tribe that has had to adapt to larger women and smaller men. And maybe even turn it into a New World Order story eventually with an growth "infected"Natalie bringing the secret to growth back to civilization with her. Then Michael would have to confront the fact that even if he got away from Natalie, all women would be growing and he'd have to change his attitude or else.
Good story and I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the suggestion, I like the idea of a tribe. As far as reasons ago I just kinda thought to myself it would be magic or maybe the electic shock that happened way earlier.
Date: January 17 2014 11:07 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well in my case, my review requests always centre around wanting to see some giantess vore. In other words, beautiful women putting (preferably younger) guys into their mouthes, and swallowing them whole. Not that I'd want to go all the way down in real life, but the fantasy's fun.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 11:03 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I can tell Michael is screwed next chapter. But I feel like im on team Michael. Maybe you can have the direction of the story where they both little dudes continue to fight and try to win Natalie's heart. Just an idea so far.
No I don't think you needed to write out Natalie's hunt; unless your planning a huge twist in the story.
Maybe you could tell what happened on the hunt and find that captain. Could be barely alive or dead.
Just some ideas, but I like the story so far. And how you update frequently, keep up the awesome writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Team Michael, haha, I love it.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 10:59 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well her hunt probably should have been written to add more emphasis to the whole difficulty of survival. But I don't think it would have been all that interesting to read, I mean one snap of her fingers and the poor animal's head would no longer exist.
This is just me but with a nice big lake on this island I think a certin giant girl deserves a bath...with one or two pituclar peeping toms. But that's just me my favorite scenes in giantess stories are bath scenes. They're my one weakness to my principal of plot before fetish.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestion ;) Taken into consideration.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 10:25 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well Michael deserves what is coming, he has been dragging everyone down with his stubborness, Natalie needs to set him right. At least Aren, though he isn't contributing much at least accepts his follower role and doesn't cause trouble.
You should have Michael get so frustrated with them that he runs off on his own and then Natalie and Aren have to look for him. Michael will probably run into something the same size as Natalie or even bigger. Could be another giantess, something big like a T-Rex or even an undiscovered tribe.
Author's Response:
I was thinking of adding another giantess and a T-Rex coming one of these chapters but never imagined him running away. See this is what keeps n00bs going! Thanks to much!
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 9:40 PM Title: The Failed Sail
I gotta say that I really like this story so far. It's interesting to have the typical survival story with a giantess on your side...Although michael is prolly gonna end up getting his ass kicked by her...I gotta say that although Micheal is kind of an angry macho, Aren is being a little pussy smartass and a bad friend, so I can't say I blame Micheal for wanting to beat his ass.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yah Michael is a but unlikable but it's not all his fault and so you kinda pitty him huh? It's kinda what I was going for, you wanna see him get it but too badly.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 6:54 AM Title: The Failed Sail
Somewhere aroud your three castaways age maybe a little older? 17...18 maybe? Old enough for her to be naturally stronger than Natalie
Author's Response:
That may just happen one of these days! :) I really appreciate your contribution!
[Report This]Date: January 16 2014 1:54 PM Title: Michael's Mess
I think there should be some other girl one the island as well as Natalie that lives on the island. Maybe she could also want the two boys because she has never seen one before? And tries to take them from Natalie
Author's Response:
That is for sure taken into consideration, a very interesting idea. How old do you picture the native girl?
[Report This]Date: January 15 2014 9:57 PM Title: The Failed Sail
I like this so far, just praying that Natalie does not use the two boys as her personal sex toys.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I don't plan that at all. And thanks for the review!
Date: January 15 2014 7:20 PM Title: The Failed Sail
Super series, I'll definitely be reading
Author's Response:
Thanks a ton!