[Report This]Date: May 03 2016 3:39 PM Title: The Failed Sail
it is one year and 2 months already, you still not update
Date: March 24 2015 11:13 PM Title: Back When She Was Alone
and i thought a plot , The tall tree,which is as high as Izzy has some fruits.but Izzy didn't notice. when Natalie and her friends pass by they find them and eat them. to human the fruit will keep them full(no hunger)for long time but to Natalie,she grows...
Date: March 24 2015 11:08 PM Title: Back When She Was Alone
i would like to see Natalie grows . Izzy is ok if u want to grow her.and i want to see more giantess adventures
Date: March 23 2015 5:54 AM Title: The Failed Sail
Hope to see more, that was a nice little chapter that showed Izzy's lonelier past.
Date: March 21 2015 11:15 PM Title: Back When She Was Alone
Im excited to see where you take things! Hopefully you decide to update again soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: March 21 2015 6:24 PM Title: Back When She Was Alone
An interesting idea, you have here. I'm looking forward to see what you do with it. Is there a reason that the girls of each set have gained a different degree of growth? Curious...
Author's Response:
It'll be revealed..
Date: March 21 2015 1:56 AM Title: The Failed Sail
i love this story so much i hope u can continue it. i wAnt to see more about Izzy and natalie. u can start a part II
Date: January 01 2015 6:47 PM Title: The Failed Sail
I love this story. My favorite characters so far are Natalie, Izzy, and the Captain. Just a theory, maybe the island is in an alternate dimension which can only be enter through a portal in the Pacific Ocean, and somehow the portal affects the body of female teens and caused them to grow, with Izzy being the largest maybe for now. I hope you can finish the story, and if you want you could make a sequel that takes place in a different location, though I would love to see a spinoff focusing on Izzy, maybe she could be a sort of heroic figure once she goes back to civilization.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2014 12:09 PM Title: The Failed Sail
Love the story so far hope you don't abandon it.
Author's Response:
Don't feel like writing at all.. maybe someday. :)
Date: March 05 2014 6:48 PM Title: The Failed Sail
I really really love the plot of this story. I wouldn't add in many characters. But I do have some suggestions. After her first hunt (if you choose not to describe the hunt), at least give a few more hints as to how the raptors spine was broken. Also the gruesomeness you add the later chapters makes the story head in the absolutely right direction, keep that up! I really like the specific interactions with Natalie and her surroundings such as her "regaining her sense of power." It would be sweet to see more of her thoughts as realizes her power. I love the cliffhangers as well. For this last chapter the story as I said is heading in a great direction. I'm really interested to see how Aren likes round two. If you want any personal help or more input from me please do not hesitate to ask. I am in love with this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 8:54 AM Title: The Failed Sail
I'm loving your story so far. I'd love to see Izzy run into Aren while the two girls are out. Maybe you could have them return and confront Izzy right after she swallows Aren.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2014 11:41 AM Title: The Failed Sail
WOW, its crazy that this old guy (the captain) has survived on his own this whole time! Micheal may have ended up with the least powerful of the new characters but I think the old guy may be the most interesting so far. And Natalie finally comes face to face with the giantess that puts her size to shame! Really exciting setup you have in this most recent chapter, I can't wait to see what you do with it for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the great comments, hearing things like you're excited gets me wanted to write again as soon as possible.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2014 11:22 AM Title: Separation Via Storm
That was a great chapter, you took a bunch of ideas and twisted them all around. Now there is three separate storylines going on. Hopefully this sparked more ideas for you.
Author's Response:
I think it is! Thanks for the compliments, I saw pretty proud about this idea haha, it's nice to see people agree.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2014 10:59 AM Title: Separation Via Storm
So not just one or two giantess but four! Maybe you should create a whole native tribe of amazon sized women that protect some sacred relic of a past civilization that is the cause of the mysterious growth of women on the island, And unknown to them,despite the fact that their growth was instantaneous they are still secretly growing little by little, more and more
Author's Response:
I've been think about having a tribe there, there's no doubt about that. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 10:10 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
To character-Ok first think Natalie, your logic is flawed a bra cannot be found at the bottom of the lake if it is floating.
To author- I don't think the girl should be aware of them till later, by having the trio(mainly Natalie ) try to avoid contact with the Titan sized female it might add some suspense to the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, by the time I'm reading this the next chapter is already written though, make sure to review the next one to get your ideas in, thanks!
Date: January 20 2014 8:22 PM Title: The Failed Sail
I think that letting aren get the titanic girl would prove to be pretty interesting. I also get this feeling from your writing that michael is very mentally unstable, and it would make it pretty cool if he started hallucinating things around him happening.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the suggestions!
Date: January 20 2014 6:42 PM Title: The Failed Sail
Hahaha, it made me feel good to have that little prick let down by Natalie...You know, for someone so scrawny the kid sure has a big ego and is already thinking about how to seduce the new gts no less!
Author's Response:
You sure are right, I think I'm finding myself trying to make Aren unlikable, haha
Date: January 20 2014 5:20 PM Title: The Failed Sail
Oooh, I know! They could find a hatch deep in the jungle, and when they open it there's an old computer and a long string of numbers that needs to be entered and Natalie could fight a smoke monster.....!
Author's Response:
Bits and pieces of your idea are in use, thanks very much!
Date: January 20 2014 2:55 PM Title: The Failed Sail
Well there is some sort of awkward tension since Aren let slip that he wrongly thought that Natalie was his girlfriend. I thought that Michael should have spent more time away from them and then got taken by the larger girl and Natalie must rescue him.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestions!