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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 3:37 PM Title: Retreat - Part 1

I would certainly enjoy more Corey/Melody alone time! Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the update to this story and that side story by Jacksmith too!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, hope I can continue to deliver. Thanks for the comments!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 1:56 PM Title: Retreat - Part 1

Thanks for the update. This is my favorite out of the series. Maybe because it's the original. Anyways glad to see a chapter with Corey in it. And seeing his healing progression and his new developed relationship.

Author's Response:

And thank you for the comments - both this one, and the one you left somewhat recently that I just saw. They're very appreciated :)

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 12:38 PM Title: Retreat - Part 1

I almost thought this series was dead. Nice to see it back. 



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Not quite dead! Not yet!

Also nice to see you back. I haven't seen you anywhere else in quite a while so I was honestly concerned something may have happened.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 9:14 AM Title: Visiting Hours

This is still my favorite chapter. It's written really good. The emotion gets me every time.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 1:12 AM Title: Visiting Hours

This is still my favorite chapter. It's written really good. The emotion gets me every time.

Reviewer: applecore666 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2014 10:52 PM Title: Imprisonment

Wonderfully cute little story arc, but it's so bittersweet to see some sudden updates before you have to disappear again (I assume it's fall break time or something like that for University this past week).  So, will you basically be waiting until the end of the semester/winter break to finish up Consequences?

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 3:32 PM Title: Pickups - Part 3

Wait. How does Howard know about Stephanie's backstory? How about Enforcer-Patient Confidentiality? What's Howard's status among those in Aegis?

Reviewer: happiest_in_shadows Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 2:55 PM Title: Imprisonment

That was a fun read. Claire's affection for her adoptive father was quite nice though I do wonder a bit about her childhood. What type of guidance could he have offered her that would cause those particular bonds of attachment to form? It's one of the things i struggle with at times while writing and trying to think of something a fellow could do for a giantess. It is likely even more difficult when that's your daughter. There is also something else I've been wondering about the story. I understand that they were working on a means for betas to protect themselves. However, wouldn't one form of protection be a recording device almost like a cell phone on a dedicated line? I was thinking something that a beta could push if they felt threatened and it would begin recording. It wouldn't save their life or may not but it would help insure the alpha didn't get away. Now this wouldn't work if the beta was already dead but the device could also be set to record constantly. Given the tech the omegas seem to have on hand storing the information doesn't seem like too much to ask but if need be the information could be flushed daily unless something happened to the beta in question then it could be reviewed.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 1:54 PM Title: Pickups - Part 3

A sweet little story-arc.

 

I wasn't expecting/had forgotten about Stephanie tagging along so that was an interesting surprise. That said we haven't seen Marion in awhile thus it makes me curious how she is progressing given Stephanie and Naomi's progress over the chapters.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 11:41 AM Title: Pickups - Part 3

I loved this set of chapters. It really goes to show that this mountain called Clair really does consider her adoptive father as a real dad! Its weird coming from so many other stories on this site where daughters hurt, torture and even kill their tiny fathers to a daughter lovingly respecting someone the size of a dust mite. And that girly, childlike way she acted when her dad suggested going on a little adventure of  their own was so cute and definitely my favorite part of the chapter!

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 11:05 AM Title: Pickups - Part 3

Pretty good. I'd been wanting to see more of the family. It's pretty fun.

Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2014 3:05 AM Title: Pickups - Part 1

Hey an update.  You know, this traffic incident highlights just how much Claire is about correcting the behavioral flaws in others.  It's something that takes a bit of insight, though Claire still seems pretty young to have that level of wisdom now that I think about it.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 11:54 PM Title: Pickups - Part 2

Awe a cherished moment. I really love the chapter with Cory and his family, or Melody.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 6:20 PM Title: Pickups - Part 2

A heartwarming chapter

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 2:05 PM Title: Pickups - Part 2

Very sweet and descriptive chapter. Can't wait to see more.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 12:45 PM Title: Pickups - Part 2

I can tell you had fun writing this chapter. Awesome work. 

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 11:45 AM Title: Pickups - Part 2

Really sweet chapter! And it definitely puts the sheer scale and power between Betas and Omegas into perspective...Its really crazy how much precision Claire has: one muscle spasm, one tiny slipup and her dear adoptive father would be mushed into her cheek with that little display of affection..

Reviewer: applecore666 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 12:13 PM Title: Imprisonment

Good stuff, I'm glad to see I can still look forward to getting an Omega fix.  Was starting to feel like I might need the lifespan of an Omega myself to see the next update.  :p 

Out of curiousity, about how far along is the story of Consequences as a whole at this point?



Author's Response:

I basically have this and then two more multi-part things I'm gonna do to close out the story.

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 4:26 AM Title: Pickups - Part 1

That guy went on to invent self driving cars like you see in Minority Report or I Robot.



Author's Response:

Let's hope he made sure they obey traffic laws B|

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 7:13 PM Title: Pickups - Part 1

Good chapter. How long has it been since the beginning of the girls' sentence and this chapter, in universe?



Author's Response:

We're still at about one month in. This takes place directly after the Stephanie chapters.

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