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Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2014 5:56 AM Title: Imprisonment

Been waiting for a story like this for a while. Hope you make this"universe"continual. The idea that there are Omegas that are an authority over how Betas are treated really opens up a lot of possibilities. Please keep going.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2014 7:14 PM Title: Imprisonment

I'm curious to see more.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2014 3:43 PM Title: Imprisonment

This is quality.  I expect some detailed interaction in the coming chapters, based on the opening intro.,  I'm sure this is going to be a real trip!  ;`)

I like the way they referred to the Beta's, as an 'it'... shows how they treated them without even knowing what they actually did...to the poor little speck.

Lookin' forward to more of this!

Fantastic start, Ackbar!

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2014 3:37 PM Title: Imprisonment

Though this is only a premise, I like a lot of the inherent conflict of the world you've established with this brief conversation regarding the treatment of the races and what it means to be a person.  It'll be interesting to see how you explore those themes further when your tinies start interacting with an actual giantess.



Author's Response:

Glad to see it piqued your interest, I have quite a lot I want to do with this, theme-wise, and I hope I don't disappoint.

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