Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

I greatly enjoyed the story. The Mother was fantastic. Well written. I would love to see another story like this.

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2017 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

I freaking loved how this story ended! I'm so glad it didn't end in the gentle way because I honestly don't like gentle stories so I was completely (if not more than completely of that's possible) satisfied with this story. I loved the whole interaction with Cindy taking out individual cars one by one with her feet and especially her taking out the last couple with her bare feet. Great stuff! I also enjoyed your Big Problems and I'll definitely be looking forward to your future stuff!

Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey Dingbing, great to see you back in action! What do I hope for? Given the way the story has proceeded and the apparent mindset within your universe, it seems Cindy can trust most of the victims to go back to their daily lives and keep quiet long enough to not leak news of the prototype before it comes to market (she certainly doesn't appear to be concerned about secrecy, unless she's putting on a cruel deception).

I'm hoping everyone will be grown back one car at a time but in gradual stages so Cindy can do some size comparisons. Ladies first, and the guy threatening to sue comes last. In the end, he's too much of a concern, so Cindy ought to place him on her flip flop and make him literally microscopic, them let him cool down on her sandal while she paints sexy designs on her toes before ultimately finishing him off.

As for Jack, I'm hoping he manages to make contact with Kylie and sneak by for some fun. I picture him massaging and kissing her feet and feeling her toes grow in his mouth as she slowly shrinks him bit by bit, with intentions similar to her mom's to let him spend the night as a germ on her flip flop. In this case however, she'd plan to grow him back (perhaps growing the whole sandal until she can see him first) so he can shower and head to work the next day as usual, perhaps a few inches shy of normal as a cute little reminder.

Author's Response:

WOW, you were WAY too optimistic for this one, haha!

Great ideas you had though, I think all of those things would have been enjoyable to read about.

Reviewer: lockboxes Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad to see that you are writing. I love this story and Big Problems Pending. I hope see that continued, too. I think what you have so far for chapter three is great. The build up is great. I can't wait to see what she does with the tiny people. I think she is going to dispose of them, and not actually grow them back. I think she'll probably step on them, but I would love to see her eat some.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Let me know what you think about the conclusion!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good build up so far. Good taste I think to skip younger sister (even though nothing happened).  What will mom do? Hmmm

 

 

PS are you going to finish big problems?

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man its good to see writing from you again! This looks great! Something has me wondering if the mom has any intentions on growing them back though...

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the set up. Nice having the older sister take charge of the situation. Now the really big question is what will Mom think? Very much looking forward to this.
Please continue,
Diesel

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting,  can't wait for another chapter! 

Reviewer: tinyonej Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start cant wait to read more. As for the details of what happened to the characters before Kylie found them I'd say you're safe so long as it's not R rated lol.